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Sonnet 73: That time of year thou mayst in me behold by William Shakespeare
Shakespeare's speaker tells the one he loves: look at me and you'll notice I'm aging and running out of time.
- Composed
- 1609 · Renaissance
- Form
- sonnet
- Core theme
- Love
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
That time of year thou mayst in me behold / When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang
Editor's note
The first quatrain presents a single extended metaphor: the speaker embodies autumn. The hesitant wording "or none, or few" reflects how leaves cling to a tree — sparse, unpredictable, and nearly gone. The phrase "bare ruin'd choirs" creates a powerful image, as the empty branches resemble the roofless choir lofts of churches that were destroyed during the Reformation, once filled with the sound of singing. The birds that "late" (recently) sang in those spaces symbolize the speaker's own youth and vitality, which have now faded away.
In me thou see'st the twilight of such day / As after sunset fadeth in the west;
Editor's note
The second quatrain moves from talking about the year to focusing on the day. Twilight is that short moment after the sun has set — the speaker has moved beyond sunset. The "black night," referred to as "Death's second self," sneaks in to snuff out even the dimmest light. Sleep acts as a practice run for death, and the phrase "seals up all in rest" carries a sense of finality that feels more like slamming a coffin lid than settling down on a pillow.
In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, / That on the ashes of his youth doth lie,
Editor's note
The third quatrain narrows its focus even more — from a season, to a day, to the final flickers of a single fire. The fire lies on the ashes of its own past, a quietly devastating thought: the same fuel that kept the flame alive is now what extinguishes it. "Consum'd with that which it was nourish'd by" highlights the harsh irony of aging — life itself is what drains you.
This thou perceiv'st, which makes thy love more strong, / To love that well, which thou must leave ere long.
Editor's note
The closing couplet introduces the turn. Shakespeare doesn't seek pity or reassurance — he offers a straightforward observation: you witness all of this, and it strengthens your love instead of lessening it. The word "leave" carries a deliberate ambiguity. It might suggest that the beloved will outlast the speaker, losing him to death, or it could imply that the speaker will depart from the beloved upon his death. In either case, the ticking clock intensifies the love.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Autumn / yellow leaves
- The season of dying-back symbolizes the speaker's old age. The hesitant phrasing — "yellow leaves, or none, or few" — gives the image a sense of true fragility instead of just being decorative.
- Bare ruin'd choirs
- Empty tree branches look like the roofless choir sections of long-gone English monasteries. They embody a double loss: the absence of birdsong (youth) and the disappearance of a religious and cultural world that Shakespeare's audience would have known well.
- Twilight
- The fading light after sunset symbolizes the final stage of life—not the sudden moment of death, but the gradual dimming that comes before it.
- Black night / Death's second self
- Sleep is depicted as a twin of death. It "seals up" everything, hinting at both a state of rest and an irreversible ending.
- The dying fire
- The most intimate of the three images. The fire, devouring itself in its own ashes, illustrates the paradox of aging: the very life force that once animated the speaker is the same force that has ultimately reduced him to ash.
- Ashes
- The remnants of the speaker's youth — both the physical fuel that the fire has consumed and a representation of all that is lost and irretrievable.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Form
- sonnet
- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
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Key quotes
Key quotes
“Bare ruin'd choirs, where late the sweet birds sang.”
“Death's second self, that seals up all in rest.”
“Consum'd with that which it was nourish'd by.”
“This thou perceiv'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well, which thou must leave ere long.”
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MLA
Shakespeare, William. "Sonnet 73: That time of year thou mayst in me behold." 1609. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-73-that-time-of-year-thou-mayst-in-me-behold-william-shakespeare/.
APA
Shakespeare, W. (1609). Sonnet 73: that time of year thou mayst in me behold. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-73-that-time-of-year-thou-mayst-in-me-behold-william-shakespeare/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Sonnet 73,' Shakespeare uses a sequence of three contracting metaphors — a dying year, a fading day, a smothering fire — to argue that the speaker's acute awareness of his own mortality does not drive the beloved away but instead …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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