The Annotated Edition
Sonnet 130: My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun by William Shakespeare
Shakespeare takes twelve lines to playfully point out how his girlfriend doesn't fit the grandiose compliments that poets often give to women—her eyes aren't like the sun, her breath isn't like perfume, and she walks on the ground like everyone else.
- Composed
- 1609 · Renaissance
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- sonnet
- Core theme
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§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; / Coral is far more red, than her lips red:
Editor's note
Shakespeare begins by dismissing two of the most overused compliments of his time — comparing eyes to the sun and lips to coral. He isn’t being rude; he’s simply choosing honesty. The straightforwardness is intentional.
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; / If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
Editor's note
He continues the list: her skin is dun (a dull grayish-brown), not snow-white. The wire image is intentionally shocking — Elizabethan love poets often compared golden hair to fine golden wires as a compliment, so Shakespeare takes that idea and applies it literally and unflatteringly to dark hair, revealing how ridiculous the original comparison has always been.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, / But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
Editor's note
Damask roses — a blush-pink variety cherished in Elizabethan England — were often associated with a woman's rosy complexion. Shakespeare acknowledges that her cheeks don't resemble that ideal. Here, the honesty is the key point: real skin doesn't mirror roses, and pretending it does is a form of flattery that undermines both the woman and the poet.
And in some perfumes is there more delight / Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
Editor's note
The word "reeks" stands out as the poem's most intentionally jarring choice. Back in Shakespeare's day, it meant "emanates" or "issues forth," but it had an underlying hint of unpleasantness — something Shakespeare was certainly aware of. He uses this word to challenge the typical comparison of a woman's breath to sweet perfume.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know / That music hath a far more pleasing sound:
Editor's note
Her voice isn't melodic, but he still loves to hear her. This line subtly reveals the emotional core the poem has been leading to: his feelings aren't tied to her meeting an unattainable standard.
I grant I never saw a goddess go,-- / My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
Editor's note
Goddesses in classical poetry are often depicted as gliding above the earth, while his mistress walks like an ordinary person. Shakespeare presents this as a straightforward reality instead of a shortcoming, subtly honoring her humanity over mythical ideals.
And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare, / As any she belied with false compare.
Editor's note
The volta — the turn — comes in the final couplet. "Rare" signifies both precious and exceptional. "Belied with false compare" refers to being misrepresented through exaggerated comparisons. Shakespeare's point is clear: every woman celebrated with those clichéd images has been misrepresented, and his love, grounded in honest clarity, holds as much value as any of those inflated fictions.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The sun, coral, snow, roses, perfume, music
- These stock images come from the Petrarchan love poetry tradition — a collection of clichés that Elizabethan poets used repeatedly. Shakespeare includes them not to depict his mistress but to highlight them as a form of lazy, dishonest shorthand.
- Black wires
- A purposeful twist on the praise often given to golden-wire hair during that time. By using the same reasoning for dark hair, Shakespeare highlights the arbitrary and culturally charged nature of these beauty standards.
- Treads on the ground
- Walking on the earth instead of floating above it like a goddess represents our ordinary, grounded humanity. Shakespeare embraces this as something to love rather than seeing it as a flaw.
- False compare
- The poem's main focus critiques conventional poetic flattery, portraying it as a kind of deceit — directed at the woman, the reader, and love itself. Shakespeare suggests that genuine love doesn't require such embellishments.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Form
- sonnet
- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
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Key quotes
Key quotes
“My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;”
“And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.”
“I grant I never saw a goddess go,-- My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:”
“And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare, As any she belied with false compare.”
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Shakespeare, William. "Sonnet 130: My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun." 1609. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-130-my-mistress-eyes-are-nothing-like-the-sun-william-shakespeare/.
APA
Shakespeare, W. (1609). Sonnet 130: my mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-130-my-mistress-eyes-are-nothing-like-the-sun-william-shakespeare/
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1 ptIn 'Sonnet 130,' Shakespeare dismantles the blazon tradition not to insult his mistress but to redefine what genuine love looks like: by cataloguing every way she fails the hyperbolic standard, he ultimately argues that love grounded in …
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