The Annotated Edition
45, 46:— by Percy Bysshe Shelley
This text isn't just a standalone poem; it's actually two footnotes (numbered 45 and 46) from Shelley's lengthy philosophical work *Queen Mab*, connected to a fragment about a dim, reddish sun.
- Themes
- freedom, hope, nature
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To the red and baleful sun / That faintly twinkles there.
Editor's note
This two-line verse fragment serves as the foundation for both footnotes. The 'red and baleful sun' represents the pole star from a future or altered Earth — dim and foreboding, indicating the planet's current tilted and flawed condition. The term 'baleful' (meaning harmful or threatening) suggests that the existing arrangement of the cosmos is neither final nor ideal. Shelley then employs the footnotes to clarify *why* the current situation is negative and *how* it can get better.
The north polar star, to which the axis of the earth, in its present state of obliquity, points...
Editor's note
Footnote 45 starts with an intriguing astronomical fact — the Earth's axial tilt — and evolves it into an idealistic argument. Shelley references Laplace's *Système du Monde* to suggest that the poles are slowly becoming more perpendicular to the ecliptic (which means the tilt is lessening). Then he takes a bold leap: this physical straightening could occur at the same pace as human intellectual development. Equal days and nights around the globe would result in equal seasons, improved health, and ultimately a more enlightened, fair society. While the reasoning leans more towards poetry than strict science, Shelley delivers it with the assurance of someone well-read.
Bones of animals peculiar to the torrid zone have been found in the north of Siberia...
Editor's note
Footnote 46 adds more weight to the argument. Shelley draws on fossil records, paleobotany, and the historical work of the French astronomer Bailly to demonstrate that the Earth has *already* experienced a significant climatic shift — with tropical animals found in Siberia, Indian-climate plants preserved as fossils in Germany, and ancient rivers in Britain and France that used to freeze solid now remaining unfrozen. He argues that this isn't just speculation; it's a part of our history. The Earth has changed in the past, it is changing right now, and the current trend indicates a shift toward a warmer, more balanced world. For Shelley, this future world goes hand in hand with a more balanced human society.
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- The red and baleful sun
- The pole star appears dim, reddish, and ominous in today's conditions. It symbolizes the Earth's current imperfect tilt and reflects the flawed state of human civilization: troubled, unequal, and still not entirely rational.
- Axial obliquity (the Earth's tilt)
- The physical representation of all that’s wrong with the world. While the axis remains tilted, we face unequal seasons, extreme climates, compromised health, and wisdom that feels just out of reach. Its slow correction drives us toward a better future.
- Fossil bones and plants
- Material proof exists that the world has been different before — warmer and more uniform — and therefore *can* be different again. This serves as evidence against despair and supports the possibility of radical change.
- The equator coinciding with the ecliptic
- The ideal outcome Shelley envisions is an Earth standing perfectly upright, where days and seasons are equal, and everyone enjoys equal health. It serves as a secular paradise, a scientific take on the golden age.
- Frozen rivers of Britain and France
- Historical testimony shows that climate has shifted dramatically within our recorded history. This frames the argument in the context of human experience instead of distant astronomical concepts, making the upcoming changes feel tangible and imminent.
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