Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12
The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas — a five-lesson scheme of work
This sequence takes students from basic understanding to deeper analytical writing over five lessons. They start by mapping the world that Le Guin creates in Chapter 1, then grapple with the moral implications presented by the child in Chapter 2. Next, they explore the narrator's complicity and the rhetorical strategies that engage the reader. In Lesson 4, the focus shifts to the walkers from Chapter 3 and the significance of their silence. The sequence ends with a timed analytical essay where students argue whether Omelas is a utopia or a dystopia, using insights from all three chapters. By the end, students will be able to analyze how narrative structure and the use of second-person address shape a reader who cannot remain innocent.
Objectives
- Analyse how Le Guin uses second-person address and narrative intrusion in Chapter 1 to implicate the reader in the happiness of Omelas.
- Explain how the description of the child in Chapter 2 functions as a moral and rhetorical pivot in the text.
- Evaluate the narrator's role as an unreliable guide, identifying moments where the narration destabilises its own authority.
- Analyse how Le Guin uses the silence and anonymity of 'those who walk away' in Chapter 3 to resist easy moral resolution.
- Write a sustained, evidenced analytical essay arguing a position on the text's central ethical paradox, selecting and embedding quotations from all three chapters.
The sequence
Lesson 1: Building Omelas: How the Narrator Constructs a World We Want to Believe In
55 min · ch. 1- Do now
Read the opening paragraph of Chapter 1, starting with 'With a clamour of bells…' and concluding with '…the music beat faster.' Identify five specific details Le Guin provides about Omelas. Then, craft one sentence that explains the emotion those details aim to evoke in the reader.
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of the passage in Chapter 1 where the narrator states, "Perhaps it would be best if you imagined it as your own fancy bids you. Perhaps it would be best if you imagined it as your own fancy bids you. Smiles, bells, parades, horses, bleh." Highlight how the narrator’s self-interruption with "bleh" and the direct address of "you" blur the line between storyteller and reader, inviting the reader to co-create Omelas's joy — and thus become morally invested in it before the child is introduced. Guide students on how to annotate for elements such as narrative voice, shifts in pronouns, and overall tone.
- Independent task
Students are tasked with writing a fully developed analytical paragraph of at least 150 words in response to the following question: How does Le Guin use narrative voice in Chapter 1 to involve the reader in the happiness of Omelas? In their paragraphs, students should include at least two quotations from Chapter 1, one of which must feature the narrator speaking directly to 'you'. Additionally, they need to incorporate the word 'complicit' or 'implicate' in their analysis. These paragraphs will be submitted at the end of the lesson for written feedback from the teacher.
- Exit ticket
In one sentence, explain what the narrator wants the reader to do when they say 'imagine it as your own fancy bids you' — and in a second sentence, explain why that instruction is dangerous.
Lesson 2: The Child in the Basement: Moral Logic and the Cost of Happiness
55 min · ch. 2- Do now
Without looking at the text, jot down everything that stands out to you about the child from Chapter 2 — including how they look, where they are, what they receive, and what they say. Finally, share one sentence about your feelings when you first read that description.
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of the central passage in Chapter 2 where the narrator states: 'They all know it is there, all the people of Omelas. Some of them have come to see it, others are content merely to know it is there.' This shift from 'it' (the child, stripped of humanity) to 'they' (the citizens, viewed as a group) highlights the moral distancing that the text critiques. The rhythm of the sentences—short, declarative, and relentless—reflects the citizens' unfeeling acceptance of this reality. This choice in structure serves as a powerful argument, emphasizing that the language of the passage is not only a stylistic decision but also a profound commentary on complicity and the cost of their happiness.
- Independent task
Students will annotate the complete description of the child found in Chapter 2 (from 'In a basement under one of the beautiful public buildings…' to '…it is afraid of the mops') using three colour-coded categories: (1) language that dehumanises the child, (2) language that compels the reader to recognize the child's humanity, and (3) language that implicates the citizens. Following this, students will write a 100-word explanation of how Le Guin creates tension between categories 1 and 2 to evoke moral discomfort in the reader. Annotated extracts and explanations should be submitted.
- Exit ticket
Write one sentence explaining why Le Guin refers to the child as 'it' throughout Chapter 2, and one sentence explaining what effect that choice has on the reader's relationship with the citizens of Omelas.
Lesson 3: The Narrator on Trial: Reliability, Guilt, and the Text That Argues With Itself
55 min · ch. 1, 2- Do now
Find the moment in Chapter 2 where the narrator mentions that the citizens who visit the child experience feelings of 'anger, outrage, impotence' and then 'go home' with 'happiness that feels even greater than before, thanks to their compassion.' Write two questions you would pose to the narrator if you had the chance to cross-examine them in court.
- Teacher input
Model how to build an argument about narrative unreliability using the passage in Chapter 2 where the narrator asks: 'Do you believe? Do you accept the festival, the city, the joy? No? Then let me describe one more thing.' Highlight how the narrator's rhetorical questions create a sense of emotional pressure — the reader is challenged to disbelieve, and the child is introduced as the cost of that belief. Guide students in framing this as an argument: the narrator isn't just an impartial guide but acts like a prosecutor building a case, positioning the reader as both jury and defendant.
