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Their Eyes Were Watching God — a five-lesson scheme of work

This sequence explores Janie's journey from being silenced to finding her voice. Lesson 1 sets up Hurston's narrative framework and highlights the porch as a place for community judgment (Chapters 1–2). Lesson 2 examines how Joe Starks creates and maintains Janie's silence (Chapters 5–8). Lesson 3 looks at Tea Cake's courtship as a model for partnership and discusses Hurston's use of free indirect discourse (Chapters 10–11). Lesson 4 delves into themes of race, colorism, and community through Mrs. Turner and the hurricane (Chapters 16–18). Lesson 5 wraps up the arc with Janie's trial, acquittal, and return (Chapters 19–20). By the end, students will be able to write an analytical essay supported by evidence on voice, power, and identity in Hurston's novel.

Objectives

  • Analyse how Hurston uses the narrative frame in Chapter 1 to position Janie as both subject and storyteller, resisting the porch community's gaze.
  • Explain how Joe Starks's language and stage-management in Chapters 5–8 construct and enforce Janie's silence, using specific quotations.
  • Identify and interpret Hurston's use of free indirect discourse in Chapters 10–11 to render Janie's interior life without authorial intrusion.
  • Evaluate how Chapters 16–18 use Mrs. Turner and the hurricane to expose the intersecting pressures of colorism, race, and nature on Black lives in the Everglades.
  • Write a fully evidenced analytical paragraph that tracks the development of Janie's voice across at least three chapters, using precise literary terminology.
  • Assess the significance of the trial scene in Chapter 20 as the culmination of the novel's themes of voice, community, and self-determination.

The sequence

  1. Lesson 1: The Porch Watches Janie: Narrative Frame and the Community's Gaze (Chapters 1–2)

    60 min · ch. 1, 2
    Do now

    Read the opening paragraph of Chapter 1 silently: 'Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board…' Write two sentences: Hurston suggests that men's dreams are often focused on the horizon, representing distant ambitions, while women's dreams tend to be more grounded in reality and the present. This contrast highlights how aspirations differ between genders.

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of the porch women's dialogue in Chapter 1 — 'What she doin coming back here in dem overhalls?' — and examine how Hurston employs free indirect discourse and dialect to position the community as both the narrator and the antagonist. Illustrate how the women's speech sometimes lacks quotation marks, merging their voices into a shared judgment. Then, pose the questions: whose story is this, and who is attempting to claim it?

    Independent task

    Students re-read the section in Chapter 2 where Janie looks at the photograph and feels a disconnect ('Ah was wid dem white chillun so much…'). They will write a PEEL paragraph addressing: How does Hurston use this photograph moment to reveal Janie's fractured identity? They should include at least two quotes and correctly use the term 'narrative perspective' or 'free indirect discourse.'

    Exit ticket

    The porch women in Chapter 1 symbolize Janie's connection to her community and their expectations, and Hurston highlights them early in the novel to emphasize the societal pressures Janie faces.

  2. Lesson 2: Joe Starks Builds a Town and Buries a Wife: Power and Silence (Chapters 5–8)

    60 min · ch. 5, 6, 7, 8
    Do now

    Without opening the book, jot down three actions or statements from Joe Starks in Chapters 5–6 that demonstrate his desire for control. Then specify: who gains from his ambition, and who suffers because of it?

    Teacher input

    Model analysis of Joe's speech at the town's first street lamp ceremony in Chapter 5 — 'Ah got tuh say whut Ah got tuh say' — and then his immediate silencing of Janie: 'mah wife don't know nothin' 'bout no speech-makin'.' Show students how Hurston contrasts Joe's public speaking with Janie's forced silence in this scene, highlighting how Joe's syntax strips Janie of her agency by referring to her in the third person while she stands next to him.

    Independent task

    Students examine Janie's final confrontation with Joe in Chapter 8: 'You ain't tried tuh pacify nobody but yo'self.' They annotate this passage focusing on (a) what Janie finally expresses verbally after years of internal thoughts, (b) Joe's reaction to her words, and (c) the effect of Hurston's narrative voice in the closing lines of the scene. Following this, they compose a structured comparison: in what ways does Janie's speech in Chapter 8 differ from her silence in Chapter 5? The comparison should be at least 150 words and include two quotations from each chapter.

