Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12
A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man — a five-lesson scheme of work
The sequence begins by immersing students in Joyce's changing prose style and Stephen's early years at Clongowes. It then explores themes of adolescent guilt, the hellfire sermons, and the transformative experience at the beach. Lessons progress from detailed language analysis to structural arguments, culminating in Stephen's aesthetic theory and his threefold rejection of the Church, nation, and family. By the conclusion, students will be able to analyze how Joyce employs style, imagery, and form to portray Stephen's evolving consciousness, and they will be equipped to write a well-supported critical essay on themes of identity, freedom, and artistic vocation in the novel.
Objectives
- Analyse how Joyce's shifting prose style — from baby-talk in Chapter I to diary form in Chapter V — enacts Stephen's psychological and intellectual development.
- Identify and interpret epiphanic moments (the pandying scene, the bird-girl, the villanelle) as structural turning points in Stephen's journey toward artistic vocation.
- Analyse how Father Arnall's hell sermons in Chapter III use rhetoric, imagery, and accumulation to dramatise the power of Catholic guilt over Stephen's consciousness.
- Evaluate how Joyce uses Stephen's relationships with Cranly, Lynch, Davin, and his mother to dramatise the competing claims of friendship, nationalism, and family against artistic freedom.
- Write an evidenced analytical paragraph using embedded quotation and precise language analysis to argue a point about identity, guilt, or freedom in the novel.
- Construct a structured comparative or single-text essay that sustains an argument about Joyce's methods and their effects across at least two chapters.
The sequence
Lesson 1: Baby-talk to Pandying: How Joyce's Prose Grows with Stephen
60 min · ch. 1- Do now
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Model a close reading of the opening paragraph of Chapter I alongside the pandying scene ('He felt the prefect of studies touch his collar…'). Illustrate how the simple, sensory language of childhood ('moocow', 'nicens little boy') shifts to longer, more complex sentences as Stephen's awareness broadens — then tightens once more after a physical shock. Show how free indirect discourse blurs the line between narrator and character, and annotate one sentence from each passage on the board.
- Independent task
Students should choose an additional paragraph from Chapter I (either the Christmas dinner argument or the opening of the Clongowes football field) and construct a PEEL paragraph discussing how Joyce's sentence structure and word choice reveal Stephen's age and emotional state at that time. They need to include at least two quotations and identify one specific linguistic technique. Paragraphs are due at the end of the lesson.
- Exit ticket
Free indirect discourse is a narrative technique that blends the voice of the narrator with the thoughts and feelings of a character. For example, in Chapter I, the narrator reflects a character's inner thoughts, allowing readers to experience their perspective while maintaining the narrative voice. Write it on a sticky note and leave it on the desk.
Lesson 2: Sin and the City: Stephen's Adolescent Double Life in Chapter II
60 min · ch. 2- Do now
Without opening the book, jot down three things you know about Stephen's experience at Belvedere College. After that, formulate one question about why he begins to visit prostitutes. Aim to finish this in five minutes.
- Teacher input
Model a reading of the passage in Chapter II where Stephen walks through the Dublin streets and enters the prostitute's room for the first time ('He felt some dark presence moving irresistibly upon him…' to '…he pressed in an agony of shame and joy'). Show how Joyce uses the city's geography — the winding streets and gas-lit doorways — to reflect Stephen's inner moral confusion. Annotate the verbs of compulsion ('moving irresistibly', 'pressed') to illustrate how Stephen appears passive, surrendering to sensation instead of actively choosing it.
- Independent task
Students will write a comparative paragraph that contrasts Stephen's public persona at Belvedere — where he is a celebrated essayist admired by his classmates — with his hidden nocturnal life as described in Chapter II. They should include quotes from at least two different moments in the chapter and discuss what this contrast reveals about the theme of identity. The paragraph should be at least 150 words and submitted for grading.
- Exit ticket
Before: > Write the name of one character from Chapter II who represents a social pressure on Stephen, and one quotation that shows that pressure. Two minutes.
After: > Name a character from Chapter II who puts social pressure on Stephen, and include a quote that illustrates that pressure. You have two minutes.
Lesson 3: The Rhetoric of Hell: Father Arnall's Sermons in Chapter III
60 min · ch. 3- Do now
Read the first paragraph of Father Arnall's first sermon in Chapter III ('Every word of it was for him'). Underline all the words that relate to the senses. How many do you find? What pattern stands out to you?
- Teacher input
Model a rhetorical analysis of the passage that details the physical torments of hell in Chapter III ('The blood seethes and boils in the veins, the brains are boiling in the skull…'). Annotate the tricolon structure, the use of the second person ('you'), and the increasing accumulation of sensory detail. Illustrate how Arnall's rhetoric specifically targets the body — the very site of Stephen's sin — and explain how Joyce's portrayal of the sermon through Stephen's consciousness intertwines the priest's words with Stephen's guilty interpretation of them.