- Independent task
Students are tasked with writing a structured argument consisting of at least two paragraphs and a minimum of 200 words in total. They will respond to the question: Is the narrator of 'The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas' a trustworthy guide, or are they just as complicit in the moral issues presented as the citizens they describe? In Paragraph 1, students should provide one piece of evidence indicating the narrator's complicity. In Paragraph 2, they must present one piece of evidence suggesting that the narrator is attempting to resist this complicity. Both paragraphs need to incorporate quotes from Chapters 1 or 2. Students will submit their completed responses.
- Exit ticket
In two sentences, explain what the narrator means when they say 'Do you believe?' — who are they really asking, and what are the consequences of the reader answering yes?
Lesson 4: Those Who Walk Away: Silence, Resistance, and the Limits of Moral Action
55 min · ch. 3- Do now
Read the final two paragraphs of Chapter 3, from 'At times one of the adolescent girls or boys…' to the end of the story. Identify three things we learn about those who walk away, and three things we don’t learn. Finally, write one sentence about what Le Guin accomplishes by leaving those gaps.
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of the sentence in Chapter 3: 'The place they go towards is a place even less imaginable to most of us than the city of happiness.' Analyze how the comparative construction ('even less imaginable') serves two purposes simultaneously: it acknowledges that Omelas itself is difficult to believe, while also positioning the walkers' destination completely beyond the text's ability to represent it. Teach students to argue that this is a deliberate choice — Le Guin withholds a utopian alternative from the reader, as providing one would merely echo Omelas's own fantasy. This is the text critiquing its own genre.
- Independent task
Students will compose an analytical paragraph of at least 150 words in response to the question: What does Le Guin achieve by not revealing where those who walk away are headed? In their writing, students are required to include the quote, "The place they go towards is a place even less imaginable to most of us than the city of happiness," and discuss both its meaning and what it leaves unsaid. Additionally, they should link their analysis to one of the following themes: freedom, guilt, or justice. Once completed, paragraphs will be submitted for peer assessment based on the criteria displayed on the board.
- Exit ticket
Write one sentence explaining whether you think those who walk away are morally superior to the citizens who stay — and one sentence explaining what evidence from Chapter 3 either supports or complicates your view.
Lesson 5: The Essay: Arguing the Paradox Across All Three Chapters
60 min · ch. 1, 2, 3- Do now
Without referencing your notes, jot down the most significant quote from each of the three chapters. After that, craft a single sentence that captures the common thread among all three quotes — what overarching argument ties them together?
- Teacher input
Model the construction of a thesis sentence and a first body paragraph using the following question (which is also the essay question): 'Le Guin presents Omelas as a place of happiness that the reader cannot accept and cannot refuse. How does she use narrative voice and structural choice across all three chapters to trap the reader in this paradox?'
Begin by demonstrating on the board how a strong thesis identifies Le Guin's techniques (like second-person address, narrative intrusion, or strategic omission) alongside the effect these techniques create (for example, making the reader feel both complicit and critical).
Next, create one body paragraph that focuses on the 'Do you believe?' passage from Chapter 2. In this paragraph, show how to effectively transition from quoting the text to discussing the technique Le Guin employs, then to the effect it has on the reader, and finally to the overall argument being made.
- Independent task
Students will write a timed analytical essay (minimum 500 words, four paragraphs) in response to the question: "Le Guin presents Omelas as a place of happiness that the reader cannot accept and cannot refuse. How does she use narrative voice and structural choice across all three chapters to trap the reader in this paradox?"
In Paragraph 1, students should discuss how the second-person address in Chapter 1 pulls the reader into a sense of complicity. Paragraph 2 should focus on how the portrayal of the child in Chapter 2 makes that complicity morally impossible to accept. In Paragraph 3, students need to argue how Chapter 3's choice not to reveal the walkers' destination prevents the reader from finding an escape route. Finally, Paragraph 4 must provide a concluding argument about what the text ultimately asks of its readers. Each paragraph should include at least one quotation from the respective chapter being analyzed. Essays will be written in silence and submitted at the end of the lesson.
- Exit ticket
Read back your thesis sentence — the first sentence of your essay that states your overall argument. Does it name Le Guin's method, her effect on the reader, and the chapter evidence you will use? Rewrite it in one sentence if it does not yet do all three of those things, and write a second sentence explaining what you changed and why.
Activities
Colour-Coded Complicity: Annotating the Child's Description 20 min · individual
Students get a printed excerpt of the child's description from Chapter 2 (from 'In a basement under one of the beautiful public buildings…' to '…it is afraid of the mops'). They use three highlighter colors to identify: (1) language that dehumanizes the child, (2) language that affirms the child's humanity, and (3) language that implicates the citizens. After annotating, students return the marked excerpt along with a one-sentence explanation of which category is most prevalent and why that prevalence is significant to Le Guin's argument.
