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I like to see it lap the Miles by Emily Dickinson
Dickinson depicts a steam train without ever directly mentioning it, employing the metaphor of a massive, strong horse to illustrate the locomotive's journey through the landscape.
- Poet
- Emily Dickinson
- Composed
- 1891 · Victorian
- Core theme
- Art
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
I Like to see it lap the miles, / And lick the valleys up,
Editor's note
Dickinson begins by describing the train as a massive creature drinking from the landscape. The choice of verbs like "lap" and "lick" evokes images of cats or horses, clearly establishing the main metaphor: this machine is alive. The train doesn't simply move *through* the valleys — it devours them.
And stop to feed itself at tanks; / And then, prodigious, step
Editor's note
Steam locomotives took on water at tank stops, and Dickinson likens this to an animal pausing to drink. The word "prodigious" — meaning enormous and extraordinary — suggests that whatever this creature is, it exists on a scale beyond everyday life. The enjambment into "step" maintains the momentum, mirroring the train's continuous motion.
Around a pile of mountains, / And, supercilious, peer
Editor's note
"Supercilious" refers to an attitude of arrogant superiority, and it’s a fitting choice of words: the train winds around mountains, appearing to look down on the tiny human world beneath. The elevated track and immense power of the locomotive lend it a sense of aristocratic disdain for the landscape it traverses.
In shanties by the sides of roads; / And then a quarry pare
Editor's note
The train moves past the simple roadside shanties, highlighting the working-class communities that the railroad passes through. Then, it "pares" a quarry, cutting through rock to fit snugly between the stone walls. This evokes the image of a force so powerful it alters the earth to fit its needs.
To fit its sides, and crawl between, / Complaining all the while
Editor's note
Here the tone takes on a comedic twist. The mighty train, despite its strength, has to squeeze through narrow rock cuts and "grumbles" the entire way — a nod to the hissing, clanking, and groaning sounds that a steam engine produces. This powerful creature is anything but quiet or dignified about its struggle.
In horrid, hooting stanza; / Then chase itself down hill
Editor's note
"Horrid, hooting stanza" is one of Dickinson's most playful choices: she refers to the train's noise as a *stanza*, which is a unit of poetry. It’s a clever nod — the poem's structure is likened to the rhythmic, repetitive chugging of the engine. The train then follows its own path downhill, embodying the unstoppable momentum of a locomotive in descent.
And neigh like Boanerges; / Then, punctual as a star,
Editor's note
"Boanerges" is a biblical name that translates to "sons of thunder," which Jesus bestowed upon the apostles James and John. The sound of the train's whistle is likened to this thunderous roar, almost granting the machine a divine quality. Then, in an instant, it’s described as "punctual as a star" — the train embodies the reliability and precision of celestial mechanics, transitioning from wild power to clockwork order in one breath.
Stop—docile and omnipotent— / At its own stable door.
Editor's note
The final image wraps up the horse metaphor: the train arrives at its "stable door." The combination of "docile and omnipotent" captures the poem's main tension in just two words — it’s both incredibly powerful and completely obedient. The dash between them is classic Dickinson, pausing to let the contradiction linger for a moment before the poem concludes.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The train as horse
- The entire poem revolves around this metaphor. By portraying a steam locomotive with animal-like language—lapping, licking, feeding, neighing, and returning to its stable—Dickinson makes industrial power feel more domestic. The machine transforms into something natural and familiar, rather than foreign or intimidating.
- The stable door
- The station as stable is the metaphor's payoff. It implies that despite the train's immense, continent-crossing force, it is ultimately controlled and directed. It returns home. This image subtly portrays human technology as akin to a well-trained animal, dutifully serving its master.
- Boanerges
- This biblical reference to "sons of thunder" elevates the train to almost mythical status. The locomotive's whistle isn't merely loud — it resonates with a thunderous quality that echoes scripture. Dickinson uses this imagery to imply that modern machinery now possesses a power that was once thought to belong only to the divine or the elemental forces of nature.
- The star
- "Punctual as a star" links the train's timetable to the dependable movements of celestial bodies. Stars move along set, predictable paths—just like the railroad schedule. This phrase suggests that human engineering has reached a level of order that mirrors the cosmos.
