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Simile

A move poets keep coming back to.

What is a simile in poetry? This question often arises when a teacher points to a line like "my love is *like* a red, red rose" and asks you to identify what's going on. A simile is a direct comparison between two unlike things, using the words *like* or *as* to clearly establish the connection. That's all there is to it. It pairs two dissimilar items side by side so you can see their shared qualities.

Definition

Poets utilize similes because our brains grasp new concepts by relating them to things we're already familiar with. If a poet aims to convey the heaviness of grief, they have the option to describe it abstractly for many lines, or they can say grief moves through you *like* floodwater through a house — and suddenly, you understand exactly what they mean. The simile achieves in one phrase what a whole paragraph of explanation fails to do. The key distinction between a simile and a straightforward description is the element of surprise. A strong simile presents a comparison you might not have considered, yet once you read it, it feels inevitable. That space between surprise and recognition is where the joy lies. Poets also employ similes to influence tone; a gentle simile slows readers down and creates an emotional atmosphere, while a jarring or humorous one can disrupt the mood in just one line. This device is simple enough for a child to grasp but profound enough that Homer crafted entire epics around its extended forms.

Annotated examples

From the corpus · I to II.
  1. I.from the corpus

    On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before.

    Why this works

    Poe's simile sneaks in among longer lines, but it carries significant weight. The speaker anticipates that the raven will disappear *as* his hopes have already done — connecting a tangible bird to a deeper narrative of loss. This comparison makes the raven seem less like a living creature and more like a reflection of the speaker's inner turmoil. It also blurs the lines of time: past sorrow and current dread merge into one moment, which is precisely the psychological snare the poem is constructing.
    from The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe
  2. II.from the corpus

    The fog comes on little cat feet.

    Why this works

    Sandburg's simile operates structurally instead of relying on words like 'like' or 'as' — it serves as an implied comparison embedded within the metaphor, and the entire logic of the poem hinges on this simile's premise: fog moves *like* a cat. The comparison gained its acclaim due to its physical accuracy. Fog does indeed come in quietly, close to the ground, then pauses to survey its surroundings before rising. The cat imagery transforms an abstract weather phenomenon into something lively and intentional, providing the reader with a vivid sensory snapshot in just six words.
    from Fog by Carl Sandburg

Reader’s guide

How to spot simile

Reading for similes mainly involves training your eye to recognize a few key signals: 1. **Look for *like* or *as*.** These are the classic indicators. Not every instance of *like* or *as* indicates a simile (sometimes *like* simply means "for example"), but when they link two different things in a comparison, you've got a simile. 2. **Ensure the two items being compared come from different categories.** "Her voice was like her mother's voice" isn't a simile — it simply shows a resemblance. However, "Her voice was like gravel rolling in a tin can" is a simile. 3. **Listen for *than* and *so...as* phrases.** Expressions like "swifter than an arrow" and "not so patient as a stone" are also similes, albeit in less common forms. 4. **Be alert for extended similes.** Occasionally, a poet starts a comparison with *like* or *as* and then elaborates on it over several lines. The initial signal remains *like* or *as*, but the comparison continues to unfold. 5. **Pay attention to what the comparison evokes in you, not just what you visualize.** A simile typically carries emotional weight — the choice of vehicle (the item being compared) reveals the poem's attitude toward its subject.

Writer’s guide

How to write with simile

Writing a strong simile involves three essential steps: 1. **Select a vehicle from a completely different domain than your subject.** When discussing something emotional or abstract, opt for something physical and concrete — and vice versa. The greater the distance between the two domains, the more impactful the comparison becomes upon landing. *Example: Her patience was like a river that learned to navigate around every stone without complaint.* 2. **Ensure the comparison earns its place by being specific rather than general.** "Fast as lightning" has lost its punch due to overuse. Identify the precise quality you want to convey and choose a vehicle that embodies that quality exclusively. *Example: The silence after the argument settled like flour — fine, white, enveloping everything.* 3. **Allow the simile to serve a dual purpose by selecting a vehicle that introduces a second layer of meaning.** The most effective similes not only clarify but also comment, judge, or reframe the subject in a way that a straightforward description cannot achieve. *Example: He smiled at the news like a house smiles once the last guest has finally gone home.*

Poems that turn on simile

From the public-domain corpus

Adjacent in Figurative language

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Postscript

Frequent definitions