    Exit ticket

    Janie finally tells Joe in Chapter 8, "I am not your mule." This gap is significant because it illustrates Janie's awakening to her own strength and autonomy, challenging the dynamics of power in their relationship.

  3. Lesson 3: Tea Cake Teaches Checkers: Free Indirect Discourse and Partnership (Chapters 10–11)

    60 min · ch. 10, 11
    Do now

    Read this sentence from Chapter 10: 'He set it up and began to show her, and she found herself glowing inside.' Whose words are these — the narrator's, Janie's, or both? How do you know? You have four minutes.

    Teacher input

    Model how Hurston employs free indirect discourse in the checkers scene from Chapter 11 — 'Somebody wanted her to play. Somebody thought it natural for her to play' — to illustrate Janie's growing self-awareness without resorting to the first person. Contrast this with the direct speech of Joe's commands in Chapter 6. Demonstrate to students that this grammatical shift (third person, present-tense feelings) is Hurston's way of providing Janie with an inner life that readers can experience, rather than just watch from the outside.

    Independent task

    Students choose any four consecutive sentences from the Chapter 11 checkers scene and annotate each one: is it the narrator's voice, Janie's thoughts, or Tea Cake's dialogue? They then write a paragraph discussing how Hurston's mix of these voices gives the impression that Janie is, for the first time, the subject rather than the object of the scene. They need to include the term 'free indirect discourse' and quote all four sentences.

    Exit ticket

    One example of free indirect discourse from Chapter 10 is when Janie reflects on her feelings about Tea Cake, thinking about how he makes her feel alive and hopeful. This reveals her inner turmoil and longing for genuine connection, which goes deeper than a straightforward "Janie thought..." statement could convey.

  4. Lesson 4: Mrs. Turner's Gods and the Hurricane's Gods: Race, Colorism, and Nature (Chapters 16–18)

    60 min · ch. 16, 17, 18
    Do now

    Read Chapter 16's opening description of Mrs. Turner: 'Anyone who looked more white folkish than herself was better than she was in her criteria.' Write: what does the word 'criteria' reveal about how Mrs. Turner thinks? What system of values is Hurston highlighting?

    Teacher input

    Model a reading of the novel's title moment in Chapter 18: 'They seemed to be staring at the dark, but their eyes were watching God.' Show students how Hurston transitions from the vivid description of the hurricane — with animals moving inland and Seminole workers leaving — to this abrupt shift into a theological tone. Highlight how this sentence operates on three levels at once: literally (they can’t see in the dark), thematically (they are powerless against forces greater than race or class), and ironically (the God observing them has already allowed Mrs. Turner's colorism and white supremacy to influence their reality).

    Independent task

    Students will write a comparative paragraph that addresses the question: How do Chapters 16 and 18 depict external forces—one human and one natural—that threaten to shape Janie and Tea Cake's lives? They need to include a quote from Mrs. Turner's speech in Chapter 16 and reference the hurricane passage in Chapter 18. Additionally, the term 'agency' must be used at least once. The paragraph should be a minimum of 150 words.

    Exit ticket

    Hurston places the colorism in Chapter 16 and the hurricane in Chapter 18 together to highlight how both internal and external forces impact Black lives. By juxtaposing these themes, she argues that societal issues like colorism and natural disasters both contribute to the struggles faced by the Black community. This connection emphasizes that the challenges in their lives are shaped not only by personal identity but also by uncontrollable circumstances.

  5. Lesson 5: She Pulled in Her Horizon: Trial, Return, and Janie's Reclaimed Voice (Chapters 19–20)

    60 min · ch. 19, 20
    Do now

    The jury that acquits Janie is entirely white, which highlights the racial divide in the courtroom. While the Black community should be rallying in support of her, they are instead filled with anger towards her, revealing a painful irony in the situation.

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of the novel's final paragraph in Chapter 20: 'She pulled in her horizon like a great fish-net… So much of life in its meshes! She called in her soul to come and see.' This passage illustrates how Hurston revisits the 'horizon' metaphor from the opening lines of Chapter 1, effectively completing a structural arc. The transition from the passive construction ('the horizon') to the active voice ('she pulled') embodies the central theme of the novel: Janie has evolved from being a passive observer on the porch to taking control of her own narrative.

