Fair Isabel, poor simple Isabel! Lorenzo, a young palmer in Love's eye! They could not in the self-same mansion dwell Without some stir of heart, some malady; They could not sit at meals but feel how well It soothed each to be the other by; They could not, sure, beneath the same roof sleep But to each other dream, and nightly weep.
Why it works
Keats sticks to the ABABABCC rhyme scheme, but he employs the couplet to convey deep emotion instead of humor. The six alternating lines express the lovers' unvoiced yearning through anaphora — 'They could not… They could not… They could not' — while the couplet concludes the stanza with a subtle sorrow. The structure of the form carries the emotional weight: the repetition intensifies, and the couplet provides a release. Keats demonstrates that ottava rima can be poignant rather than comedic; the same format that allows Byron to be humorous allows Keats to evoke heartbreak.