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He Wishes for the Cloths of Heaven by W. B. Yeats
A speaker expresses his love by saying that if he had the wealth, he would lay the sparkling fabric of the night sky at their feet as a gift.
- Poet
- W. B. Yeats
- Composed
- 1899 · Victorian
- Core theme
- Beauty
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths, / Enwrought with golden and silver light,
Editor's note
The speaker begins with a wish — a familiar 'if only' gesture. He envisions the sky as a lavishly adorned fabric, interwoven with the gold and silver of stars and moonlight. The term *enwrought* means woven into, suggesting that the light is not merely resting on the fabric; it's integrated into its very essence. This creates an extravagant, almost fairy-tale level of generosity.
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths / Of night and light and the half-light,
Editor's note
Yeats paints three shades of sky — the deep blue of dusk, the murky dim of twilight, and the full dark of night — to reveal the extent of what he's willing to give. The repetition of 'and... and... and' slows down the lines, encouraging you to savor each shade. It also reflects the gradual way light fades, one step at a time.
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
Editor's note
The colon here marks a turning point. After two and a half lines of crafting this incredible imaginary gift, the speaker reveals his plan: to lay it on the ground for someone else to walk on. This gesture shows complete devotion — taking something invaluable and turning it into a doormat out of love.
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
Editor's note
The word *but* brings us back to reality. The speaker isn't draped in heavenly cloths. His poverty is both physical and emotional — he lacks wealth and power, and all he can share is his inner life. The semicolon propels the thought onward instead of allowing it to sink into self-pity.
I have spread my dreams under your feet; / Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.
Editor's note
The poem transitions from a wish to a reality. He hasn't merely dreamed of sharing his aspirations — he has done so. The final line stands out as one of the most subtly heartbreaking in English poetry. It neither demands nor desperately pleads; it just requests care. The repeated use of 'tread' and 'dreams' drives home the sense of vulnerability without ever raising its voice.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The heavens' embroidered cloths
- The night sky, envisioned as a lavish woven fabric, symbolizes everything the speaker longs for: wealth, power, and the chance to present a magnificent gift to the one he loves.
- Gold and silver light
- Starlight and moonlight appear like precious metals. They represent a beauty that feels genuine yet unattainable — the sort of splendor that remains just beyond the grasp of an everyday person.
- Dreams
- The speaker's dreams serve as a replacement for material wealth. They reflect his whole inner world — his hopes, imagination, and ability to love — all of which he exposes and makes physically vulnerable by placing them beneath his feet.
- Feet / treading
- Feet hold a careless kind of power. Stepping on something can crush it, often unintentionally. This image serves as a reminder that love demands active gentleness, rather than merely the absence of cruelty.
- Light and half-light
- The gradations of light—full, dim, and dark—reflect the various moods and states of love: the bright joy, the uncertain longing, and the shadowy fear of loss.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Rhyme
- ABABCDCD
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
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Key quotes
Key quotes
“Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths, Enwrought with golden and silver light,”
“The blue and the dim and the dark cloths Of night and light and the half-light,”
“But I, being poor, have only my dreams;”
“I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.”
Citation
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MLA
Yeats, W. B. "He Wishes for the Cloths of Heaven." 1899. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/he-wishes-for-the-cloths-of-heaven-william-butler-yeats/.
APA
Yeats, W. B. (1899). He wishes for the cloths of heaven. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/he-wishes-for-the-cloths-of-heaven-william-butler-yeats/
Text source: en.wikisource.org
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