    Independent task

    Students will write a complete analytical paragraph (200–250 words) addressing the question: How does Hurston use the final paragraph of Chapter 20 to reconcile the ongoing tension between Janie's inner experiences and the community’s judgments that have been present since Chapter 1? They should include quotes from both Chapter 1 and Chapter 20, identify the structural technique employed by Hurston, and present a clear argument regarding the meaning of 'horizon' by the end of the novel.

    Exit ticket

    Before: > Write the word or phrase from the Chapter 20 final paragraph that most clearly shows Janie has reclaimed her voice. Explain your choice in one sentence.

    After: > Identify the word or phrase in the last paragraph of Chapter 20 that best demonstrates Janie's reclamation of her voice. In one sentence, explain why you chose that particular word or phrase.

Activities

Porch Jury: Hot-Seating the Chapter 1 Women 20 min · whole class

One student takes the role of Janie while four others stand in as the porch women from Chapter 1, each delivering a line from the opening pages: 'What she doin coming back here…' and 'She ain't even worth talkin' after…'. The class engages in a discussion about both perspectives. After ten minutes, they vote on whether the porch community has the right to judge Janie. Each student submits a single sentence: 'The porch women represent _______ because Hurston shows them doing _______.' The teacher collects these as a formative check on narrative perspective.

Silence Map: Tracking What Janie Cannot Say in Chapters 5–8 25 min · pairs

Each pair gets a printed timeline strip that includes Chapters 5, 6, 7, and 8. They highlight every instance where Janie is silenced (like when Joe speaks for her, she is sent inside, or her hair is covered) and every moment where she has thoughts but doesn't voice them. They add a quotation and a one-word label (such as 'erased', 'buried', 'suppressed') to each mark. Afterward, pairs return the annotated strips. The teacher uses these to determine which silencing moments the students consider most important before the deathbed lesson in Chapter 8.

Whose Voice Is This? Free Indirect Discourse Sorting Card Activity 20 min · groups

Groups of three receive twelve sentence strips from Chapters 10 and 11, each containing a single sentence from Hurston's prose. Students organize the strips into three categories: 'Narrator only', 'Janie's consciousness', and 'Ambiguous — both'. They are required to write one sentence justifying each placement in the 'Ambiguous' category. Once sorted, groups return the strips with justifications written on the back. The teacher collects these and uses any disagreements among the groups to facilitate a whole-class discussion on free indirect discourse.

Mrs. Turner's Hierarchy: Colorism Spectrum Discussion 25 min · groups

Groups of four will receive three quotes from Chapter 16 where Mrs. Turner evaluates characters based on their skin tone and features. They will organize these quotes on a spectrum ranging from 'most harmful to Janie' to 'most harmful to the Black community overall', followed by writing two sentences to explain their reasoning. One spokesperson will present their findings. Each group will submit their written ranking along with their justifications. The teacher will use these submissions to evaluate whether students can differentiate between personal prejudice and systemic colorism before the Chapter 18 hurricane lesson.

Horizon Bookends: Comparing Chapter 1 and Chapter 20 30 min · individual

Students receive a printed split-page: Chapter 1's opening paragraph ('Ships at a distance…') on the left and Chapter 20's closing paragraph ('She pulled in her horizon…') on the right. Working individually, they annotate both passages for (a) the word 'horizon', (b) active vs. passive verbs, and (c) whose perspective drives the narration. Afterwards, they write three sentences discussing what has changed between the two passages and what that change signifies for Janie's identity. This is returned as a formative pre-draft for the summative essay.

Tea Cake on Trial: Debate — Was Janie Right to Shoot? 30 min · pairs

Pairs are assigned either 'prosecution' or 'defence' based solely on evidence from Chapters 13–19 (including Tea Cake's theft of the $200, the beating in Chapter 17, his care on the muck, and the rabies). Each pair then prepares a two-minute spoken argument. Following the debate, every student writes one sentence: 'Hurston makes Janie's shooting of Tea Cake feel _______ because in Chapter ___ she shows _______.' This sentence is submitted and used by the teacher to assess how effectively students are incorporating textual evidence into their personal critical perspectives.

