Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Why it works
This opening quatrain follows the traditional Shakespearean ABAB rhyme scheme, with 'day / May' and 'temperate / date' establishing the pattern, while each line maintains a loose iambic rhythm of ten syllables. Shakespeare kicks things off with a question—a classic technique that introduces the volta—and quickly undermines the comparison he just made. The brevity here is key: in just four lines, he presents a thesis, introduces a doubt, and pushes the argument into the next quatrain.