Year 12–13 / Grades 11–12
Infinite Jest — a five-lesson scheme of work
This sequence starts with an introduction to Wallace's fragmented timeline and his critique of corporate culture, then delves into a detailed examination of addiction and despair in the Enfield and Ennet House narratives. It culminates in exploring the novel's interconnected themes of freedom, identity, and the idea of entertainment as a form of destruction. Students first create a map of the non-linear structure, followed by focused close readings of individual characters (Hal, Gately, Gompert, Erdedy). Finally, they synthesize their insights across different strands in a comparative essay. By the end, the class is equipped to craft a well-supported analytical argument on how Wallace employs form and language to illustrate the toll of seeking total pleasure.
Objectives
- Analyse how Wallace uses the non-linear, corporate-year structure in Chapters 1, 2, and 8 to disorient the reader and mirror addiction's distortion of time.
- Explain how the interior monologue of Ken Erdedy in Chapter 2 and Kate Gompert in Chapter 5 constructs a grammar of compulsion and despair.
- Trace how Don Gately's sections in Chapters 8, 9, and 10 position recovery as a counter-narrative to the novel's dominant logic of entertainment and escape.
- Write an evidenced analytical paragraph using embedded quotation and precise language analysis to argue a specific claim about Wallace's method.
- Evaluate how Wallace uses footnotes and endnotes (Chapter 12) as a formal enactment of the novel's themes of distraction, digression, and the impossibility of a single authoritative self.
- Compare how two characters — Hal Incandenza and Don Gately — embody opposing relationships to language, feeling, and recovery across the novel's chapters.
The sequence
Lesson 1: The Year of What? Structure, Satire, and Disorientation in Chapters 1–2
55 min · ch. 1, 2- Do now
Without opening the novel, jot down in a single sentence what you believe the first word of a 1,000-page novel titled Infinite Jest could be, along with your reasoning. Then, turn to Chapter 1, read the first paragraph, and write one sentence about your observation — focus on noticing rather than summarizing.
- Teacher input
Model a structural annotation of the opening three pages of Chapter 1 (the Hal Incandenza admissions interview scene, 'Year of the Depend Adult Undergarment'). Consider what Wallace chooses to withhold: while Hal is misunderstood by everyone in the room, the reader comprehends him fully. Write a clear analytical sentence that identifies the technique (dramatic irony via split perspective), includes the quote 'I am in here' (p.3), and connects it to the novel's argument that inner thoughts are fundamentally unreachable — even for those who appear fluent.
- Independent task
Read the Ken Erdedy section that opens Chapter 2 ('Year of the Tucks Medicated Pad'), beginning, 'Ken Erdedy wanted to get high one last time before he quit.' Write one full analytical paragraph (minimum 150 words) in which you argue what the syntax of Erdedy's waiting — the looping conditional sentences, the repeated deferral of the woman's arrival — reveals about the nature of addictive thought. You must include at least two quotations from the Erdedy passage and identify at least one grammatical or syntactic feature by its proper term.
- Exit ticket
In exactly two sentences, explain what Wallace achieves by opening the novel in Chapter 1 with Hal's breakdown and then cutting in Chapter 2 to Erdedy's waiting — what does the juxtaposition of these two forms of paralysis argue about the novel's central concerns?
Lesson 2: The Grammar of Despair: Kate Gompert and the Language of Anhedonia in Chapter 5
55 min · ch. 5- Do now
Look up the term 'anhedonia' and write down its definition. Next, read the first two pages of the Kate Gompert section in Chapter 5 ('Year of the Whisper-Quiet Maytag Dishmaster'), starting with her admission to the hospital. Before the lesson begins, underline any word or phrase that indicates absence instead of presence — negative sensations, lacks, or emptiness.
- Teacher input
Model a close reading of the passage in Chapter 5 where Gompert attempts to convey her depression to the medical resident, particularly honing in on the sentence: 'It's like the feeling of having a feeling, but there's no feeling.' Analyze the recursive syntax—how the sentence loops back on itself—as a formal representation of anhedonia: the language struggles to capture its object because that object is the absence of feeling. Guide students on how to transition seamlessly from quoting the text to making a grammatical observation, and then to a thematic claim, all in one fluid analytical motion.
- Independent task
In Chapter 5, Wallace presents a striking moment during Gompert's dialogue with the medical resident that underscores the limitations of clinical language in addressing subjective suffering. As Gompert tries to articulate his experience of pain, his language begins to falter and loop, revealing the inadequacy of words in conveying the depth of his distress. For instance, when he states, "It’s like a weight, but not a weight," Gompert's struggle to find precise terms illustrates how clinical jargon fails to capture the nuances of his suffering. This breakdown not only highlights the gap between his internal experience and the external language used by medical professionals but also reflects the broader theme of loneliness in the novel. Gompert’s inability to communicate his pain effectively serves as a reminder of how language can sometimes alienate rather than connect individuals in moments of vulnerability.
On the other hand, the medical resident’s questions reveal a deeper issue: they often miss the essence of Gompert's suffering altogether. His inquiries tend to focus on quantifiable aspects, such as "On a scale of one to ten, how would you rate your pain?" This approach neglects the subjective nature of Gompert's experience and fails to explore the emotional and psychological dimensions of his condition. By fixating on metrics, the resident overlooks the crucial human element—what it truly feels like to endure such suffering. This disconnect between the resident's language and Gompert's reality reinforces Wallace's argument about the limits of communication in the face of loneliness. Ultimately, it illustrates how clinical dialogue can alienate individuals, leaving them isolated in their pain rather than fostering genuine understanding and empathy.
