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Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12

As I Lay Dying — a five-lesson scheme of work

This sequence starts by introducing students to Faulkner's innovative multi-voice style, then progresses through the three main phases of the novel's structure: Addie's death and the family's preparations (Chs. 1–8), the disastrous river crossing and its aftermath (Chs. 9–22), and the arrival in Jefferson, laden with harsh ironies (Chs. 23–25). Students engage in close readings of specific narrators' voices, analyze how the form conveys meaning, explore Addie's views on language in relation to the novel's silences, and craft a detailed analytical response. By the end, the class will be able to discuss how Faulkner employs narrative perspective, syntax, and structure to shape themes of identity, grief, and communication failure within a Southern Gothic context.

Objectives

  • Analyse how Faulkner uses fifteen distinct narrative voices to construct competing versions of identity and truth across the novel.
  • Explain how Cash's numbered lists (Chs. 8 and 15) and Vardaman's fragmented monologues (Chs. 14 and 23) use form to enact psychological states rather than simply describe them.
  • Trace how Addie's monologue (Ch. 21) retrospectively reframes the novel's treatment of language, love, and the gap between words and deeds.
  • Write an evidenced analytical paragraph that embeds and interrogates quotation from a named passage, using subject terminology precisely.
  • Evaluate how the river-crossing sequence (Chs. 11, 16, 19, 22) and the barn-fire chapter (Ch. 24) use setting and action to expose each character's competing motivations.
  • Assess how Faulkner's Southern Gothic context — agrarian poverty, religious hypocrisy, bodily decay — shapes the novel's treatment of sacrifice and the journey motif.

The sequence

  1. Lesson 1: Fifteen Voices, One Death: Form and Perspective in Chapters 1–7

    60 min · ch. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
    Do now

    On the sheet before you, you'll find three brief excerpts — one from Chapter 1 (Darl), another from Chapter 2 (Cora), and the last from Chapter 5 (Dewey Dell). Without knowing who the speaker is, write a single sentence capturing the personality you perceive based solely on the voice. What word or phrase stands out the most in conveying that personality?

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of Darl's opening sentence in Chapter 1: 'Jewel and I come up from the field, following the path in single file.' Notice how the unexpected emotional tone—without any reference to Addie's dying, focusing instead on spatial details—highlights Darl's detached, almost cinematic perspective. The cottonhouse and barn are depicted with a surveyor's precision, creating a stark contrast to Jewel's elaborate nineteen-line fantasy in Chapter 3, where he imagines being 'alone on a high hill' with Addie—overflowing with emotion but lacking any spatial context. This illustrates Faulkner's technique of using syntax and imagery to convey character traits instead of relying on direct descriptions.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with writing a comparative paragraph of at least 200 words that addresses the question: 'How do the opening sentences of Darl's Chapter 1 and Cora's Chapter 2 create two conflicting portrayals of the same family?' In their paragraphs, they should include at least two quotations from each chapter and identify one structural feature related to each voice (for example, Darl's use of spatial diction compared to Cora's commercial grievance about the cakes). Additionally, the term 'narrative perspective' must be used accurately at least once. All paragraphs will be collected at the end of the lesson.

    Exit ticket

    By opening with Darl instead of Addie or Anse, Faulkner establishes a unique perspective that allows readers to engage with the complexities of the family dynamics and the emotional undercurrents at play.

  2. Lesson 2: Form as Feeling: Cash's Lists and Vardaman's Fish (Chs. 8, 14, 15, 23)

    60 min · ch. 8, 14, 15, 23
    Do now

    Read Cash's thirteen-point list in Chapter 8 quietly. Number the points from 1 to 13 in your copy. Then jot down which point surprises you the most and why. You have four minutes—no need for full sentences; notes will work.

    Teacher input

    Model how the numbered list in Chapter 8 isn’t a failure of stream-of-consciousness but rather a careful stylistic choice: Cash’s grief is articulated through his precise carpentry, rather than overt emotion. Read point 13 aloud — “It makes a neater job” — and illustrate how the bathos in that closing line conveys Cash’s emotional repression more effectively than any internal monologue could. Next, let’s examine Vardaman’s statement, “My mother is a fish” (Chapter 14): show how Faulkner employs parataxis and omits logical connectors to immerse the reader in a child’s traumatized associative thinking, where the gutted fish and Addie’s body in the coffin become interchangeable symbols of violence.