Narrator on Trial: Hot-Seat Cross-Examination 25 min · whole class
One student takes on the role of the narrator from Omelas, sitting at the front. The rest of the class then cross-examines them, drawing on evidence from Chapters 1 and 2 to question the narrator's reliability, motives, and their own complicity in the story's moral dilemma. The student in the hot seat must respond as their character. Meanwhile, all other students jot down two quotes the narrator uses in their defense and write a sentence assessing whether each defense is convincing. Finally, students return their written evaluations.
Walk or Stay: Structured Debate 30 min · groups
Groups of four are given a position — 'staying in Omelas is the more ethical choice' or 'walking away is the more ethical choice' — regardless of their personal beliefs. Each group uses evidence from Chapters 2 and 3 to prepare a two-minute spoken argument. After both sides have presented, the class votes. Students then write two sentences: one stating which argument they found more convincing and another explaining what evidence from the text influenced their decision. These written sentences are submitted.
Thesis Surgery: Peer Redrafting of Opening Arguments 20 min · pairs
Each student creates a thesis sentence in response to the essay question ('Le Guin presents Omelas as a place of happiness the reader cannot accept and cannot refuse…'). They then exchange sentences with their partners and annotate them based on three criteria: Does it identify a method? Does it mention an effect? Does it specifically reference the text? Afterward, partners draft a revised version of each other's sentence. Both the original and the revised sentence, along with the annotations, are returned to the teacher.
Three-Chapter Timeline: Tracking the Reader's Moral Position 25 min · pairs
Students get a blank timeline split into three columns titled Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and Chapter 3. In pairs, they find one moment in each chapter that evokes pleasure or approval for the reader, and another moment where that feeling is interrupted or punished. They jot down a quotation and a brief explanation for each moment. Once finished, they submit the timeline, which will serve as a revision tool for the essay lesson.
Silent Discussion: Post-It Argument Wall 20 min · whole class
The question 'Is walking away a moral act or a moral failure?' is placed prominently in the center of the board. Students jot down their responses on a Post-it note—one claim and one quote from Chapter 3—and stick it on the board under 'moral act', 'moral failure', or 'neither'. In silence, they then read three other Post-its and write a second Post-it responding to one of those. The teacher takes a photo of the wall; students don’t turn anything in but are called on to explain their reasoning before the board is wiped clean.
Assessment
- Lesson 1 exit ticket: checks whether students can distinguish between what the narrator says and what the narrator does — i.e. whether they can identify narrative strategy rather than just content.
- Lesson 2 annotated extract: checks whether students can identify specific language choices and assign them to a moral function, rather than making general claims about 'tone'.
- Lesson 3 two-paragraph argument: checks whether students can hold two contradictory claims in tension and support each with textual evidence, a prerequisite for the essay.
- Lesson 4 peer-assessed paragraph: checks whether students can construct an argument about what a text refuses to say, not just what it says — a higher-order analytical move.
- Lesson 5 thesis rewrite exit ticket: checks whether students' final thesis sentences are genuinely argumentative — naming method, effect, and textual grounding — before essays are marked.
Summative task
Write a sustained analytical essay of at least 500 words in response to the following question: 'Le Guin presents Omelas as a place of happiness that the reader cannot accept and cannot refuse. How does she use narrative voice and structural choice across all three chapters to trap the reader in this paradox?' Your essay must have four paragraphs, each focused on a different chapter or technique, and must embed at least one quotation per paragraph drawn from the chapter under discussion. You should argue a clear position in your opening thesis and return to it in your conclusion.
Marking notes
Top-band responses will take a clear stance on Le Guin's method — not simply asserting that the text 'makes the reader think,' but rather explaining how the use of second-person address, narrative self-interruption, and strategic omission collaborate throughout all three chapters. Mid-band responses recognize these techniques and their effects but analyze each chapter separately. Lower-band responses tend to summarize the child's situation without linking it to the narrator's rhetorical strategies. The main difference lies in whether the student can articulate what the text deliberately avoids — especially in Chapter 3 — and why that avoidance serves as an argument in itself.
Standards covered
- Common Core 11 12
- RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
- RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story, including where a story is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed.
- RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
- RL.11-12.6 — Analyse a case in which grasping point of view requires distinguishing what is directly stated in a text from what is really meant.
- AP Literature
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Explain the function of a narrator or speaker, including how point of view shapes meaning.
- Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Explain the function of specific words and phrases in a literary text, including connotation and denotation.
- Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of a character, including how characters are developed and what they reveal about theme.
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1.E) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about an interpretation of literature using relevant evidence.
- AQA
- AO1 — Read, understand and respond to texts, maintaining a critical style and developing an informed personal response.
- AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, using relevant subject terminology.
- AO3 — Show understanding of the relationships between texts and the contexts in which they were written and received.
- Edexcel
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts.
- AO5 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
- IB Lit
- Criterion A — Demonstrate knowledge and understanding of the work, including how meaning is constructed through narrative voice and structural choice.
- Criterion B — Analyse the effects of literary features and techniques, including point of view, diction, and structural omission.
- Criterion C — Develop a focused, well-organised literary argument supported by relevant textual evidence.
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