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Prompt 01

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AP LiteratureCommon Core ElaIB Language & Literature

In Herman Melville's Bartleby, the Scrivener: A Story of Wall Street (1853), Bartleby's repeated response — "I would prefer not to" — represents more than just obstinacy; it serves as a powerful act of passive resistance against the dehumanizing nature of modern capitalism and bureaucratic work.

Write a well-developed argumentative essay in which you argue how Melville portrays Bartleby's passive resistance as a critique of the alienating effects of capitalist labor on individual identity and human connection. In your essay, be sure to:

  • Analyze at least two or three specific passages where Bartleby's refusals highlight the narrator's limitations or the moral shortcomings of the society he embodies.
  • Explore how Melville's use of setting (the walled office, Wall Street, the Tombs) emphasizes the story's themes of confinement and dehumanization.
  • Reflect on the narrator's changing response to Bartleby and what it reveals about the complicity of well-intentioned individuals within oppressive systems.
  • Frame your argument within a clear, debatable thesis that goes beyond a mere plot summary.

Suggested length

4–6 pages (approximately 1,000–1,500 words) > "Ah, humanity!" — the narrator's final cry. What does Melville ultimately want us to feel — and to question — with those two words?

Prompt 02

Essay task

AP LiteratureCommon Core ElaIB Language & Literature

In Herman Melville's Bartleby, the Scrivener, Bartleby's repeated phrase — "I would prefer not to" — is more than just passive resistance; it serves as a deep critique of how capitalist labor dehumanizes individuals and alienates them in modern society.

Write a well-organized essay arguing how Melville uses Bartleby's passive defiance, the narrator's responses, and the Wall Street setting to critique the relationship between individuals and the economic systems that aim to define and consume them. Your essay should:

  • Present a clear, defensible thesis that moves beyond a simple plot summary.
  • Include specific textual evidence (direct quotes and paraphrases) to back up your argument.
  • Analyze how at least two literary devices (such as symbolism, irony, characterization, setting, tone) enhance Melville's central critique.
  • Explore the complexity of the narrator's role: is he complicit in Bartleby's fate, a sympathetic victim of circumstance, or something more nuanced?
  • Conclude by reflecting on the broader implications of Melville's message — what does the story reveal about human dignity, conformity, and resistance?

Pre-Writing Tip

Think about what it means that Bartleby "prefers not to" instead of simply refusing. How does this choice of wording influence the power dynamic between Bartleby and his employer?

Suggested length

4–6 paragraphs (approximately 700–1,000 words)

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