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Sonnet 29: When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes by William Shakespeare
The speaker is having a terrible day—he feels like a failure and an outcast, wishing he could be someone else entirely.
- Composed
- 1609 · Renaissance
- Core theme
- Hope
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When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes / I all alone beweep my outcast state,
Editor's note
The opening couplet paints a vivid picture: the speaker is struggling and feels judged and shunned by the world around him. "Beweep" is an archaic term that simply means to weep over — he is genuinely crying alone about how far he has fallen. The phrase "outcast state" reveals that he feels isolated from society, not merely experiencing bad luck.
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries, / And look upon myself, and curse my fate,
Editor's note
He tries praying but receives no response — heaven feels "deaf" to him. "Bootless" means useless or without result, so his prayers seem to fall flat. He looks inward and curses his own fate, which heightens his sense of isolation: not even God is listening.
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope, / Featur'd like him, like him with friends possess'd,
Editor's note
Now comes the comparison spiral. He glances at other men and longs for what they possess — more promising futures, more appealing appearances, stronger social ties. The repeated "like him, like him" captures the restless, envious mind flitting from one person to another.
Desiring this man's art, and that man's scope, / With what I most enjoy contented least;
Editor's note
He even feels envious of the talents and opportunities that other men have. The harshest line is the final one: the things he usually loves offer him no comfort whatsoever. This marks the emotional low point of the poem — a complete dissatisfaction with his own life.
Yet in these thoughts my self almost despising, / Haply I think on thee,-- and then my state,
Editor's note
"Yet" marks the pivotal moment of the entire sonnet. Just when the speaker hits the peak of self-loathing, a thought of the beloved surfaces — "haply" suggests it comes by chance, giving it a spontaneous feel rather than a contrived one. The dash following "thee" acts as a pause, a breath, right before everything shifts.
Like to the lark at break of day arising / From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;
Editor's note
This is one of Shakespeare's most striking images. The lark is known for its uplifting dawn song, rising directly from the ground into the sky. The speaker's mood mirrors this ascent — shifting from "sullen earth" (representing depression and heaviness) to "heaven's gate" (symbolizing pure joy) in a heartbeat. Earlier, heaven seemed deaf to his pleas; now, his soul is singing right at its entrance.
For thy sweet love remember'd such wealth brings / That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
Editor's note
The closing couplet encapsulates the poem's message. The speaker values the memory of love so highly that they wouldn't trade places with a king. This flips the sentiment expressed in the first eight lines: where he once longed to be someone else, now he desires to be only himself, simply because he is loved.
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§05Symbols & metaphors
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- The lark
- The lark rising at dawn serves as the poem's key image for sudden emotional change. Larks are famous for taking off straight into the sky while singing — a fitting representation of how the speaker's mood lifts the instant he thinks of his beloved.
- Sullen earth
- The earth from which the lark rises symbolizes the speaker's feelings of depression and self-hatred. The word "sullen" is significant—it conveys a sense of gloom and resentment, capturing his mood perfectly in the first eight lines.
- Heaven's gate
- Heaven shows up twice in the poem, but in contrasting ways. Initially, it seems deaf and indifferent to the speaker's prayers. By the end, though, his soul is singing at its very gate — love has accomplished what prayer could not.
- Kings
- Kings symbolize the highest level of wealth, status, and power — everything the speaker envied in others. Rejecting the idea of trading places with a king is the strongest way to express that love is more valuable than any material gain.
- Bootless cries
- "Bootless" — meaning without result — reflects the speaker's feeling of cosmic abandonment. His prayers yield no results. This word subtly establishes a contrast with the effortless rescue that a single thought of love offers later.
- Wealth
- Shakespeare frequently incorporates financial language — phrases like "rich in hope," "wealth," and "kings" — to present love as a type of currency. The poem suggests that true satisfaction comes only from emotional wealth.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
§07Historical context
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