The Annotated Edition
Discord in Childhood by D. H. Lawrence
A child lies inside a house as a violent storm rages outside, while two adults—most likely his parents—engage in a fierce, ugly argument.
- Poet
- D. H. Lawrence
- Core theme
- Childhood
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
OUTSIDE the house an ash-tree hung its terrible whips, / And at night when the wind arose, the lash of the tree
Editor's note
Lawrence begins with the ash tree outside the family home. The word "whips" carries significant weight from the start — the tree's branches act like instruments of punishment. The wind doesn't merely blow; it causes the tree to "shriek and slash," and Lawrence likens the entire scene to a ship's rigging caught in a storm. This simile evokes feelings of danger, vulnerability to uncontrollable forces, and a chaotic, inhuman noise. The outside world feels violent even before we enter the house.
Within the house two voices arose in anger, a slender lash / Whistling delirious rage, and the dreadful sound
Editor's note
Now we move inside, and the poem's central parallel falls into place. The two voices in the argument are likened to two types of lashes—one "slender" and "whistling," the other "thick" and "booming." Most readers interpret these as a woman's voice and a man's voice, although Lawrence never states this outright. The slender voice feels frantic and high-pitched, while the thick voice has a heavy, crushing quality. The term "delirious" indicates that the anger has surpassed reason. The structure reflects the first stanza: outside, two forces (the wind and the tree) clash; inside, two voices do the same.
Of a thick lash booming and bruising, until it drowned / The other voice in a silence of blood, 'neath the noise of the ash.
Editor's note
The heavier voice wins — it doesn't merely silence the other, it *drowns* it. The phrase "silence of blood" stands out as the poem's most unsettling moment: it implies injury, or at the very least, a wound so profound it transcends words. The poem concludes by zooming out to the ash tree, whose noise now envelops everything. That final image — the child left beneath the sound of the thrashing tree as silence takes over one of the voices — feels bleak and unresolved. The external storm and the internal storm have merged into one.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The ash tree
- The ash tree forms the backbone of the poem. Its thrashing branches mirror the chaotic violence within the house, both visually and sonically. In folklore, ash trees are linked to fate and the underworld, adding to the sense of impending doom. They also bookend the poem — it's the first and last sound we encounter — implying that for the child, this violence is an ever-present part of home.
- The lash / whip
- Lawrence employs "lash" and "whip" to describe both the tree and the two voices, blurring the line between physical and verbal violence. A lash serves as a tool for punishment, so by connecting it to sound, Lawrence suggests that the words in this house strike with the force of blows.
- The storm
- The storm represents the household's emotional turmoil in a tangible way. It brings to life the chaos, intensity, and total absence of peace occurring within, indicating that for the child, there’s no refuge anywhere, whether inside or outside.
- Silence of blood
- This is the poem's most intense image. Blood-silence doesn’t represent a peaceful quiet — it’s the silence that follows harm. It suggests injury (whether physical or emotional), defeat, and something that can’t be undone. It’s that moment when a child realizes that one force has overpowered another.
§06Form & structure
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§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is 'Discord in Childhood' about?
It's about a child caught in a violent argument between two adults in their home — likely Lawrence's own parents — as a storm rages outside. The poem links the thrashing ash tree to the clashing voices, implying that the child is stuck between two forms of violence with no way out.
Is this poem autobiographical?
Yes, definitely. Lawrence's parents had a famously rocky marriage. His father was a heavy-drinking miner, while his mother was a cultured, frustrated woman who channeled her ambitions into her kids. Lawrence explored this dynamic in detail in Sons and Lovers, and this poem serves as an earlier, condensed version of those themes.
What does 'silence of blood' mean?
It's one of Lawrence's most powerful phrases. It implies that the quieter voice hasn't just gone silent — it has been stifled by something akin to physical harm. "Blood" suggests injury, defeat, and something irreparable. It's the silence that follows a wound, not the calm of peace.
Why does Lawrence compare the voices to lashes and whips?
Because he wants us to experience words as if they were physical blows. A lash serves as a tool for punishment, and by using the same term for the tree's branches and human voices, Lawrence blurs the line between verbal and physical violence. Both inflict pain; both leave lasting marks.
What is the structure of the poem and why does it matter?
The poem consists of two stanzas, each with four lines (an octave divided in half). The first stanza takes place outside, while the second shifts indoors. This transition from the outside to the inside reflects the child's experience as the violence tightens its grip — it begins as an external threat but ultimately invades the home. The ash tree appears at both ends of the poem, emphasizing the inescapability of the situation.
Who do the two voices represent?
Lawrence doesn't specify who they are, but the "slender lash / whistling delirious rage" is commonly interpreted as his mother's voice — high-pitched and frantic — while the "thick lash booming and bruising" represents his father's — more forceful and physically imposing. The poem remains neutral; it simply captures the fear of being trapped between the two.
What is the significance of the ash tree specifically?
Ash trees hold a significant place in British and Norse mythology, symbolizing fate, the cosmos, and the connection between different realms. Lawrence might have been influenced by this mythology, but even apart from those stories, the ash tree's long, whip-like branches serve as a striking representation of the violence he's depicting. Plus, it’s a real tree that grew outside the Lawrence family home in Eastwood.
What themes does the poem explore?
At its core, the poem delves into the fears of childhood and the harm caused by conflict at home. It also examines how nature interacts with human emotions—Lawrence doesn't allow the natural world to remain tranquil or disconnected from human aggression. Additionally, it addresses themes of power: one voice, one force, ultimately overpowering another.
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MLA
Lawrence, D. H. "Discord in Childhood." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/discord-in-childhood-d-h-lawrence/.
APA
Lawrence, D. H. (n.d.). Discord in childhood. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/discord-in-childhood-d-h-lawrence/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Discord in Childhood,' D. H. Lawrence uses the shrieking ash tree outside a family home as a sustained acoustic mirror for the violence erupting within it, arguing that domestic brutality does not merely wound the body but colonizes the …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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