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Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12

Fences — Two-Lesson Scheme of Work

Lesson 1 begins with Troy's storytelling voice from Act One, where he shares his exaggerated tale of wrestling Death and discusses the fence with Cory. This sets the stage for how Wilson employs the blues idiom and symbolic language to deepen our understanding of character and theme. Students will closely analyze the language, form, and structure before writing an annotated paragraph. In Lesson 2, the focus shifts to writing: students will craft a complete exam-style response that compares Troy's treatment of Cory in Act One with Rose's final speech in Act Two. They will use selected quotations to illustrate how Wilson explores the tension between love and damage within the Black family.

Objectives

  • Analyse how Wilson uses Troy's storytelling voice — specifically his Death monologue in Act One — to construct a character simultaneously heroic and self-deceiving.
  • Identify and explain how the fence itself functions as a multivalent symbol across both acts, tracking how its meaning shifts between Rose's and Troy's interpretations.
  • Write an evidenced exam-style paragraph that embeds at least two quotations from Fences and links language choices to the themes of betrayal and the American Dream.
  • Evaluate how Wilson positions the audience to hold competing sympathies for Troy and Rose by the end of Act Two, using Rose's 'I planted myself inside you' speech as a pivot point.
  • Contextualise Wilson's dramatic choices within the blues tradition and the post-integration racial landscape of 1950s Pittsburgh.

The sequence

  1. Lesson 1: Troy's Voice and the Fence: Close Reading Act One and Act Two

    60 min · ch. 1, 2
    Do now

    Read the following two lines printed on your sheet and answer in silence: Troy tells Cory, 'I don't want him to be like me.' Later he says, 'A man got to take care of his family.' Write two sentences: what do these lines suggest Troy believes a father's role is, and what contradiction do you notice between them?

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of Troy's Death monologue from Act One, Scene One — starting with 'Death ain't nothing but a fastball on the outside corner' — to illustrate how Wilson employs the baseball metaphor to express Troy's desire to mythologize his own suffering. Highlight how the blues structure, characterized by repetition and boastful phrases like 'I looked him dead in the eye,' crafts a speaker who is both captivating and untrustworthy. Connect this to Wilson's goal of providing Black working-class men with an epic narrative. Guide students on how to transition from quotation to language feature to effect to theme seamlessly within a single sentence.

    Independent task

    Students receive a printed excerpt featuring Rose's speech in Act Two, Scene One — "I been standing with you! I been right here with Troy Maxson the whole time" — alongside Troy's earlier line to Bono in Act One, Scene One: "I don't want to make a bad mistake. I don't want to hurt Rose." After reading these passages, students work individually to annotate them, focusing on: (1) a specific word or phrase that highlights the speaker's emotional state; (2) a structural or formal feature such as repetition, direct address, or rhythm; (3) a connection to one of the play's themes. Following this analysis, they write a fully developed analytical paragraph of at least eight sentences, arguing how Wilson illustrates the disparity between Troy's self-perception and the reality that Rose has experienced. The paragraph must incorporate both quotations and reference at least one dramatic technique.

    Exit ticket

    In exactly two sentences, explain why Wilson gives Troy a blues storytelling voice rather than a naturalistic one — what does that formal choice do to the audience's relationship with him as a character?

  2. Lesson 2: Writing About Fences: Love, Damage, and the American Dream in an Exam-Style Response

    60 min · ch. 1, 2
    Do now

    Without looking at your notes, spend four minutes writing about the significance of the fence for Rose and Troy. Use complete sentences and include one quote you remember. You’ll discuss your response with a partner before the class continues.

    Teacher input

    Model the opening two paragraphs of a full exam-style response to the question: "How does Wilson present the relationship between Troy and Cory as both an expression of love and an act of destruction?" By examining Act One, Scene Three, where Troy declares, "I ain't got to like you… it's my job to take care of you," we can see a clear tension in their relationship. The verb "job" indicates that Troy views fatherhood not as a bond of love, but as a mere obligation. This perspective strips away the emotional connection typically associated with being a father, reflecting a broader societal context where Black men were often denied the dignity and ambition that comes with such roles.