Assessment

  • Exit ticket, Lesson 1 — checks whether students can articulate the porch community's function as collective antagonist and narrative device, not merely as background characters.
  • Annotated silence map from the pairs activity — checks whether students can locate and label specific moments of Joe's silencing of Janie in Chapters 5–8 with accurate quotation.
  • Free indirect discourse sorting strips, Lesson 3 — checks whether students can distinguish narrator's voice from Janie's consciousness at sentence level in Chapters 10–11.
  • Exit ticket, Lesson 4 — checks whether students can articulate a thematic connection between Mrs. Turner's colorism (Chapter 16) and the hurricane (Chapter 18) as parallel external forces.
  • Horizon bookends annotation, Lesson 5 — checks whether students can identify structural framing and track the shift from passive to active voice across the novel's arc.
  • Tea Cake on Trial closing sentence — checks whether students can form an evidenced critical judgement about a morally complex event, citing chapter and quotation.

Summative task

Write a detailed analytical essay (600–900 words) addressing the question: 'In what ways does Hurston utilize Janie's voice — its silencing, awakening, and eventual reclamation — to advocate for Black women's self-determination?' Be sure to examine at least three chapters from throughout the novel, include direct quotes from the text in each paragraph, and incorporate at least two of the following terms appropriately: free indirect discourse, narrative frame, dialect, structural arc, interiority. Your essay should begin with a clear argument and revisit this argument in your conclusion.

Marking notes

Top-band responses will explore how Janie's voice evolves throughout the novel, focusing on the structural elements rather than just listing instances. They will illustrate how Hurston's stylistic choices—like the use of free indirect discourse in Chapters 10–11, the frame narrative in Chapters 1 and 20, and the dialect in Joe's speeches in Chapters 5–8—support the argument instead of merely showcasing it. Mid-band responses recognize the techniques but discuss them separately from the themes. Lower-band responses tend to summarize the plot or provide quotes without any meaningful analysis. Examiners should mark down any answer that views Tea Cake's courtship as purely positive without considering the theft in Chapter 13 or the violence in Chapter 17.

Standards covered

Common Core 11 12
  • RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
  • RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story (e.g. how Hurston positions Janie as both subject and narrator via the frame structure).
  • RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including dialect.
  • RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning (e.g. the 'horizon' bookend in Chapters 1 and 20).
  • RL.11-12.6 — Analyse a case in which grasping a point of view requires distinguishing what is directly stated from what is really meant (e.g. free indirect discourse rendering Janie's consciousness in Chapters 10–11).
AP Literature
  • Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about how Hurston's narrative choices create meaning in Their Eyes Were Watching God.
  • Figurative Language and Imagery (FIG-1) — Analyse how Hurston's use of the 'horizon' metaphor and the pear tree image in Chapters 1–2 contribute to the novel's exploration of Janie's desire and identity.
  • Narration (NAR-1) — Explain how Hurston's use of free indirect discourse in Chapters 10–11 and the embedded frame narrative in Chapters 1 and 20 shape the reader's understanding of Janie's interiority.
  • Character (CHR-1) — Analyse how Hurston develops Janie's character across the novel through contrasting relationships with Logan Killicks, Joe Starks, and Tea Cake Woods.
  • Structure (STR-1) — Analyse how the novel's three-part movement (Nanny/Logan, Joe, Tea Cake) and its framing device contribute to its argument about self-determination.
AQA
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression; applied here to Janie's voice and Hurston's narrative argument.
  • AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, with particular reference to Hurston's use of dialect, free indirect discourse, and the frame narrative across Chapters 1–20.
  • AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received; applied here to the Harlem Renaissance, Hurston's anthropological work, and the novel's rediscovery via Alice Walker's 1975 essay.
  • AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts; students may connect Hurston's treatment of Black women's interiority to other texts on the course where relevant.
Edexcel
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology and coherent, accurate written expression; applied to the development of Janie's self-determination across the novel.
  • AO2 — Analyse the ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts; specifically Hurston's structural use of the horizon motif (Chapters 1 and 20), free indirect discourse (Chapters 10–11), and dialect as a marker of community identity (Chapters 5–8).
  • AO5 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received; including the Harlem Renaissance, the critique by Richard Wright, and the feminist recovery of the text.

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