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Persuasion by Jane Austen — a five-lesson scheme of work

This sequence starts with exploring identity and class through first impressions (Ch. 1–2), then examines the emotional toll of persuasion (Ch. 4–6) and highlights the crisis at Lyme Regis as a key structural turning point (Ch. 7–8). It continues with the complex web of deception and free indirect discourse in Bath (Ch. 11–13) and concludes with Wentworth's letter, which brings together themes of voice, gender, and second chances (Ch. 14–15). By the end, students will be able to analyze how Austen employs free indirect discourse, irony, and structural contrasts to convey Anne's inner thoughts, discuss persuasion as a theme and moral force, and write well-supported analytical paragraphs suitable for examinations.

Objectives

  • Analyse how Austen uses free indirect discourse to present Anne Elliot's interiority and moral intelligence across the novel.
  • Analyse how Sir Walter's relationship with the Baronetage in Chapter 1 establishes social class and vanity as structural targets of Austen's irony.
  • Explain how the Lyme Regis accident (Chapters 7–8) functions as a structural turning point that reverses the power dynamic between Anne and Wentworth.
  • Evaluate how Austen presents persuasion itself as both a moral failing and a moral virtue through the contrasting figures of Lady Russell and Louisa Musgrove.
  • Write a fully evidenced analytical paragraph that embeds quotation, analyses language and form, and connects to context.
  • Construct a sustained argument about gender and power in Persuasion, drawing on evidence from at least three moments in the novel.

The sequence

  1. Lesson 1: Sir Walter's Mirror: Class, Vanity and Austen's Irony in Chapter 1

    60 min · ch. 1, 2
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    1. Sir Walter Elliot is portrayed as someone who values his own entertainment above all else, suggesting a self-indulgent or superficial nature.
    2. His preference for reading only the Baronetage indicates a preoccupation with social status and lineage, hinting at his vanity and concern for appearances.
    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of the Baronetage passage in Chapter 1—particularly the moment when Austen notes Sir Walter's annotation, "Heir presumptive, William Walter Elliot, Esq.," and the blank space he leaves for "future classes." Illustrate how the free indirect discourse merges the narrator's voice with Sir Walter's self-congratulation, making the irony inherent in the structure rather than explicitly stated. Guide students in naming this technique, quoting accurately, and connecting it to Austen's critique of inherited rank versus earned merit in the post-Napoleonic context.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with writing a PEEL paragraph (150–200 words) that responds to the question: "How does Austen use the Baronetage in Chapter 1 to portray Sir Walter as a figure of satire?" They are required to include at least two quotations from Chapter 1, identify either free indirect discourse or irony as a technique, and connect their analysis to the social-class context of the novel. Paragraphs should be submitted either on paper or digitally for grading.

    Exit ticket

    Free indirect discourse is a narrative technique that blends the voice of the narrator with a character's thoughts and feelings. One word from Chapter 1 that reflects Sir Walter's voice is "handsome."

  2. Lesson 2: 'A Strong Mind': Anne, Lady Russell and the Ethics of Persuasion in Chapters 2 and 6

    60 min · ch. 2, 6
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    Chapter 2 reveals that Anne was convinced to end her engagement. Reflect on this without referring to the text: was Lady Russell justified in her persuasion? Provide one supporting reason and one opposing reason. You have four minutes.

    Teacher input

    Model a reading of the hazel-nut speech in Chapter 6, where Wentworth tells Louisa: "The worst flaw in a character that is too yielding and indecisive is that no one can truly rely on it." Austen uses free indirect discourse here, allowing us to perceive Wentworth's bias. The term "firmness" takes on an ironic twist, especially since Louisa's so-called "firmness" leads to the Cobb accident in the subsequent chapter. This structural irony operates not only within the confines of a single sentence but also spans across chapters, underscoring the disconnect between perception and reality.

