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Sonnet 29: When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes by William Shakespeare
The speaker is having a terrible day — feeling like a failure, envious of those around him, and convinced that even God isn’t listening.
- Composed
- 1609 · Renaissance
- Form
- sonnet
- Core theme
- Despair
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes / I all alone beweep my outcast state,
Editor's note
The opening quatrain paints a bleak picture: the speaker is at his lowest point. "Disgrace with fortune" indicates that his luck has soured, while "men's eyes" suggests his reputation has taken a nosedive as well. He’s crying in solitude— "beweep" is a stark, almost harsh word that conveys deep, raw emotion rather than composed sorrow. "Outcast state" reveals his sense of total alienation from society.
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries, / And look upon myself, and curse my fate,
Editor's note
He prays, but heaven isn't listening — "deaf heaven" paints a striking, almost bitter picture. "Bootless" signifies useless or fruitless, so his prayers feel like they're going nowhere. He then looks within and despises what he finds. This is self-pity at its peak: he's cursing his own existence.
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope, / Featur'd like him, like him with friends possess'd,
Editor's note
Now comes the comparison spiral. He glances around, feeling envious of everyone: this guy has better prospects, that one has better looks, and another enjoys a wide circle of friends. The repeated "like him, like him" captures the restless, darting nature of envy—he can't focus on just one thing to desire. "Rich in hope" refers to someone with a bright future, something the speaker feels is missing in his own life.
Desiring this man's art, and that man's scope, / With what I most enjoy contented least;
Editor's note
He envies the talents ("art") and opportunities ("scope") of other men. The last line of this quatrain hits hard: even what he usually loves brings him no joy at the moment. This is the hallmark of deep despair — the things that typically save you no longer work.
Yet in these thoughts my self almost despising, / Haply I think on thee,-- and then my state,
Editor's note
The volta—the turn—arrives here. The word "Yet" indicates this shift. "Haply," meaning by chance or luck, is key: the beloved's thought isn't something forced or willed; it simply comes. And once it does, everything changes. Shakespeare keeps us in suspense over the line break, making us wait to see what "my state" will become.
Like to the lark at break of day arising / From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;
Editor's note
This is one of Shakespeare's most stunning images. The lark was the highest-flying songbird known to people in Elizabethan times, celebrated for its song at dawn. The speaker's soul rises just like that bird — soaring from "sullen earth" (the heavy, grey ground of his despair) directly to "heaven's gate." Notice how heaven, which felt "deaf" just eight lines earlier, is now a place of joyful arrival. Love has achieved what prayer could not.
For thy sweet love remember'd such wealth brings / That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
Editor's note
The closing couplet wraps up the argument effectively. The memory of being loved is called "wealth" — a clear nod to the financial and social envy present in the earlier quatrains. All that status and fortune he once wanted? It feels worthless now. He wouldn't trade his situation for that of a king. It's a total reversal of the opening, accomplished with just one thought.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Deaf heaven
- Heaven's silence captures the speaker's feeling of complete abandonment—not only by people but also by the divine. This intensifies the later image of "heaven's gate," as love triumphs where prayer fell short.
- The lark
- The lark symbolizes dawn, joy, and ascendance during the Elizabethan era. It makes its nest on the ground yet sings at the peak of its flight, embodying the idea of a soul lifting itself from earthly struggles toward something greater. Shakespeare references it in other works, especially in *Romeo and Juliet*, to signify morning and fresh starts.
- Wealth / kings
- Money and royal power frame the poem's depiction of worldly success. The speaker yearns for them at the beginning but dismisses them by the end. Love reshapes the idea of "wealth" — revealing that it's something no king's treasury can possess.
- Sullen earth
- The earth feels "sullen" — dull, heavy, and resentful — mirroring the speaker's inner turmoil. It's the tangible embodiment of despair that the lark (and the speaker's spirit) breaks free from as soon as love fills his mind.
- Bootless cries
- "Bootless" refers to being without profit or result. The image of futile crying to a deaf sky conveys the speaker's sense of total disconnection and helplessness — a feeling that love can quickly erase.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Form
- sonnet
- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
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Key quotes
Key quotes
“When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes I all alone beweep my outcast state,”
“And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,”
“Haply I think on thee,-- and then my state, Like to the lark at break of day arising From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;”
“For thy sweet love remember'd such wealth brings That then I scorn to change my state with kings.”
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Shakespeare, William. "Sonnet 29: When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes." 1609. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-29-when-in-disgrace-with-fortune-and-mens-eyes-william-shakespeare/.
APA
Shakespeare, W. (1609). Sonnet 29: when, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/sonnet-29-when-in-disgrace-with-fortune-and-mens-eyes-william-shakespeare/
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1 ptIn 'Sonnet 29,' Shakespeare uses the volta's abrupt shift from self-pity to remembered love to argue that human connection is not merely a comfort but a transformative force, powerful enough to convert worthlessness into wealth and make a …
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