The Annotated Edition
Book xv., the note 13.—The note10 Book xvi., of that volume, and by Homer
This text isn't a poem in the usual way — it's actually two editorial prefaces for a 19th-century edition of Cowper's English translation of Homer's *Iliad*.
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It is incumbent upon the present Editor to state the reasons...
Editor's note
Southey starts by acknowledging that he needs to explain his decision to the reader. He is deciding between two distinct versions of Cowper's Homer and wants to be clear about why he chose the earlier version over the revised one.
Whoever has perused the Translator's letters, must have perceived...
Editor's note
Southey highlights Cowper's correspondence as evidence. Cowper carefully considered the sound of his verse, and when he revised it for the second edition, he did so to satisfy critics—not because he thought it was an improvement.
It seems to the Editor that Cowper's own judgment is entitled to more respect...
Editor's note
This is the heart of Southey's argument: the poet's instincts are more important than any critic's opinion. The first translation came during Cowper's most vibrant years, when he was full of energy and hope. In contrast, the revision occurred in the final three years of his life, a time when he was profoundly depressed and referred to the work as a 'hopeless employment.'
The Editor has been confirmed in this opinion by the concurrence of every person...
Editor's note
Southey mentions that everyone he spoke with was in agreement, highlighting Henry Francis Cary—the well-known translator of Dante's *Divine Comedy*—as a strong endorsement. Cary had successfully tackled a similarly challenging translation with impressive skill.
In support of this determination, the case of Tasso may be cited as curiously in point.
Editor's note
Southey compares himself to the Italian poet Torquato Tasso, who, like him, revised his masterpiece *Jerusalem Delivered* late in life due to criticism, altering the verses despite his own reservations. The revised edition faded into obscurity, while the original continued to be reprinted — a cautionary reminder that favors preserving Cowper's first version.
It will be seen by the Advertisement to Southey's edition of Cowper's Translation...
Editor's note
The American editor's note starts by acknowledging Southey's authority, implying that since someone of Southey's prominence supports this choice, readers can have confidence in it. By doing this, he adds credibility to his own edition through this association.
In the addition of notes I have availed myself of the learning of various commentators...
Editor's note
The American editor shares his academic references — Pope, Coleridge, Müller — and notes specific contributors like Miss Peabody from Boston and C.C. Felton, a Greek professor at Harvard. He clearly indicates the sources of his annotations and remains humble about his own contributions.
For a definite treatment of the character of each deity introduced in the Iliad...
Editor's note
The editor directs readers to a companion volume on Greek and Roman mythology for context on the gods and the Judgment of Paris—the myth that sparked the Trojan War. He concludes by mentioning that if this edition sells well, there will be a follow-up edition of the *Odyssey*.
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- The two editions of Cowper's Homer
- They capture the struggle between a creator's true voice and the urge to fit in with outside opinions. The first edition shows Cowper at his most vibrant, while the second reflects his surrender to critics during a time of mental anguish.
- Tasso's Jerusalem Delivered
- Used as a historical reflection of Cowper's situation, Tasso's overlooked revision cautions that a significant work changed under pressure—contrary to the poet's own instincts—often loses the essence that originally made it remarkable.
- Cowper's letters
- The letters serve as direct evidence of the poet's own thoughts, which Southey views as more authoritative than any critic's opinion. They provide the editorial argument with its moral weight.
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§07FAQ
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Is this actually a poem? It reads like an introduction to a book.
You’re correct to point that out. This text isn’t a poem — it’s actually two editorial prefaces that accompany a 19th-century edition of William Cowper's English translation of Homer's Iliad. It’s listed under Homer's name since the entire edition is his work, but the prefaces were penned by Robert Southey and an unidentified American editor.
Who is Cowper, and why does it matter which edition of his Homer we read?
William Cowper (1731–1800) was a highly regarded English poet during the late 18th century. His translation of Homer sought to stay truer to the Greek original compared to Alexander Pope's well-known rhymed version. The two editions are quite different in rhythm and style — the first was created when Cowper was in good spirits and full of enthusiasm, while the second was a difficult revision made during a time of severe depression. Southey suggests that the liveliness of the first version stems directly from those circumstances.
Why does Southey bring up Tasso?
Torquato Tasso was a 16th-century Italian poet known for his epic Jerusalem Delivered, a hallmark of Renaissance literature. Later in life, facing criticism, he revised it into Jerusalem Conquered, making adjustments to the verse similar to what Cowper experienced. However, this rewrite quickly faded into obscurity, while the original continued to be widely read. Southey points to this as an example: revising a masterpiece due to external pressure, and against one's better judgment, often undermines what made it exceptional.
Who is Mr. Cary, and why does Southey mention him?
Henry Francis Cary (1772–1844) translated Dante's Divine Comedy into English blank verse — a task that is as challenging as translating Homer. Southey notes that Cary supported his editorial decision because Cary, having undertaken similar work, appreciates more than most critics the value of a translator's instincts.
What does the American editor contribute beyond reprinting Southey's text?
He includes scholarly annotations, referencing commentators like Pope, Coleridge, and the German classicist Müller. He also acknowledges Miss Peabody from Boston and C.C. Felton, a Greek professor at Harvard, for particular notes. He directs readers to a companion mythology text for context on the gods and the Judgment of Paris, and hints that an edition of the Odyssey might be released soon.
What is the Judgment of Paris, and why is it mentioned?
The Judgment of Paris is the myth that sparked the Trojan War. Paris, a prince of Troy, had to decide who was the most beautiful goddess among Hera, Athena, and Aphrodite. He picked Aphrodite, who in turn helped him win Helen, the wife of Menelaus, the Greek king. Helen's abduction led the Greeks to launch their expedition to Troy. This backstory is mentioned because it gives readers important context for understanding the Iliad.
What does 'blank verse' mean, and why did critics want Cowper to change his?
Blank verse is poetry that doesn't rhyme, written in iambic pentameter — ten syllables per line following a set stress pattern. Cowper chose this form to align with Homer's unrhymed Greek style. Critics at the time typically favored smoother, more polished lines that used fewer contractions and elisions (where syllables blend together). Cowper's revisions aimed to meet these preferences, but Southey contends that this smoothing-out removed the original's vitality.
What are the 'Book xv., note 13' references at the very top of the text?
Those entries resemble catalogue or index references from the original printed volume — they point to specific footnotes in Books XV, XVI, and XIX of the Iliad. It seems they are metadata or navigation markers that were included during the digitization process, rather than being part of the preface itself.
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Homer. "Book xv., the note 13.—The note10 Book xvi., of that volume, and." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/book-xv-the-note-13-the-note10-book-xvi-of-that-volume-and-homer/.
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Homer. (n.d.). Book xv., the note 13.—the note10 book xvi., of that volume, and. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/book-xv-the-note-13-the-note10-book-xvi-of-that-volume-and-homer/
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1 ptThe text attributed to Homer in this editorial preface enacts a quiet but insistent argument: that a translator's first, energetic instinct is always more authentic than any revision undertaken in exhaustion or despair. The Advertisement …
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