    Independent task

    Students annotate a printed extract: the paragraph in Chapter 2 that starts with 'He was, at that time, a remarkably fine young man' and ends with 'she had been forced into prudence in her youth.' They identify: (a) one instance of free indirect discourse, (b) one word that carries ironic weight, and (c) one phrase that reflects Anne's self-awareness. Below the extract, they write three sentences explaining how Austen encourages the reader to sympathise with Anne instead of supporting Lady Russell's decision. The annotated sheets are then collected.

    Exit ticket

    Write the word Wentworth uses in Chapter 6 to praise Louisa, then provide one reason why Austen wants us to be skeptical of that word by the time we get to Chapter 7.

  3. Lesson 3: The Cobb as Turning Point: Competence, Crisis and Structural Reversal in Chapters 7–8

    60 min · ch. 6, 7, 8
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    Read the single sentence from Chapter 8: 'Anne, there is no one so proper, so capable as Anne.' Write down who says this, to whom, and why it's important considering how Wentworth has treated Anne up to this point. Take three minutes for silent writing.

    Teacher input

    Model a structural analysis of the Lyme Regis sequence using two paired moments: (1) the Chapter 6 hazel-nut speech, where Wentworth criticizes Anne's yielding nature, and (2) his exclamation 'Anne, there is no one so proper, so capable as Anne' in Chapter 8. Illustrate how Austen crafts a reversal: Louisa's 'firmness' leads to chaos, while Anne's composed competence brings about order. Explain how to analyze structure — not merely stating 'this is a turning point' but exploring how the repetition of language throughout the chapters enhances meaning.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with writing a structured comparison (200–250 words): "Compare how Austen presents Anne's character during the walk to Winthrop in Chapter 6 and in the aftermath of Louisa's fall in Chapter 8. What has changed, and how does Austen's language indicate this?" They need to include quotes from both chapters and use the word 'structure' or 'structural' at least once in a meaningful analytical sentence. Written responses should be submitted.

    Exit ticket

    One technique Austen employs in Chapter 8 to illustrate Wentworth's shifting feelings towards Anne is through his use of language. Three words that highlight this change are "tenderness," "regret," and "admiration."

  4. Lesson 4: Surfaces and Secrets: William Elliot, Mrs. Smith and the Limits of Persuasion in Chapters 11–12

    60 min · ch. 11, 12
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    Chapter 11 describes William Elliot as having 'a sensible, discerning mind' and 'a warmth and delicacy' of feeling. Chapter 12 reveals he is a calculating fortune-seeker. Write: Austen employs dramatic irony by presenting a positive description of William Elliot before revealing his true nature. This technique allows readers to initially trust his character, only to later discover the contrast between appearances and reality, heightening the sense of betrayal.

    Teacher input

    Model a reading of Mrs. Smith's revelation scene in Chapter 12 — particularly the moment when she tells Anne that William Elliot 'had long had his eye on' the Elliot family and that 'he cares for nothing but money.' Examine Mrs. Smith's role as a structural device: her social powerlessness (illness, widowhood, financial ruin) grants her a clear perspective that those of higher status lack. Highlight how Austen employs her character to reveal the disparity between Bath's refined appearance and its underlying moral reality, linking this to the novel's critique of class.

    Independent task

    Students should respond in 200 words: "In what ways does Austen utilize Mrs. Smith in Chapter 12 to critique the values of Bath society?" Each response must: include direct quotes from Chapter 12, clarify how Mrs. Smith's social standing enhances her credibility as a moral observer, and connect to another instance in the novel (from any chapter) where outward appearances hide deeper moral truths. Responses will be written and submitted.

    Exit ticket

    Mrs. Smith is a more reliable moral guide than Lady Russell because she offers honest, practical advice based on her own experiences, as evidenced by her support for Anne's happiness despite societal pressures in Chapter 12.

  5. Lesson 5: 'I Can Listen No Longer in Silence': Voice, Gender and the Letter in Chapters 13–14

    60 min · ch. 13, 14, 15
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    Read the opening of Wentworth's letter in Chapter 14: 'You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope.' Without any teacher input, write: what does the word 'pierce' imply about who holds the power in this moment? And regarding 'half agony, half hope' — how does the structure of that phrase affect its meaning? You have two minutes.