    In contrast, Cory’s line in Act Two, Scene Four, "You ain't never gave me nothing!" serves as a powerful counterpoint. This statement highlights Cory's feelings of betrayal and abandonment, suggesting that despite Troy’s claims of responsibility, he has failed to provide emotional support. By placing this quotation alongside Troy’s earlier declaration, we deepen the argument about how their relationship is marked by both love and destruction. Cory's resentment illustrates the destructive impact of Troy’s rigid view of fatherhood, revealing the complexities of love intertwined with pain and disappointment.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with crafting a full exam-style response of 500–700 words to the question: "How does Wilson use the relationship between Troy and Rose to explore the cost of the American Dream in Fences?" Your response should: start with a clear thesis that identifies both characters and a specific tension; include a close reading of Rose's speech from Act Two, Scene One — "I gave eighteen years of my life to stand in the shadow of your dreams" — analyzing at least two language choices (for instance, the metaphor of "shadow" and the significance of the number eighteen); present a second paragraph interpreting Troy's line from Act One, Scene One — "I don't want to make a bad mistake" — as dramatic irony when considering the events that follow; include a third paragraph discussing Gabriel's trumpet moment at the end of Act Two and what it indicates about the accessibility of the American Dream for the Maxson family; and conclude by assessing how Wilson influences the audience's perception — do we condemn Troy, mourn him, or experience a mix of both? Students will write under timed conditions, using only their annotated extracts from Lesson 1 and no additional notes.

    Exit ticket

    Write one sentence that completes the following: 'Wilson does not allow the audience to simply condemn Troy because…' — your sentence must name a specific moment from the play and explain what it does to the audience's sympathy.

Activities

Death Monologue Hot-Seat 15 min · whole class

One student reads Troy's Death monologue from Act One, Scene One aloud ('Death ain't nothing but a fastball on the outside corner…'). The class then hot-seats that student as Troy, firing questions about why he shares this story with Bono and Cory. The student in the hot-seat has to respond in character, using Troy's voice. Each student then writes a single sentence: 'Troy tells this story because…' and includes a quotation.

Fence Symbol Tracking 20 min · pairs

Each pair gets a timeline sheet featuring six instances where the fence is referenced or constructed throughout Acts One and Two. Partners note down who discusses the fence, their interpretation of its significance, and how that meaning has changed since the last mention. Once finished, pairs return the completed timeline along with a two-sentence conclusion that explains what the fence symbolizes by the end of the play when Cory and Raynell complete it together.

Rose vs Troy: Competing Monologue Analysis 25 min · individual

Students get two printed monologues displayed side by side: Troy's speech, "Alberta was something I could lose myself in," from Act Two, Scene One, and Rose's immediate response that starts with "I been standing with you!" Each student makes independent annotations focusing on tone, imagery, and dramatic function, then composes a comparative paragraph of at least six sentences arguing which speech Wilson makes more dramatically powerful and why. They return both the annotated sheet and the paragraph.

Context Card Sort 15 min · groups

Groups of three get a set of twelve cards: six contextual facts (Jackie Robinson integrating baseball in 1947; the blues tradition; the Hill District; the civil rights movement; Wilson's Pittsburgh Cycle; the 1950s garbage-collector strike) and six quotations from the play. Each group matches a quotation to the context card they believe best explains it, then writes one sentence for each pair detailing the connection. Finally, they return the matched cards along with their written explanations.

Gabriel's Trumpet: Stage Direction Close Reading 20 min · pairs

Pairs receive the complete final stage direction from Act Two, which details Gabriel's effort to blow his trumpet followed by his dance. They respond to three written questions: (1) What does Wilson's stage direction instruct the actor to do that the script alone cannot convey? (2) In what way does the trumpet's silence relate to Troy's life? (3) Why do you think Wilson chooses to conclude with a dance instead of a speech? Pairs submit their written answers, ensuring each response has at least three sentences.