- The quarry
- The quarry symbolizes the tough earth that the railroad had to carve through to come into being. The train "pares" it—a gentle term for a harsh action. This choice of words subtly recognizes that the landscape was altered, often violently, to accommodate this new force.
- The hooting stanza
- Referring to the train's noise as a "stanza" is Dickinson's most deliberate symbol. It connects the poem's rhythmic structure to the engine's mechanical beats, implying that both poetry and machinery have a commonality — they are both systems of measured, repeating sounds that progress toward a destination.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- common meter
- Rhyme
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§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem actually about? Is it really about a train?
Yes — it's a riddle-poem about a steam locomotive that cleverly avoids using the words "train" or "engine." Dickinson incorporates animal imagery throughout, making the poem an engaging guessing game. The hints are all present: lapping miles, pausing at water tanks, squeezing through quarries, and reaching a "stable door" (the station).
Why does Dickinson never name the train?
Leaving the subject unnamed is a conscious decision that gives the poem a riddle-like quality and sustains the animal metaphor throughout. If she had written, "I like to see the train lap the miles," the horse imagery would come off as contrived. By keeping the word out, she allows both the creature and the machine to coexist in the reader's imagination.
What does 'Boanerges' mean?
It's a biblical name from the Gospel of Mark, meaning "sons of thunder" — the nickname Jesus gave to the apostles James and John. Dickinson uses it to describe the train's whistle or steam blast: a sound so loud and powerful that it merits a name linked to divine thunder. There's a bit of humor in this choice, too, as it gives the machine an unexpectedly grand biblical title.
What does 'docile and omnipotent' mean, and why are those two words together?
"Omnipotent" refers to being all-powerful, while "docile" describes someone or something that is obedient and easy to manage. The poem's key tension arises from placing these terms together: the train represents an almost boundless force, yet it halts precisely at designated points and times. This captures a true essence of industrial machinery — it is impressive in its strength, yet completely tamed by human design.
What is the poem's meter and why does it feel so rhythmic?
The poem follows common meter, with alternating lines of eight and six syllables, which is the same hymn meter Dickinson frequently uses in her writing. This meter is typical of Protestant hymns and nursery rhymes, lending the poem a lively, energetic quality — reminiscent of the rhythmic sound of a train on its tracks. The structure and the theme complement one another.
What does 'horrid, hooting stanza' mean?
It describes the noise of a steam engine — the hissing, hooting, and clanking of a locomotive pushing through a narrow rock cut. However, Dickinson refers to it as a "stanza," a term from poetry. This is a clever play on words: the poem likens its own structure to the train's mechanical rhythm, implying that both are types of rhythmic, repeating sounds.
Is this poem pro-technology or critical of the railroad?
Neither, really. Dickinson doesn't preach. She observes the train like you would a magnificent creature — with curiosity, delight, and a touch of awe. There's a fleeting moment when the train glances "superciliously" at the roadside shanties, suggesting the social upheaval railroads brought about, but she doesn't linger on that. The poem focuses more on how the train moves than on its societal implications.
Why does the poem end at the 'stable door'?
The stable door represents the train station, bringing the horse metaphor full circle at the end of the poem. After all that frantic, expansive travel, the locomotive finally arrives home and comes to a halt — punctual and compliant. This creates a satisfying structural conclusion: the poem starts with the train moving and finishes with it at rest, reflecting the journey it describes.
Key quotes
Key quotes
“I Like to see it lap the miles, And lick the valleys up,”
“prodigious, step Around a pile of mountains, And, supercilious, peer In shanties by the sides of roads;”
“In horrid, hooting stanza;”
“And neigh like Boanerges;”
“Stop—docile and omnipotent— At its own stable door.”
Citation
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MLA
Dickinson, Emily. "I like to see it lap the Miles." 1891. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/i-like-to-see-it-lap-the-miles-emily-dickinson/.
APA
Dickinson, E. (1891). I like to see it lap the miles. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/i-like-to-see-it-lap-the-miles-emily-dickinson/
Text source: en.wikisource.org
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