    Independent task

    Students are required to write a structured analysis of at least 200 words addressing the following question: "Compare how Cash in Chapter 8 and Vardaman in Chapter 14 utilize non-standard prose forms to convey grief that they struggle to articulate directly." They need to identify the prose form used in each chapter (such as numbered lists or fragmented parataxis), include at least one specific quote or line from each chapter, and argue which narrator Faulkner makes more emotionally accessible to the reader, and why. The completed work is to be submitted by the end of the lesson.

    Exit ticket

    Faulkner may have chosen a numbered list for a chapter about grief to create a clear structure that contrasts with the chaotic emotions often associated with loss, allowing readers to process their feelings more methodically.

  3. Lesson 3: Words and Deeds: Addie's Monologue and the Philosophy of Language (Ch. 21)

    60 min · ch. 17, 21
    Do now

    Ch. 21 is Addie's only chapter — and she has been gone since Ch. 12. Before diving in, jot down two predictions: (1) How do you think a dead woman's monologue might sound? (2) What do you expect her thoughts on Anse to be? Hold onto your predictions — you'll revisit them at the end of the lesson.

    Teacher input

    Read aloud Addie's declaration: 'I would think about his name until I could see the word as a shape, a vessel, and I would watch him liquefy and flow into it like cold molasses spilling out of the darkness into the vessel, until the jar was full and still: a significant shape utterly devoid of life, like an empty door frame.' This passage positions Addie as the novel's theorist of language: she sees words as empty containers, while only actions (like Cash's coffin and Jewel's physical rescue) hold true meaning. This insight reshapes our understanding of every chapter we've encountered — Cora's fervent speeches in Ch. 2, Anse's self-justifications in Ch. 7, and Whitfield's unspoken confession in Ch. 17 — revealing them all as the hollow vessels Addie describes.

    Independent task

    Students will annotate a printed version of the 'cold molasses' passage from Chapter 21. After that, they will write a 200-word response to the question: 'In what way does Addie's theory of language in Chapter 21 reveal Anse's monologue in Chapter 7 as an act of self-pity instead of authentic emotion?' Their responses should include quotes from both chapters and utilize Addie's terminology ('words' vs. 'doing') as the basis for their analysis. Both the annotated sheets and the written responses will be collected.

    Exit ticket

    Return to your two predictions from the do-now. Write one sentence: what surprised you about Faulkner's actual choices, and what does that surprise reveal about the novel's use of narrative sequence?

  4. Lesson 4: The River, the Barn, the Horse: Sacrifice and Competing Loyalties (Chs. 11, 16, 19, 22, 24)

    60 min · ch. 11, 16, 19, 22, 24
    Do now

    On the board are three actions from the river-crossing sequence: (A) Jewel dives into the water to save the coffin (Ch. 22). (B) Anse observes from the shore (Ch. 16). (C) Cash stays silent about his broken leg (Ch. 20). Rank them 1–3 in terms of which reveals the most about its character. Write one sentence explaining your top-ranked choice.

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of the barn-fire chapter (Ch. 24), emphasizing Darl's narration of Jewel dragging the coffin through the flames: 'Jewel's hat flew off; he did not look back.' Show how Faulkner removes any sense of Jewel's inner thoughts—there's no reflection or pause—making Jewel's physical actions the focal point. In contrast, examine Darl's role as the arsonist, describing his crime in the third person ('the man' who set the fire). This dissociation illustrates Darl's psychological breakdown. Link this to Anse's earlier sale of Jewel's horse (from Ch. 13), which represents the novel's key act of betrayal masquerading as a necessity.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with writing a 200-word analytical paragraph that addresses the question: "How does Faulkner use the barn-fire sequence in Chapter 24 to show Jewel and Darl as mirror-image responses to the same unbearable situation?" They need to include a quote from Darl's narration about Jewel's physical actions as well as Darl's self-referential third-person construction. Additionally, they must incorporate the term 'narrative distance' or 'free indirect discourse.' Once completed, paragraphs will be collected.

