The Annotated Edition
Sonnet 130: My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun by William Shakespeare
Shakespeare spends the entire poem pointing out how his girlfriend doesn't fit the exaggerated compliments that poets often give women—her eyes aren't like the sun, her breath isn't like perfume, and she walks on the ground like anyone else.
- Composed
- 1609 · Renaissance
- Core theme
- Art
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; / Coral is far more red, than her lips red:
Editor's note
Shakespeare starts by dismissing two of the most typical Petrarchan compliments: comparing eyes to the sun and lips to coral. He's not trying to insult his lover — instead, he's pointing out the clichés. The straightforward, almost list-like style makes it clear right away that this poem is going to take a different approach.
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; / If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
Editor's note
He goes on with the inventory. 'Dun' refers to a dull grayish-brown — contrasting sharply with the porcelain-white skin that poets usually extol. The hair-as-wires imagery is a playful jab at sonnets that referred to golden hair as 'golden wires.' His mistress has dark hair, and he uses the same wire metaphor for it, but he won't embellish it.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, / But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
Editor's note
Damask roses—a rich blend of red and white—were often used to symbolize a woman's rosy complexion. Shakespeare acknowledges having seen these roses in actual gardens, but not on her face. He isn't being cruel; he's simply being honest in a way that traditional love poetry often fails to achieve.
And in some perfumes is there more delight / Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
Editor's note
The word 'reeks' stands out as the poem's most humorous moment. Back in Shakespeare's day, it just meant 'emanates' or 'breathes out,' but it had a distinctly unpleasant connotation — and Shakespeare was fully aware of this choice. Her breath isn't sweet; he makes that clear.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know / That music hath a far more pleasing sound:
Editor's note
Even her voice, which he truly enjoys, can't quite compare to music. This is the tenderest moment in the list of 'failures' — he says he *loves* hearing her speak, even though he knows she's no nightingale. Affection and honesty coexist beautifully.
I grant I never saw a goddess go,-- / My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
Editor's note
Goddesses in classical poetry were described as gliding above the earth. His mistress walks like anyone else. The couplet structure here (grant / ground) creates a wry, almost dismissive rhythm — naturally, she's not a goddess. She's just a person.
And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare, / As any she belied with false compare.
Editor's note
The volta — the turn — comes here and changes everything. 'Belied with false compare' refers to being deceived or misrepresented through exaggerated comparisons. Shakespeare suggests that his love is just as genuine and valuable as any love praised in flowery, insincere language. The honesty itself is the compliment. By choosing not to lie, he shows her the utmost respect.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The sun, coral, snow, roses
- These images come from Petrarchan love poetry, where a woman is idealized by being compared to flawless natural objects. Shakespeare includes these comparisons to reveal them as hollow clichés instead of genuine observations.
- Black wires (her hair)
- Golden hair, often referred to as 'golden wires,' was a common feature in Petrarchan poetry. By maintaining the wire metaphor but changing its color to black and unadorned, Shakespeare suggests that he perceives his mistress in her true form, rather than as an idealized figure.
- Treading on the ground
- Walking on the earth instead of gliding like a goddess captures the poem's main image of true humanity. It represents all the qualities that make his mistress a real person rather than just a poetic ideal — and it's shown as something to cherish, not mourn.
- False compare
- The phrase in the final line identifies the poem's true target: the entire system of flattering and dishonest comparisons that Renaissance love poetry depended on. Shakespeare presents his own poem as the remedy.
§06Form & structure
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- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
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