- Independent task
Students are tasked with writing a complete analytical paragraph that responds to the question: "How does Joyce use rhetorical techniques in Father Arnall's sermon to dramatize the power of the Catholic Church over Stephen's mind?" They should identify at least two specific rhetorical devices, include accurate quotes from Chapter III, and discuss the impact these techniques have on both the reader and Stephen. This assignment will be submitted for written feedback.
- Exit ticket
One rhetorical technique used in Arnall's sermon is anaphora, which involves the repetition of phrases at the beginning of sentences. This technique is particularly effective in addressing Stephen's specific sin because it emphasizes the weight of his actions and drives home the message of repentance by creating a rhythmic urgency that resonates with the congregation.
Lesson 4: The Bird-Girl Epiphany: Art Against the Church in Chapter IV
60 min · ch. 4- Do now
Read the Director's invitation to Stephen to consider the Jesuit priesthood in Chapter IV ('The Reverend Director… spoke of the need for strong and resolute men…'). Write one word that captures Stephen's feelings during this conversation, and find one quotation from the passage that backs up your choice.
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of the bird-girl passage on Dollymount Strand in Chapter IV ('A girl stood before him in midstream… alone and still, gazing out to sea'). Explore how Joyce crafts the description using a series of similes that transform the girl into a bird and ultimately into a piece of art ('Her image had passed into his soul for ever'). Highlight the transition from physical details to spiritual language — phrases like 'profane joy' and 'holy silence' — and argue that Joyce intentionally adopts the language of Catholicism, redirecting it toward a secular aesthetic experience. This marks the defining moment when Stephen opts for art over the Church.
- Independent task
Students will craft a structured response of at least two paragraphs addressing the question: 'How does Joyce use the Dollymount Strand episode to signify a turning point in Stephen's identity?' In the first paragraph, focus on analyzing the bird-girl passage. The second paragraph should provide a contrast with either the Director's invitation or Stephen's earlier religious devotions from Chapter IV. Make sure to support both paragraphs with quotations. Responses will be collected at the end of the lesson.
- Exit ticket
An epiphany, according to Joyce, is a sudden realization or insight that reveals the essence of a character or situation. The bird-girl moment qualifies as one because it offers a profound understanding of beauty and freedom, striking a deep emotional chord in the protagonist.
Lesson 5: Forge and Fly: Stephen's Triple Refusal and the Diary in Chapter V
60 min · ch. 5- Do now
Read Stephen's last diary entry in Chapter V ('April 26. Mother is organizing my new secondhand clothes…'). Note: (a) one thing Stephen is leaving behind, (b) one thing he is moving toward, (c) one word that captures the tone. You have five minutes, and please hold off on discussion for now.
- Teacher input
Model a reading of the conversation between Stephen and Cranly in Chapter V, where Stephen declines his Easter duty, stating, "I will not serve that in which I no longer believe, whether it calls itself my home, my fatherland, or my church." The tricolon "home… fatherland… church" serves as a structural echo of the novel's three competing claims on Stephen. The transition to a diary format in the final pages — presented in a fragmented, first-person, present-tense style — reflects the freedom Stephen is asserting. Furthermore, the invocation of Daedalus, "Old father, old artificer, stand me now and ever in good stead," transforms classical myth into a personal artistic manifesto, emphasizing Stephen's journey toward self-definition and creative independence.
- Independent task
Students are tasked with creating a complete essay plan that includes an introduction, three topic sentences, and a conclusion, each featuring a selected quotation. The focus is on the question: 'How does Joyce present the conflict between individual freedom and social obligation in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man?' They should reference at least three chapters and discuss Stephen's relationships with at least two named characters. Once the plans are submitted, the teacher will provide annotations on the logic of the arguments and the choices of evidence.
- Exit ticket
Stephen's phrase 'silence, exile, and cunning' refers to using these elements as a clever artistic strategy to navigate and escape oppressive environments.
Activities
Prose Style Timeline 20 min · groups
Each group is given six unlabelled prose extracts from Chapters I–V, printed without chapter numbers. They need to arrange these extracts in chronological order and justify their placements by annotating the vocabulary, syntax, and narrative perspective. Afterward, they submit a ranked strip with written annotations that explain the stylistic clues they utilized. This activity helps students learn to interpret style as evidence of development.
Arnall's Sermon: Rhetoric Markup 25 min · pairs
Pairs receive a printed excerpt of Father Arnall's sermon about hell from Chapter III ('Consider then what it must be to bear the sting of this anguish…'). Using a color-coded key (tricolon = blue, second-person address = red, sensory detail = green, repetition = yellow), they highlight every rhetorical device they can identify, and then write two sentences describing which device they find most persuasive and why. They return the annotated excerpt along with their two-sentence explanation.
