The Annotated Edition
On Being Brought from Africa to America by Phillis Wheatley
A young enslaved woman contemplates her journey from Africa to America, viewing it as a spiritual path toward Christianity.
- Poet
- Phillis Wheatley
- Composed
- 1773 · Long 18th century
- Core theme
- Faith
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
'T was mercy brought me from my pagan land, / Taught my benighted soul to understand
Editor's note
Wheatley begins by referring to her forced removal from Africa as an act of "mercy"—a term her Christian audience was likely to accept. She uses phrases like "pagan land" and "benighted soul" (with "benighted" meaning left in darkness or ignorance), which were common in 18th-century Christian discourse about non-Christian peoples. Scholars discuss whether Wheatley genuinely believed these ideas or if she used them strategically to ensure her poem reached an audience. Regardless, she adopts the voice that her audience trusted, allowing her to present the poem's true argument effectively later on.
That there's a God — that there's a Saviour too; / Once I redemption neither sought nor knew.
Editor's note
These lines wrap up the conversion story: she recognizes God and Christ now, admitting she was unaware before. The straightforward, almost catechism-like phrasing ("there's a God — that there's a Saviour too") reflects the fundamental teachings of Christianity. The dash after "God" creates a brief pause, suggesting that this revelation still holds significance. This marks the turning point of the poem — the "before" and "after" of her spiritual journey.
Some view our sable race with scornful eye— / 'Their color is a diabolic dye.'
Editor's note
Here, the poem takes a turn. Wheatley moves from sharing her personal experience to making a social critique. "Sable" refers to black, and "diabolic dye" was an actual slur used at the time — suggesting that dark skin was associated with the devil or the curse of Cain. By placing this phrase in quotation marks, Wheatley distances herself from it and invites readers to reflect on it. She mirrors their own ugliness back to them.
Remember, Christians, Negroes black as Cain / May be refined, and join the angelic train.
Editor's note
The final couplet is the poem's most striking moment. Wheatley speaks directly to white Christians — "Remember" is a command, not just a suggestion. She brings up Cain, the biblical figure whose "mark" some have used to justify the enslavement of Black people, and then turns the argument on its head: even Cain's descendants can be "refined" (purified, saved) and attain heaven. If Christianity's own teachings claim that all souls can be redeemed, then racism within the church becomes a contradiction. She uses the Bible to challenge the way it's been misused.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Pagan land / benighted soul
- These phrases reflect the colonial Christian belief that Africa was spiritually dark and in need of salvation. Wheatley uses them to engage with her audience, but their inclusion also highlights how deeply the ideology of slavery influenced the language she had at her disposal.
- Sable race
- **After (Humanized):** "Sable" (black) is Wheatley's respectful term for her own people. It steers clear of the derogatory language of her time while directly acknowledging race. This phrase emphasizes a shared identity during a period when enslaved individuals were often seen as isolated rather than part of a community. **Summary of Changes Made:** - Replaced "dignified word" with "respectful term" for a more natural tone. - Changed "avoids the slurs of the day" to "steers clear of the derogatory language of her time" for clarity. - Altered "asserts collective identity" to "emphasizes a shared identity" for a smoother flow. - Substituted "routinely treated as individuals without community" with "often seen as isolated rather than part of a community" for a more relatable expression.
- Diabolic dye
- Quoted directly from the racist logic of the time, this phrase reflects the false theology that dehumanizes Black people. By using quotation marks, Wheatley presents it as something to be scrutinized and dismissed instead of accepted.
- Cain
- The biblical figure Cain was referenced in pro-slavery theology as the alleged ancestor of Black Africans, with his "mark" being reinterpreted as dark skin and his curse portrayed as enslavement. Wheatley flips this symbol on its head: even if one accepts the comparison to Cain, Christian doctrine asserts that redemption is accessible to everyone — which ultimately undermines the racist argument.
- Angelic train
- The procession of angels entering heaven symbolizes complete spiritual equality in the afterlife—a realm free from the racial hierarchies that defined colonial America. Wheatley argues that if heaven is accessible to everyone, then the earthly disdain for Black individuals contradicts Christian principles.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic pentameter
- Rhyme
- AABBCCDD
§07Historical context
Historical context
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