Lewis Carroll published both "The Walrus and the Carpenter" and "Jabberwocky" in *Through the Looking-Glass* in 1871, making them the two most quoted poems in the book. When you put them side by side, the question that Carroll's editor raised becomes clear: which one is truly darker? At first glance, "Jabberwocky" seems more menacing—it starts with a warning about a monster and ends with a severed head. In contrast, "The Walrus and the Carpenter" comes off as a light-hearted beach ballad. However, the Jabberwock is a fantastical beast in made-up language, and the hero dispatches it without much fuss. The oysters, on the other hand, are very real in their innocence: they tidy their coats, wash their faces, and eagerly hop toward their doom while the Walrus sheds false tears and the Carpenter asks for another slice. Both poems showcase Carroll's knack for hiding serious themes beneath a playful surface. The distinction lies in what each playful exterior conceals. "Jabberwocky" conceals a hero's journey; "The Walrus and the Carpenter" reveals a deception. One poem concludes with a father's embrace; the other ends in silence where a group of children once was. The darker poem is the one told in straightforward English.
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The Walrus and the CarpenterJabberwocky
Lewis Carroll published both "The Walrus and the Carpenter" and "Jabberwocky" in *Through the Looking-Glass* in 1871, making them the two most quoted poems in the book. When you put them side by side, the question that Carroll's editor raised becomes clear: which one is truly darker?
Poets
Lewis Carroll
Years
1871
§01 The thesis
The Walrus and the Carpenter & Jabberwocky
A reader's case for putting these two side by side — what each carries, and what they argue when they sit on the same page.
§02 The dialectic axes
The two poems on four axes
Each axis isolates one specific vector — speaker, form, image, closing move — and reads the two poems against each other on that single dimension.
Axis
Poem A
The Walrus and the Carpenter
Lewis Carroll
Poem B
Jabberwocky
Lewis Carroll
01Speaker
Poem A · The Walrus and the Carpenter
"The Walrus and the Carpenter" features an unnamed third-person narrator who adopts a cheerful, reportorial tone—almost journalistic in its lack of editorializing. The narrator simply mentions that the oysters are eaten, remarking that this was "scarcely odd," using the same light detachment one might apply to the weather. This flatness serves a purpose: the poem deliberately avoids expressing outrage for the reader.
Poem B · Jabberwocky
"Jabberwocky" features two speakers within a third-person narrative: a father who cautions his son, and the same father who rejoices in the victory. The narrator takes a backseat. The emotional impact comes through the father's direct words — "Come to my arms, my beamish boy!" — providing the poem with a heartfelt, personal ending that the Walrus poem intentionally avoids.
02Form
Poem A · The Walrus and the Carpenter
Carroll employs a modified ballad stanza that extends to six lines, allowing space for a comic or sinister punchline in the last couplet of each stanza. This form is unyielding—18 stanzas, without breaks or section divisions—reflecting the relentless march of the oysters toward their demise. The rhyme scheme (ABCBDB) introduces one unrhymed line in each stanza, creating a small yet persistent asymmetry that prevents the poem from fully settling.
Poem B · Jabberwocky
"Jabberwocky" is more concise: it features seven quatrains in a straightforward ABAB pattern, and it wraps up in fewer than 30 lines. This brevity aligns well with the quest structure—there's no space for doubt or moral ambiguity, just the straightforward journey of leaving, battling, and coming back. The repeated opening and closing stanzas form a circular frame that gives the hero's world a sense of stability and wholeness both before and after the adventure.
03Image
Poem A · The Walrus and the Carpenter
The central image in "The Walrus and the Carpenter" features the Walrus, who holds a pocket-handkerchief to his streaming eyes while sorting the oysters by size for eating. This is the poem's most striking image because it captures two conflicting emotions simultaneously: a genuine-looking sorrow and the act of predation. Carroll doesn’t resolve this contradiction, which is precisely why the image sticks in our minds.
Poem B · Jabberwocky
The central image in "Jabberwocky" shows the hero "galumphing back" with the Jabberwock's head. The made-up word "galumphing" — a mix of galloping and triumphant — serves a specific purpose: it gives the victory an awkward, boyish feel instead of a heroic and grand one. The monster's "eyes of flame" provide the poem's only truly scary image, and they are snuffed out in just one couplet.
04Closing move
Poem A · The Walrus and the Carpenter
The last stanza of "The Walrus and the Carpenter" delivers a punchline that doubles as an erasure: "But answer came there none — / And this was scarcely odd, because / They'd eaten every one." This joke elicits a laugh while simultaneously acknowledging a mass death. Carroll's final twist draws the reader in — you laughed, and now you're aware of that laughter.
Poem B · Jabberwocky
"Jabberwocky" concludes by echoing its opening stanza word for word, bringing us back to the realm of "slithy toves" and "mome raths," suggesting that the adventure left the world unchanged. This repetition offers comfort: the hero has returned home, the monster has vanished, and life goes on as usual. While the Walrus poem finishes with a sense of loss, Jabberwocky closes on a note of continuity.