Thesis Workshop: Arguing About Troy 20 min · pairs

Each pair gets three weak thesis statements about Troy Maxson and needs to rewrite each one to name a specific tension, steer clear of plot summary, and serve as a solid opening for an exam paragraph. For instance, 'Troy is a complicated character' should transform into a specific, debatable claim. Pairs will then present their best rewrite to another pair and vote on which is more compelling, providing a one-sentence explanation for their choice. They will return all three original statements along with their rewrites and the voting results noted.

Assessment

  • Do-Now check in Lesson 1: teacher scans written responses for whether students have identified a contradiction in Troy's statements about fatherhood, not merely paraphrased them.
  • Annotation check mid-Lesson 1: teacher circulates to confirm that students are naming specific language features (e.g. repetition, imperative verbs, metaphor) rather than writing general comments about 'tone'.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 1: teacher reads responses to check that students can name the blues idiom as a formal choice and articulate its effect on audience sympathy — vague answers about Troy being 'interesting' are flagged for follow-up.
  • Pair share in Lesson 2 Do-Now: teacher listens to check that students are distinguishing between Rose's and Troy's symbolic readings of the fence, not conflating them.
  • Thesis workshop activity: teacher checks that rewritten thesis statements name a specific dramatic tension and avoid plot summary before students begin their timed response.

Summative task

Write a full response of 500–700 words to the following question: 'How does Wilson use the relationship between Troy and Rose to explore the cost of the American Dream in Fences?' Your response must open with a clear thesis, close-read Rose's 'I gave eighteen years of my life to stand in the shadow of your dreams' from Act Two Scene One (analysing at least two language choices), read Troy's 'I don't want to make a bad mistake' from Act One Scene One as dramatic irony, address Gabriel's trumpet moment at the close of Act Two, and conclude by evaluating how Wilson positions the audience in relation to Troy.

Marking notes

Top-band responses will build a coherent argument regarding the American Dream as a racialized and gendered construct, utilizing Rose's 'shadow' metaphor along with Troy's dramatic irony to illustrate Wilson's technique rather than his message. Mid-band responses will recognize the same quotations but view them as examples of theme rather than as indicators of craft. Lower-band responses will summarize the plot and include quotations without any analysis. The marker is particularly focused on how students engage with Wilson's dramatic form—such as stage directions, the blues register, and the symbolic fence—not just with character psychology.

Standards covered

Common Core 11 12
  • RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from it, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.
  • RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama, including where a story is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed.
  • RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone.
  • RL.11-12.6 — Analyse a case in which grasping a point of view requires distinguishing what is directly stated in a text from what is really meant (e.g. satire, irony, understatement).
AP Literature
  • Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about an interpretation of literature and explains a line of reasoning.
  • Textual Evidence (LAN-1.D) — Identify and explain textual evidence that supports a thesis, including how the evidence supports the line of reasoning.
  • Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Explain the function of figurative language in a literary text, including metaphor, symbol, and imagery.
  • Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of a character, including how complex or ambiguous characters contribute to the meaning of a literary work.
  • Narration and Structure (STR-1) — Explain the function of structure and the effect of an author's structural choices on the overall meaning of a literary work.
AQA
  • AO1 — Read, understand and respond to texts; maintain a critical style and develop an informed personal response; use textual references, including quotations, to support and illustrate interpretations.
  • AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, using relevant subject terminology where appropriate.
  • AO3 — Show understanding of the relationships between texts and the contexts in which they were written and received.
  • AO4 — Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.
Edexcel
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
  • AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, including the effects of language, form and structure.
  • AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
  • AO5 — Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations.
IB Lit
  • Criterion A — Knowledge, understanding and interpretation: demonstrate detailed knowledge of Fences and construct a supported interpretation of how Wilson presents the American Dream.
  • Criterion B — Analysis and evaluation: analyse how Wilson's use of the blues idiom, symbolic stage directions, and dramatic irony shape meaning and effect.
  • Criterion C — Focus and organisation: develop a coherent, well-structured argument sustained across the full response.

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