    Teacher input

    Model a close reading of the Harville–Anne exchange in Chapter 14, focusing on Anne's speech: 'We certainly do not forget you so soon as you forget us. It is, perhaps, our fate rather than our merit.' This moment marks the first time Austen gives Anne a public, argued voice in the novel, contrasting with the free indirect discourse that has previously conveyed her thoughts in private. The transition from her internal monologue to a spoken argument serves as a significant statement about gender: Anne asserts her right to be heard. This evolution connects to the concert scene in Chapter 13, where their communication remains fragmented and incomplete.

    Independent task

    Students are tasked with crafting a complete examination-style response (250–300 words) to the prompt: 'How does Austen depict the relationship between Anne and Wentworth in Chapters 13 and 14?' In their responses, they should include quotes from both chapters, analyze at least one structural feature (such as the transition from spoken conversation to written letter), and reference gender or social context at least once. This assignment represents the most extensive piece of independent writing in the sequence and will be assessed using the summative rubric.

    Exit ticket

    Wentworth writes a letter instead of speaking to Anne directly, which highlights the constraints of gender roles and power dynamics in Regency society, where men often resorted to written communication to navigate emotional complexities and assert their authority.

Activities

Baronetage Hot-Seat: Sir Walter on Trial 20 min · whole class

One student takes the 'hot seat' as Sir Walter Elliot, holding a copy of Chapter 1. The rest of the class grills him about his values, how he treats Anne, and his choice to rent out Kellynch Hall. In the hot seat, the student must support every answer with quotes from Chapter 1 or 2. After ten minutes, the class votes: is Sir Walter a villain, a fool, or a victim of his society? Each student submits a one-sentence verdict along with a quote as evidence.

Firmness vs. Persuasion: A Spectrum Activity 25 min · groups

Groups of three will receive six character cards (Anne, Lady Russell, Louisa, Wentworth, Sir Walter, William Elliot) along with a printed spectrum line ranging from 'dangerously persuadable' to 'dangerously firm.' Each group will position the characters along the spectrum and add one quotation for each character, sourced from Chapters 2, 6, 7, 8, 11, or 12. Afterward, groups will compare their placements with the rest of the class and discuss any disagreements that come up. Finally, each group will return their annotated spectrum sheet.

Free Indirect Discourse Colour-Coding 20 min · pairs

Pairs receive a printed excerpt from Chapter 4 that details Wentworth's return to Kellynch and Anne's emotional response ('a thousand feelings rushed on Anne'). Using two colored pens, they highlight in one color every phrase that reflects Anne's inner thoughts and in another color every phrase that represents the narrator's external commentary. If they are unsure about a phrase, they circle it and jot down a question. Pairs then return the annotated excerpt along with a two-sentence explanation of what free indirect discourse enables Austen to achieve that a first-person narrator cannot.

The Letter Reconstructed: What Wentworth Almost Said 30 min · individual

Students read the concert scene in Chapter 13, where Wentworth and Anne share incomplete and interrupted sentences. They then write a letter that Wentworth might have composed that evening — before he actually writes it in Chapter 14 — in 100–120 words, capturing his voice and drawing on evidence from Chapters 6, 7, 8, and 13 to illustrate what he now realizes about Anne. The task asks students to integrate characterization from several chapters. Students return the letter along with a brief author's note (two sentences) explaining one choice they made.

Mrs. Smith vs. Lady Russell: Whose Advice Counts? 25 min · pairs

Pairs receive two printed columns of quotations: one from Lady Russell (Chapters 2 and 15) and one from Mrs. Smith (Chapter 12). They must answer three questions in writing: (1) What are each woman's wishes for Anne? (2) What does each woman's social position enable her to perceive or limit her understanding of? (3) Which woman does Austen portray as the more trustworthy moral guide, and how is this conveyed through language? Pairs will return a collaboratively written paragraph of 80–100 words addressing question 3.