§03 Synthesis & departure
The shared ground and the divergence
Shared
Both poems are from the same book, written by the same author during a similar time in Carroll's career, so they have a lot in common. Each follows a strict ballad-like meter, alternating between four-beat and three-beat lines in a sing-song rhythm that keeps readers moving too quickly to feel any discomfort. They both feature invented or distorted creatures (like the Walrus, the Carpenter, the Jabberwock, and the Jubjub bird) that somehow seem believable in their own worlds. Each poem presents a clash between something young and inexperienced and something older and more powerful. They also use repetition as a structural tool: the opening stanza of "Jabberwocky" is repeated verbatim at the end, while "The Walrus and the Carpenter" uses the refrain "The Carpenter said nothing but" for a quietly damning effect. Additionally, readers quickly interpreted both poems as allegories — for politics, predatory capitalism, and colonialism — even though Carroll himself was resistant to strict interpretations.
Where they diverge
The most notable difference lies in the language. "Jabberwocky" creates its universe with made-up words — "brillig," "slithy," "vorpal," "galumphing" — which forms a sort of barrier. The monster is truly terrifying, yet it resides in a realm that feels just out of reach. On the other hand, "The Walrus and the Carpenter" employs straightforward English without any invented terms: "But answer came there none — / And this was scarcely odd, because / They'd eaten every one." The second difference is in moral structure. "Jabberwocky" presents a clear quest: the danger is identified, the hero takes action, the monster is defeated, and the father rejoices. There's no doubt about who the antagonist is. In contrast, "The Walrus and the Carpenter" presents a morally complex situation — the Walrus cries as he consumes, while the Carpenter remains indifferent, focused solely on his meal, and Carroll does not offer either a fitting punishment. The oysters simply vanish. This unresolved moral ambiguity is what gives the poem its lasting impact.
§04 A reader's order of operations
Which to read first
If you entered through "Jabberwocky" and enjoyed the playful language and classic hero's journey, check out "The Walrus and the Carpenter" next — but take your time with it. Carroll ditches the nonsense words this time, and the straightforward English makes the betrayal hit harder than any monster could. If you began with the Walrus poem and found its humor a bit unsettling, "Jabberwocky" shows a version of Carroll where the right person triumphs and the father is waiting at home. They’re the same author in two very different moods, and reading both back-to-back is the quickest way to grasp Carroll's true talent.
§05 Reader's questions
On The Walrus and the Carpenter vs Jabberwocky, frequently asked
Answer
Yes, often — particularly in courses focused on Victorian literature, children's literature, or nonsense poetry. They come from the same source text (*Through the Looking-Glass*, 1871) and pair well because they both explore similar themes of language and darkness, yet they offer contrasting perspectives.
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Both poems were published in the same book in December 1871, so neither strictly comes before the other in print. "Jabberwocky" appears first in the book, as it's the poem Alice reads in Chapter 1, while "The Walrus and the Carpenter" is recited by Tweedledee in Chapter 4.
Answer
From "The Walrus and the Carpenter," the memorable quote often heard is "'The time has come,' the Walrus said, / 'To talk of many things: / Of shoes — and ships — and sealing-wax — / Of cabbages — and kings.'" In "Jabberwocky," the line most frequently quoted is "'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves / Did gyre and gimble in the wabe" — this is both the opening and the closing line.
Answer
Carroll deliberately leaves this unresolved. In *Through the Looking-Glass*, Tweedledee asks Alice which character she prefers, and she chooses the Walrus because he felt sorry for the oysters. Tweedledum counters that the Walrus actually ate more of them. The Carpenter, while less sentimental, likely consumes less. Carroll is said to have told his illustrator John Tenniel that the Carpenter could represent any tradesman — whether a Baronet or a Butterfly — indicating that he was more focused on illustrating that sympathy and predation can coexist rather than assigning blame.
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Carroll elaborated on some of the made-up words in a later essay titled "Humpty Dumpty's Recitation." In it, Humpty Dumpty describes "brillig" as four o'clock in the afternoon and "slithy" as a mix of lithe and slimy. The overall story is easy to follow even without the glossary: a boy is warned about a monster, goes to seek it out, defeats it, and returns home. The nonsensical words add depth and richness to the tale without muddling the storyline.
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Both have seen extensive adaptations. "The Walrus and the Carpenter" features in Disney's 1951 *Alice in Wonderland* as an animated segment, and John Lennon's lyric "I am the walrus" directly references Carroll's poem. "Jabberwocky" has been set to music, turned into a short film, and inspired the title of Terry Gilliam's 1977 medieval comedy. Specific words from "Jabberwocky" — especially "chortle" and "galumph" — have made their way into standard English dictionaries.
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Carroll doesn't provide an explicit moral, which contributes to the poem's unsettling nature. The nearest hint at a lesson comes from the eldest Oyster, who declines to leave and ultimately survives — yet Carroll doesn't highlight this nor grant the elder a triumphant moment. Readers seeking a moral might conclude something like "beware those who show the most sympathy," but Carroll appears more focused on fostering a sense of lingering discomfort rather than offering a neat conclusion.