Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12
An Arundel Tomb — Two Lessons
Over two periods, students transition from close reading to analytical writing on Larkin's "An Arundel Tomb." Lesson 1 focuses on developing a clear understanding of how the poem's structure, word choice, and the central image of the clasped hands create — and then subtly challenge — a romantic consolation. Lesson 2 turns that understanding into a well-supported analytical paragraph addressing an exam-style question about Larkin's ambivalence regarding the notion that love lasts. By the end of the sequence, students are equipped to write a thoroughly referenced, contextually rich argument about the poem's intentionally ambiguous conclusion.
Objectives
- Analyse how Larkin uses the physical details of the Arundel tomb — the clasped hands, the eroded heraldry, the fading Latin — to structure a meditation on time and mortality across the poem's seven stanzas.
- Explain how the double use of 'almost' in stanza six ('Our almost-instinct almost true') qualifies and complicates the poem's famous closing statement.
- Identify how Larkin's Movement-era values — formal restraint, plain diction, skepticism toward Romanticism — shape the tone and argument of the poem.
- Write an evidenced analytical paragraph that makes a clear claim about Larkin's ambivalence, embeds and glosses at least two quotations, and links the poem's technique to its meaning.
- Evaluate the tension between romantic consolation and ironic doubt as a deliberate structural feature of the poem, tracing it from the opening stanza's archaeological precision to the final line's carefully hedged assertion.
The sequence
Lesson 1: Stone, Time, and the Clasped Hands: Close Reading 'An Arundel Tomb'
55 min · ch. 1- Do now
Check out the two lines written on the board: 'Side by side, their faces blurred, / The earl and countess lie in stone' (stanza 1) and 'What will survive of us is love' (stanza 7). Without checking any resources, jot down two sentences: what do you think the poem is about, and do these two lines seem to fit together in the same poem? Why or why not?
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of stanza six — 'Time has transfigured them into / Untruth. The stone fidelity / They hardly meant has come to seem / Their final blazon, and to prove / Our almost-instinct almost true: / What will survive of us is love.' — illustrating how the enjambment across 'into / Untruth' enacts the distortion it describes. Note that 'hardly meant' points to sculptural convention over genuine emotion, while the repeated 'almost' in one line pulls back the comfort that the final line seems to suggest. Show how to annotate for syntax (the colon acting as a false promise of proof) and tone (the contrast between 'blazon' — a term that feels public and formal — and the more personal word 'love').
- Independent task
Students will work through stanzas one to five, annotating their own copies of the poem to follow one of three assigned themes: (A) the language of erosion and time, highlighted by phrases like 'sharp tender shock', 'bone-riddled ground', and 'supine stationary voyage'; (B) the language of observation and interpretation, including repeated lines such as 'lie in stone' and 'to prove'; or (C) the shift in pronoun from 'they' to 'we'. After completing their annotations, they will write a structured paragraph of 150 to 200 words explaining how their chosen theme sets the stage for the ambivalence present in stanza six. Finally, students will submit both their annotated poem and the written paragraph.
- Exit ticket
In one sentence, explain what the word 'almost' does to the meaning of the line 'Our almost-instinct almost true' — why does Larkin use it twice rather than once, and what would be lost if it appeared only once?
Lesson 2: Writing the Argument: Larkin's Ambivalence and the Exam-Style Paragraph
50 min · ch. 1- Do now
Read the claim on the board: 'The closing line of "An Arundel Tomb" is straightforwardly optimistic.' Take four minutes to jot down any evidence from the poem that contradicts this claim — try to find at least three specific words or phrases along with their stanza references.
- Teacher input
Model the construction of a full analytical paragraph in response to the question: 'How does Larkin present the idea that love endures in "An Arundel Tomb"?' Using the PEEL structure made visible on the board, demonstrate how to open with a claim that identifies the tension: 'Larkin presents love's endurance as a comforting illusion rather than a certainty.' Integrate the quotation 'They hardly meant' from stanza six into a grammatically cohesive sentence. The word 'hardly' carries a dismissive, deflating tone, suggesting that the couple's love, while enduring, is ultimately seen as less significant than romantic ideals might suggest. Conclude with a sentence that links the skepticism of the Movement era towards Romanticism with Larkin's intentional qualification of love’s permanence.
- Independent task
Students are tasked with writing a detailed analytical response of 300–400 words to the question: "How does Larkin use the imagery of the tomb and the passage of time to convey his ideas about love and mortality in 'An Arundel Tomb'?" Their response should begin with a clear, arguable claim. They need to include and explain at least three quotations from different stanzas of the poem. Additionally, they should analyze the significance of the double 'almost' found in stanza six. Finally, students must connect the poem's themes to the context of the Movement or to Larkin's experiences after the war. Written responses are to be submitted at the end of the class period.
- Exit ticket
Write one sentence that completes this stem without using the word 'shows': 'Larkin's decision to end the poem with an unqualified declarative — "What will survive of us is love" — immediately after two lines built around the word "almost" creates the effect of…'
Activities
Almost-Instinct: Unpacking the Double Qualifier 15 min · pairs
Each pair gets a printed copy of stanza six, but with the two instances of 'almost' removed and replaced by a blank line. Students start by filling in the stanza with their own words, then they compare their version to Larkin's original. They write two sentences discussing how Larkin's use of 'almost'—instead of a synonym—affects the reader's experience of the closing line. Pairs then return their annotated stanza along with their two sentences.
