The Annotated Edition
Song by James Russell Lowell
Lowell speaks to a violet flower like an old friend, noting its blue petals and tear-like dew as he contemplates profound questions about sadness, longing, and the essence of contentment.
- Core theme
- Faith
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Violet! sweet violet! / Thine eyes are full of tears;
Editor's note
Lowell begins by addressing a violet as if it were a person. The flower's dew-laden petals transform into "eyes full of tears," prompting him to question the meaning behind those tears — are they expressions of sorrow for what has been, or are they filled with admiration for the beauty of the night sky? This inquiry establishes the central theme of the poem: is longing a type of sadness, or does it resemble something more like awe?
Loved one of my youth thou wast, / Of my merry youth,
Editor's note
Now the violet serves as a memory trigger. Lowell links the flower to his younger, carefree self — a "merry youth" filled with openness and honesty. The idea of the past being "ever fresh and green" like sea moss is somewhat surprising: moss underwater remains alive and vibrant even in darkness, hinting that good memories endure even when they're buried in time.
Thy little heart, that hath with love / Grown colored like the sky above,
Editor's note
Here, Lowell provides a beautifully poetic yet scientific reason for why violets are blue: they reflect the color of the sky they gaze at in admiration. He then poses a question about the flower itself—can such a tiny, sky-gazing life truly grasp the profound human pain of yearning for something that will never return? He feels a mix of envy and pity for the violet.
Out on it! no foolish pining / For the sky
Editor's note
"Out on it!" is a mild oath — similar to saying "come on!" or "nonsense!" — and it indicates a clear shift. Lowell realizes he was wrong: the violet isn't pining at all. Its upward gaze isn’t about longing; it’s just in its nature. This moment represents the poem's moral turning point: he desires his own soul to mirror this — to draw its color (its character, its purpose) from what it loves, and to be "self-stayed and high, serene and strong" instead of feeling restlessly dissatisfied.
Violet! dear violet! / Thy blue eyes are only wet
Editor's note
The closing stanza returns to the opening image but brings it to a satisfying conclusion. The violet's "tears" are now understood as expressions of pure joy and love for God ("Him who sent thee"). The flower feels fulfilled, having become exactly what Nature — and, by extension, the divine — intended it to be. That "glad obedience" represents Lowell's ideal: it's not about struggling or mourning, but rather embracing your purpose with complete, joyful acceptance.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The violet
- The violet serves as the poem's main symbol, representing the idea of achieving one's purpose. Its blue color, petite size, and upward-facing petals are interpreted as indicators of a being completely at ease with its identity and its intended role.
- Tears / dew on the petals
- The moisture on the flower's petals takes on different meanings throughout the poem. Initially, it seems to convey grief or longing, but by the end, Lowell concludes it represents joy. This same image can evoke contrasting feelings based on the reader's interpretation — illustrating the very lesson he's learning.
- The sky / blue color
- The sky symbolizes the divine and the ideal. The violet has "grown colored" by constantly looking up at it, implying that continuous love and attention truly influence who you become. Lowell wishes for his own soul to be similarly shaped by his aspirations.
- Moss in the sea
- Moss growing underwater represents a serene vision of life and greenery in an unexpected, hidden environment. It evokes memories of youth that remain clear and vibrant, even when they're tucked away deep in the past.
- The night / stars
- The night sky and its stars embody beauty and transcendence, evoking feelings of either longing or pure wonder. Lowell uses them to differentiate between unhealthy yearning and a healthy, grounded aspiration.
§06Form & structure
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§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem 'Song' by Lowell actually about?
On the surface, this piece reflects on a violet flower, but it delves deeper into the themes of longing and dissatisfaction. Lowell begins by attributing sadness to the flower, only to discover that the violet is actually quite content, simply existing as it was intended. He concludes with a desire for his own soul to embody that same state: purposeful, calm, and free from the weight of unfulfilled aspirations.
Why does Lowell call the violet's petals 'eyes full of tears'?
He's using personification—treating the dew on the flower's petals like tears in a person's eyes. This technique projects human emotion onto the flower, allowing him to explore what those "tears" signify. Throughout the poem, he comes to understand that he misinterpreted the flower's expression; the moisture is actually a sign of joy.
What does 'glad obedience' mean at the end of the poem?
It means happily embracing the purpose you were made for. Lowell taps into a religious concept—that God or Nature crafted each creature with a unique role, and true happiness comes from fully accepting that role instead of chasing after something different. The violet feels "glad" because it has no desire beyond being the best violet it can be.
What does 'Out on it!' mean in the fourth stanza?
It's a slight exclamation of dismissal, similar to saying "nonsense!" or "come off it!" Lowell catches himself mid-thought, pushing back against the notion that the violet longs for the sky. This moment represents the poem's turning point, as he shifts from projecting sadness onto the flower to finding a positive lesson in it instead.
Why does Lowell say the violet's heart 'grown colored like the sky above'?
He's providing a poetic take on why violets are blue: they soak up the sky's color by looking up at it with affection. This isn't just a botanical observation; it leans into a spiritual concept—that ongoing love and focus can transform your essence. He desires the same for his own soul: to be tinted by what he genuinely loves and strives for.
Is this poem religious?
Yes, quietly so. The final stanza talks about "Him who sent thee" — referring to God — and the whole closing movement focuses on a creature fulfilling its divine purpose. However, the religious sentiment is integrated into a nature poem instead of being presented as doctrine. This aligns with the American Transcendentalist tendency to discover God through a deep appreciation of the natural world.
What is the poem's rhyme scheme and does it stay consistent?
The rhyme scheme is flexible and changes from stanza to stanza instead of sticking to a set pattern. Lowell incorporates a mix of short lines and longer ones, along with internal rhymes ("wet / yet", "woe / know") and some near-rhymes. This creates a lyrical, somewhat uneven quality—fitting for a piece called "Song"—as opposed to the more rigid structure found in traditional lyrics.
Who is the 'loved one of my youth' Lowell mentions?
He's talking to the violet as a flower he cherished in his youth — this continues the personification. But there's probably a personal angle as well: Lowell was a young man in love when he penned early lyrics like this, and his longing for "merry youth" and its "openness and truth" hints that he's also grieving the simple emotions of being young.
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MLA
Lowell, James Russell. "Song." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/song-james-russell-lowell/.
APA
Lowell, J. R. (n.d.). Song. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/song-james-russell-lowell/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Song,' James Russell Lowell employs the violet as a sustained apostrophe to enact a spiritual argument: the speaker's initial projection of human grief and longing onto the flower is ultimately reversed, so that the violet's …
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- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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