Structural Turning Points: Before and After the Cobb 30 min · groups

Groups of four will get a table with two columns: 'Before Lyme (Chapters 4–6)' and 'After Lyme (Chapters 8–15).' They need to find and note three pieces of evidence in each column that illustrate how Wentworth's attitude toward Anne shifts, as well as three pieces showing how Anne's perception of her own worth evolves. Evidence must be quoted directly. After that, groups will write a two-sentence thesis statement summarizing the role of the Cobb accident as a structural turning point. Each group will then return the completed table and thesis statement.

Assessment

  • Exit ticket Lesson 1: student can name free indirect discourse and identify a word belonging to Sir Walter's voice — checks whether the modelled technique has been understood at a basic level.
  • Annotated extract Lesson 2 (Ch.2): labels show whether students can distinguish free indirect discourse from authorial commentary and can explain sympathy as a constructed effect rather than a natural response.
  • Paired quotation from Lessons 3 (Ch.6 and Ch.8): checks whether students can write about structure across chapters rather than treating each chapter as isolated.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 4: one-sentence comparison of Mrs. Smith and Lady Russell — checks whether students have grasped social position as a lens that shapes moral vision, not just character preference.
  • Exit ticket Lesson 5: one sentence on the letter and gender — checks whether students can connect a formal choice (letter vs. speech) to the novel's argument about women's voice.
  • Spectrum activity (Firmness vs. Persuasion): teacher circulates to check whether groups are using textual evidence or relying on impression — a live check on close-reading habits mid-sequence.

Summative task

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Write a detailed response (600–800 words) to the question: "How does Austen portray the idea that persuasion can be both a weakness and a strength in Persuasion?" In your analysis, focus on language, form, and structure. Be sure to reference at least three key moments from the novel: Anne's broken engagement in Chapter 2, the hazel-nut speech in Chapter 6, and Wentworth's letter in Chapter 14. Also, incorporate relevant context that enhances your argument. Your work will be evaluated based on the strength of your argument, the accuracy of your textual evidence, and your insight into how Austen’s choices convey meaning.


Changes Made:

  • Replaced "write a sustained response" with "write a detailed response" for more natural phrasing.
  • Adjusted wording for clarity and flow while retaining the original message and structure.
  • Ensured that the request for analysis and references remained direct and clear.

Marking notes

Top band: The argument is detailed and focused — 'persuasion' is explored as a dynamic moral concept throughout the novel rather than a static theme. The language analysis identifies techniques (like free indirect discourse, structural irony, and lexical contrast) and describes their impact on the reader. Context (such as post-Napoleonic class anxiety and Austen's own life experiences) is integrated seamlessly, rather than added superficially. Lower bands: plot summaries take the place of analysis; quotes are inserted without explanation; 'persuasion' is viewed solely in a negative light, overlooking Lady Russell's genuine concern and Anne's eventual self-assertion in Chapter 14.

Standards covered

Common Core 11 12
  • RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
  • RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g. where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).
  • RL.11-12.4 — Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyse the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone.
  • RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
  • W.11-12.1 — Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
AP Literature
  • Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Explain the function of a narrator or speaker in a literary text, including how point of view shapes meaning.
  • Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of contrasting characters in a literary text.
  • Structure (STR-1) — Explain the function of a significant event or turning point in a literary text.
  • Figurative Language (FIG-1) — Explain the function of specific words and phrases in a literary text, including connotation and irony.
  • Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about an interpretation of literature and support it with evidence.
AQA
  • AO1 — Read, understand and respond to texts; maintain a critical style and develop an informed personal response; use textual references, including quotations, to support and illustrate interpretations.
  • AO2 — Analyse the language, form and structure used by a writer to create meanings and effects, using relevant subject terminology where appropriate.
  • AO3 — Show understanding of the relationships between texts and the contexts in which they were written and received.
  • AO5 (Language Paper, transferable analytical skill) — Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences.
Edexcel
  • AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
  • AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, with reference to language, form, structure and literary context.
  • AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
  • AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts, including comparisons of how authors use language, form and structure to create meaning.

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