Epiphany Cards 15 min · individual
Each student gets a card with five key moments from the novel: the pandying (Ch. 1), the prostitute's room (Ch. 2), Stephen's confession (Ch. 3), the bird-girl (Ch. 4), and the 'I will not serve' declaration (Ch. 5). They rank these moments from least to most epiphanic, providing a sentence of justification for each ranking. The teacher collects the cards and uses the variety of responses to kick off the next discussion on what Joyce means by epiphany.
Character Pressure Map 20 min · pairs
Pairs receive a blank diagram featuring Stephen in the center, with six spokes labeled: Cranly, Lynch, Davin, Simon Dedalus, Mary Dedalus, and the Church. For each spoke, they need to note the claim that each character or institution has on Stephen, along with a quotation from any chapter that illustrates Stephen either resisting or giving in to that claim. Once they finish, they return the completed map, which can then be used as a resource for planning their essays.
Villanelle Close Reading 30 min · individual
Students are given the complete text of Stephen's villanelle ('Are you not weary of ardent ways…') from Chapter V, along with three brief critical statements discussing whether it supports or challenges Stephen's artistic goals. They will compose a paragraph arguing which critical perspective is most effectively backed by the poem's form and imagery, incorporating at least two quotes from the villanelle. This paragraph will be submitted and can act as a formative writing assessment.
Diary Entry Imitation 25 min · individual
Students read Stephen's diary entries from the last pages of Chapter V, paying attention to the short, present-tense, and fragmented style. They then write three diary entries (each 3–5 sentences) from either Cranly's or Mary Dedalus's perspective, reacting to Stephen's departure. The entries should capture what that character knows and feels, using language that fits their characterization in the novel. Students submit all three entries; this task evaluates their grasp of perspective and characterization.
Assessment
- Lesson 1 exit ticket: student can define free indirect discourse and locate an example in Chapter I — checks whether the core stylistic concept has landed before the sequence builds on it.
- Lesson 2 PEEL paragraph: marker looks for a clear contrast between Stephen's public and private selves, accurate quotation from two moments in Chapter II, and a named technique — not just plot summary.
- Lesson 3 rhetorical analysis paragraph: marker checks for identification of at least two named devices (e.g. tricolon, anaphora, second-person address) in Arnall's sermon, accurate quotation, and a comment on effect on Stephen specifically.
- Lesson 4 two-paragraph response: marker looks for the bird-girl passage being read as an epiphany, the contrast with the Director's invitation or earlier religious devotion being made explicit, and both paragraphs evidenced.
- Lesson 5 essay plan: marker annotates whether the argument is sustained across three chapters, whether at least two named characters are used as evidence, and whether the topic sentences are arguable claims rather than descriptions.
Summative task
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Write a complete essay of 800–1,000 words addressing the question: "How does Joyce portray Stephen's relationships with the Church, his family, and his friends to illustrate the price of artistic freedom in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man?" Be sure to closely reference at least three chapters, analyze specific passages with embedded quotations, and maintain a coherent argument throughout. You can begin with your essay plan from Lesson 5 as a foundation.
Summary of Changes Made:
- Adjusted phrasing for a more natural flow while preserving the original meaning and structure.
Marking notes
Top-band responses present a specific and debatable thesis regarding the cost of freedom — it’s not just about Stephen 'breaking free'. They delve into Joyce's techniques (like free indirect discourse, epiphanic structure, and rhetorical contrast) instead of simply summarizing the plot. Mid-band responses pinpoint relevant moments and provide accurate quotes but focus more on content than on technique. Lower-band responses recount Stephen's choices without engaging in a deeper analysis of how Joyce builds those choices. Across all bands, examiners seek precise references to named characters and specific passages, rather than vague assertions about 'the themes'.
Standards covered
- Common Core 11 12
- RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
- RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story (e.g. where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).
- RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone.
- RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
- W.11-12.1 — Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
- AP Literature
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that interprets a literary text and requires defence with evidence.
- Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Explain the function of figurative language in a literary text, including simile and metaphor in the bird-girl passage (Ch.4).
- Narration (NAR-1) — Explain the function of point of view and the effect of free indirect discourse on the reader's relationship to Stephen's consciousness.
- Structure (STR-1) — Explain how the sequence and juxtaposition of scenes (e.g. hell sermons followed by confession, Ch.3; Director's invitation followed by epiphany, Ch.4) contribute to the novel's meaning.
- Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of contrasting characters (Cranly, Lynch, Davin) in illuminating the protagonist's values and choices.
- AQA
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, including Joyce's use of free indirect discourse, rhetorical accumulation in the hell sermons, and epiphanic structure.
- AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received, including Irish Catholic nationalism, the Jesuit education system, and Joyce's own exile.
- AO5 — Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations, including critical responses to whether Stephen's aesthetic theory is endorsed or ironised by the novel's form.
- Edexcel
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, with specific attention to Joyce's evolving prose style and structural use of epiphany.
- AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received, including the Irish Literary Revival, Jesuit pedagogy, and early twentieth-century modernism.
- AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts, including the relationship between Portrait and the Bildungsroman tradition.
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