Erosion Timeline: Tracking the Poem's Movement Through Time 20 min · groups
Groups of three get a large sheet of paper that has seven columns, one for each stanza. Each group finds the main temporal marker or image of change in each stanza — for instance, stanza one has 'lie in stone', stanza four includes 'bone-riddled ground', and stanza five features 'supine stationary voyage' — and notes it in the appropriate column along with a one-sentence explanation. Then, groups draw an arrow to indicate the poem's argument about time. Finally, they return the annotated timeline sheet.
They / We: Pronoun Shift Close Reading 10 min · individual
Students get a copy of the full poem, with every pronoun highlighted. Working alone, they mark the point in the poem where it changes from 'they' (referring to the earl and countess as distant historical figures) to 'we' (the speaker and, by extension, all human observers), pinpointing the exact stanza and line of this transition. They write three sentences discussing what this shift accomplishes and what it invites the reader to consider. Students submit their annotated poems.
Funeral or Irony? Reception and Context Discussion 15 min · whole class
The teacher reads the contextual note that the poem is often chosen for funerals and weddings, which Larkin found ironic. Students then take two minutes to jot down their initial reactions before the class dives into a discussion: does the poem embrace or push back against this sentimental interpretation? The teacher notes the students' claims on the board. At the end of the discussion, students submit a single sentence — their final, revised position — on a slip of paper.
Movement Manifesto: Connecting Context to Technique 20 min · pairs
Each pair gets a brief printed extract (three to four sentences) that outlines the Movement's values — straightforward language, formal restraint, and skepticism toward Romanticism — along with three quotations from 'An Arundel Tomb.' Pairs annotate each quotation to highlight one Movement value it represents, then craft a connecting sentence for each. They return their annotated sheet, which directly contributes to the independent task for Lesson 2.
Blazon to Blur: Heraldry and Erosion Vocabulary Study 15 min · individual
Students get a glossary of five words from the poem — 'blazon', 'fidelity', 'supine', 'transfigured', 'effigy' — along with their dictionary definitions and etymologies. Working on their own, they select two words and craft a sentence for each, discussing how Larkin's choice of that word in its specific stanza supports the poem's argument about how time affects meaning. They submit their two sentences, including references to the relevant stanzas.
Assessment
- Lesson 1 do-now: checking whether students can identify tonal dissonance between the poem's opening archaeological precision and its closing romantic assertion before any teaching has occurred.
- Lesson 1 annotation task: checking whether students can locate and label specific language features — erosion diction, pronoun shift, or observational verbs — across stanzas one to five with accurate stanza references.
- Lesson 1 exit ticket: checking whether students can explain the semantic and rhetorical function of the double 'almost' in stanza six as a deliberate qualification rather than a stylistic accident.
- Lesson 2 do-now: checking whether students can independently generate counter-evidence against a given interpretive claim, drawing on at least three stanzas without prompting.
- Lesson 2 exit ticket: checking whether students can articulate the ironic structural effect of placing an unqualified declarative immediately after two lines saturated with qualification — demonstrating understanding of the poem's tonal architecture.
Summative task
Write a response of 300–400 words to the following question: 'Explore how Larkin uses the image of the tomb and the passage of time to present his ideas about love and mortality in "An Arundel Tomb".' Your response must open with a clear, contestable claim; embed and gloss at least three quotations from at least three different stanzas; address the effect of the double 'almost' in stanza six; and include at least one sentence that connects the poem's technique to its Movement context or to Larkin's post-war moment.
Marking notes
Top-band responses present a detailed, thoughtful argument about ambivalence—going beyond just stating that the ending is 'both hopeful and doubtful' to exploring how the poem's structure (with its archaeological opening, erosion imagery, the shift from 'they' to 'we', and the repeated 'almost') carefully constructs and then nuances its sense of consolation. Mid-band responses recognize the tension but use quotations as simple labels rather than as evidence to be examined. Lower-band responses summarize the poem’s narrative without offering any analytical insights into Larkin's technique or the context of the Movement.
Standards covered
- Common Core 11 12
- RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.
- RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone.
- RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
- W.11-12.1 — Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
- AP Literature
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Explain the function of word choice, imagery, and structure in a literary text.
- Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Explain the function of figurative language in a literary text, including how it contributes to the text's overall meaning.
- Narrator and Speaker (NAR-1) — Explain how a speaker's perspective shapes the meaning of a poem.
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1.E) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about an interpretation of literature and explain the reasoning that connects the evidence to the claim.
- AQA
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, with particular attention to Larkin's use of diction, enjambment, and stanza form.
- AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received, including the Movement's post-war skepticism and the poem's reception at funerals and weddings.
- AO5 — Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations, including the tension between romantic and ironic readings of the closing line.
- Edexcel
- AO1 — Articulate informed responses to literary texts using relevant concepts and terminology and coherent written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in Larkin's poem, focusing on structural choices such as the pronoun shift from 'they' to 'we' and the placement of the double 'almost'.
- AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance of contexts — the Movement, post-war culture, and the poem's reception history — in which 'An Arundel Tomb' was written and has been read.
- AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts, including comparisons with other Movement-era poems that balance consolation with skepticism.
- OCR
- AO1 — Communicate clearly the candidate's informed, independent opinions and judgements as a reader, using appropriate terminology and accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse and evaluate how writers' use of language, form, and structure create meaning and aesthetic effect, with specific attention to Larkin's stanza form and enjambment.
- AO3 — Explore connections and comparisons between literary texts, informed by the interpretive context of Movement poetry and post-war attitudes to permanence and meaning.
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