    Exit ticket

    Darl's choice to narrate his own arson in the third person creates a sense of detachment, allowing readers to explore his conflicting emotions and the broader implications of his actions. If he simply stated, "I set the barn on fire," it would strip away that complexity and reduce the incident to a mere confession.

  5. Lesson 5: Jefferson and After: Irony, Silence, and the New Mrs. Bundren (Ch. 25 and whole-novel synthesis)

    60 min · ch. 21, 24, 25
    Do now

    Read the last paragraph of Ch. 25, where Cash talks about Anse introducing 'the new Mrs. Bundren.' Write about the emotion Cash's voice expresses in this moment. What details are missing from his account that you might expect to see? You have four minutes.

    Teacher input

    Model how Cash's final monologue in Chapter 25 employs understatement and the same carpenter's restraint we observed in Chapter 8 to create a closing irony that is devastating instead of comic. Pay particular attention to Cash's line about Darl being sent to the asylum: 'This world is not his world; this life is not his life.' Analyze how the paratactic repetition — using the same structure and the same words — reflects Cash's struggle to make sense of something that defies understanding. Then, relate this to Addie's 'words as vessels' theory from Chapter 21: Cash's language, much like his coffin, is the most sincere in the novel precisely because it does not attempt to convey more meaning than it can hold.

    Independent task

    Students will write a complete timed analytical response (at least 300 words) to the question: 'In what ways does Faulkner use Cash as a structural and moral anchor throughout the novel?' They need to reference at least three of Cash's four chapters (Chs. 8, 15, 20, 25), incorporate and explore at least three quotations, and discuss how Cash's style (lists, brevity, understatement) connects to his characterization. This draft serves as their summative preparation and will be assessed using the rubric provided at the beginning of the lesson.

    Exit ticket

    Write the best sentence from your timed response today. Below it, include one word that captures its strength and one word that reflects an area for improvement.

Activities

Voice Auction: Matching Quotations to Narrators 20 min · pairs

Each pair gets twelve quotation cards from Chapters 1–7 (Darl, Cora, Jewel, Dewey Dell, Anse, Tull). Without the text, pairs organize the cards onto a grid marked with each narrator's name, supporting each placement with a single word of justification (e.g. 'spatial', 'pious', 'commercial'). Pairs then review their grids with another pair and resolve any disagreements. Students return the finished grid with justifications noted in the margin.

Addie's Vessels: Applying the Language Theory to Other Characters 25 min · groups

Groups of three will get a printed copy of Addie's 'cold molasses' passage from Chapter 21, along with three additional extracts: Anse's speech about blame on the road from Chapter 7, Cora's prayer monologue from Chapter 2, and Whitfield's undelivered confession from Chapter 17. Each group will use Addie's distinction between 'words' and 'doing' to annotate all three extracts, indicating whether the language of each character is a full or empty vessel. Groups will create a shared annotated sheet, and one spokesperson from each group will share their most surprising finding with the class.

River Crossing Storyboard: Perspective and Omission 30 min · pairs

Pairs get a six-panel blank storyboard template and are tasked with illustrating the river-crossing sequence (Chs. 11, 16, 19, 22) from the viewpoint of one assigned narrator: Tull, Darl, or Cash. They need to choose six moments and, in each panel, write what the narrator might be thinking internally while describing the action. The catch: they can only use words and phrases found in their narrator's actual chapters. Once finished, the storyboards — featuring six panels, six quotations, and six internal thoughts — are submitted back.

Barn Fire Hot-Seating: Darl and Jewel 20 min · whole class

Two volunteers step into the roles of Darl and Jewel right after the barn fire (Ch. 24). The class, having revisited the chapter, comes up with three questions each — one focusing on motive, another on the coffin, and the last about the other brother. The hot-seat lasts for ten minutes, with the teacher only stepping in to guide questions towards textual evidence. Every student, including those in the hot seat, submits a single written sentence: 'The moment in Ch. 24 that most clearly reveals [Darl's / Jewel's] true motivation is ___ because ___.'

