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Story Rater an honest score for your fiction

Paste any short story or chapter and get an honest rating with sub-scores for prose, character, plot, originality, emotion, and dialogue — plus what's working and what to fix. Calibrated for amateur work, not the canon.

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The Kitchen

A working draft, rated honestly

The kitchen was exactly how she remembered it, which was somehow the worst part. June set her bag down on the chair that had always been hers. "You came," her aunt said, not turning from the stove. …Excerpted — the same sample draft the Story Checker examines, read here for score.
Overall
7 / 10A quiet, controlled reunion scene that trusts its objects — held back by a familiar premise and one over-explained beat.
Sub-scores
Emotion8Dialogue8Character8Prose7Originality6Plot6
What's working
The dialogue does real characterizing work in nine words, and the two waiting cups are the kind of concrete detail that earns emotion instead of announcing it. The close-third POV never slips.
What to improve
The estranged-relative-returns premise is well-worn, and the excerpt tells us the cups' meaning ("certainty was a kind of love") right after showing it — pick one. Plot will need a complication soon; nothing here is at stake yet.
Verdict
Strong instincts, light on event: keep the restraint, cut the explanation, and give June a harder choice before page two.

A representative rating. Scores are calibrated for amateur and working drafts — the canon isn't the yardstick. Paste your story above for the same treatment.

How we score

01

Prose

Sentence craft, voice, and clarity. We reward writing that controls rhythm and word choice over flat, functional reporting — and we mark down purple excess just as fast.

02

Character

Depth, distinct voices, and motivation. Characters who want something specific and act on it score higher than names that exist only to move the plot.

03

Plot

Structure, pacing, and tension. We look for scenes that turn, stakes that build, and a shape the reader can feel — not a flat sequence of events.

04

Originality

Freshness of premise and execution. A familiar setup told a new way still wins; a stock idea handled in the obvious way loses points.

05

Emotion

Whether the stakes land. Earned feeling beats stated feeling — grief shown through a small detail beats a character announcing they are sad.

06

Dialogue

Whether people sound natural, distinct, and purposeful. Lines that reveal character or move the scene score higher than on-the-nose exposition.

Calibration

We calibrate for amateur fiction, not the canon. Average reasonable amateur work scores 5.5–7. Strong amateur work 7–8. Real craftsmanship 8.5+. Anything above 9 is rare. Chekhov and Morrison aren't on this scale — your draft is.

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