Cash's Coffin List — Rewriting in Another Voice 25 min · individual

Students receive Cash's thirteen-point list from Chapter 8 along with the assignment to rewrite points 1, 7, and 13 in two different styles. First, they should narrate them in the cinematic, detached prose that Darl would use, incorporating his third-person perspective. Next, they should rewrite the same points as Vardaman would, employing parataxis and associative logic. Students will produce three paired rewrites (a total of six short passages) and, beneath each pair, include one sentence explaining what the differences reveal about how form shapes character. All six passages along with the three analytical sentences are then submitted for feedback.

Silent Journey Map: Tracking Sacrifice and Betrayal 30 min · groups

Groups of four are given a large blank timeline that outlines the journey from the Bundren farm to Jefferson, complete with chapter numbers. Each student is assigned a character (Jewel, Cash, Dewey Dell, Anse) and needs to place sticky-note annotations at the appropriate chapter numbers, highlighting one sacrifice and one betrayal for their character throughout the novel. Afterward, groups discuss which sacrifice carries the greatest cost and which betrayal is most hidden by the novel's structure. Each group submits a completed annotated timeline along with one agreed summary sentence for each character.

Assessment

  • Exit ticket Lesson 1 — checks whether students can name what Faulkner achieves through the choice of Darl as the opening narrator, specifically his use of spatial detachment over emotional register.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 2 — checks whether students understand that Cash's numbered list is a formal choice enacting emotional repression, not a stylistic failure or authorial intrusion.
  • Collected paragraph Lesson 3 — checks whether students can apply Addie's 'words vs. doing' framework from Ch. 21 to a second chapter (Ch. 7), embedding quotation from both.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 4 — checks whether students grasp the significance of Darl narrating his own arson in the third person as a sign of dissociation, not unreliability alone.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 5 — the 'best sentence' self-assessment checks whether students can identify the qualities of their own analytical writing and name a specific area for revision.
  • Voice Auction activity grid — checks whether students can identify narrative voice from diction and syntax alone, without plot context, across the novel's first seven chapters.

Summative task

Write a detailed analytical essay (800–1000 words) in response to the question: 'How does Faulkner use the journey to Jefferson to reveal the disconnect between what the Bundren family says and what they actually do?' Be sure to closely examine at least four narrators from the novel, incorporate and analyze quotations from at least three specific chapters, and explore how Faulkner's use of form—including narrative voice, syntax, and the structural arrangement of chapters—enhances your argument. Pay particular attention to Addie's monologue in Chapter 21, the river-crossing sequence in Chapters 11, 16, 19, and 22, as well as the novel's concluding chapter, Chapter 25.

Marking notes

Top-band responses will seamlessly engage with specific syntactic choices (like Cash's parataxis, Darl's third-person self-narration in Chapter 24, and Addie's 'cold molasses' metaphor) while also addressing the overall structural argument of the novel. Mid-band responses will highlight the disconnect between words and actions but will tend to paraphrase rather than use critically analyzed quotations. Lower-band responses will summarize the plot without focusing on how Faulkner's form—the fifteen voices and the chapter placement of Addie's posthumous monologue—shapes meaning. Reward accurate references to 'narrative perspective', 'free indirect discourse', and 'parataxis' when they are supported by the analysis.

Standards covered

Common Core 11 12
  • RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
  • RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story (e.g. where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).
  • RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone.
  • RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
  • RL.11-12.6 — Analyse a case in which grasping a point of view requires distinguishing what is directly stated in a text from what is really meant.
AP Literature
  • Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about the literary text and supports that claim with evidence from the text.
  • Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Identify and explain the function of a simile, metaphor, or other figure of speech in a specific passage.
  • Narration (NAR-1) — Explain the function of point of view in a literary text, including how the choice of narrator shapes meaning and reader response.
  • Structure (STR-1) — Explain the function of structure in a literary text, including how the sequence and placement of chapters or sections contribute to meaning.
  • Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of contrasting characters and how their juxtaposition develops theme.
AQA
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
  • AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, using relevant subject terminology where appropriate.
  • AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received (Southern Gothic, American modernism, Great Depression, Yoknapatawpha County as fictional construct).
  • AO5 — Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations (competing critical readings of Darl as unreliable narrator vs. moral centre; Addie as victim vs. agent).
Edexcel
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology and coherent, accurate written expression.
  • AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, using relevant subject terminology.
  • AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
  • AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts, including how Faulkner's stream-of-consciousness technique relates to Woolf and Joyce.

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