- Exit ticket
Write one sentence that completes this claim with specific evidence from Chapter 5: 'Wallace uses the structure of Gompert's conversation with the resident to argue that _______ because _______.'
Lesson 3: Recovery as Counter-Narrative: Don Gately in Chapters 8–10
55 min · ch. 8, 9, 10- Do now
- One thing I know about Gately from this page: He is portrayed as a caring and responsible individual, deeply invested in helping others at Ennet House.
- One thing I am uncertain about: It's unclear how Gately feels about his own past and whether he has fully come to terms with it.
- One question the prose itself seems to be asking: What does it truly mean to find redemption and purpose in a place like Ennet House?
- Teacher input
Model a reading of the passage in Chapter 9 ('Year of the Trial-Size Dove Bar') where Gately lies wounded and is unable to speak, emphasizing the shift from his typical blunt, present-tense narration to the fragmented, pain-filled syntax he experiences in the hospital. Argue that Wallace's choice to silence Gately during this pivotal moral moment mirrors Hal's own speechlessness in Chapter 1. This parallel serves as a structural argument in the novel regarding the connection between suffering and the ability to articulate one's thoughts.
- Independent task
Using evidence from at least two of Chapters 8, 9, and 10, write three analytical paragraphs (minimum 250 words) arguing that Gately's recovery narrative serves as a structural and thematic counterbalance to the Incandenza family's self-destruction. Your first paragraph should explore Gately's relationship with language and emotion in Chapter 8. In your second paragraph, examine a specific moment of moral action or restraint in either Chapter 9 or 10, including an embedded quotation. Finally, your third paragraph should discuss what Wallace suggests—through the contrast between Gately's world and the Enfield Tennis Academy—about the potential for authentic human connection.
- Exit ticket
In two or three sentences, explain why Wallace might have chosen to make Gately — a large, working-class, barely literate former burglar — the novel's most sustained example of ethical seriousness, and what that choice argues about identity and redemption.
Lesson 4: The Footnote as Form: Chapter 12 and the Architecture of Distraction
55 min · ch. 12- Do now
Open Chapter 12 (Endnotes and Footnotes) and read endnote 24 (the filmography of James O. Incandenza) in its entirety. Note the following: its length, the type of information it provides, and one sentence describing the reading experience — focusing on the feeling it evokes, rather than its meaning.
- Teacher input
Model a reading of endnote 24—the Incandenza filmography—as a standalone text rather than just a supplement. Make the case that the filmography's deadpan, catalog-style format (title, year, format, cast, brief description) functions as a form of satire: the most emotionally impactful elements of the novel (a father's complete artistic output, his fixation on his son's face, the creation of the deadly Entertainment) are presented in the straightforward language typical of a DVD sleeve. Guide students on how to analyze both form and tone at the same time, pointing out that the dissonance between the register and the content is what generates the passage's horror.
- Independent task
Choose one endnote or footnote from Chapter 12 that spans at least half a page (you might consider endnote 24, endnote 110, endnote 321, or endnote 332). Write two analytical paragraphs (at least 200 words) discussing how this endnote serves not as supplementary material but as a crucial structural and thematic element of the novel. In your first paragraph, examine the form and tone of the endnote itself. In your second paragraph, explore what reading it entails — the physical pause and deviation from the main text — and how this reflects the novel’s themes of distraction, digression, and the fragmented self.
- Exit ticket
Write one full sentence explaining what Wallace's use of footnotes and endnotes in Chapter 12 argues about the relationship between form and meaning — your sentence must name a specific endnote by number and make a claim that could not apply to any other novel.
Lesson 5: Hal and Gately: A Comparative Essay on Language, Feeling, and the Cost of Escape
60 min · ch. 1, 2, 8, 9, 10, 11- Do now
Hal Incandenza and Don Gately represent two contrasting approaches to internal struggles. Hal, despite his impressive intellect and talent, grapples with a profound disconnect between his internal thoughts and the external world. He feels overwhelmed by the expectations placed on him and often resorts to a façade of confidence, masking his insecurities and sense of inadequacy. His relationship with his interior life is marked by a chaotic blend of anxiety and pressure, making it difficult for him to authentically express himself.
In contrast, Don Gately's journey is rooted in a raw confrontation with his past and his inner demons. He actively engages with his thoughts and feelings, striving for self-awareness and growth. Gately's battles with addiction and his commitment to sobriety reflect a deeper introspection and a desire to understand himself. His relationship with his interior life is one of acceptance and struggle, where he acknowledges his flaws and seeks redemption rather than hiding behind a polished exterior.
Ultimately, Hal's interior life is characterized by disconnection and performance, while Gately's is defined by honesty and the quest for self-understanding.
- Teacher input
Model the construction of a comparative essay introduction by examining the opening of Chapter 1, which details Hal's admissions breakdown, alongside the start of Chapter 8, where Gately narrates his experiences at Ennet House. Illustrate how to craft a thesis sentence that goes beyond merely listing the two characters. Instead, formulate a single, arguable claim about what their differences reveal. For instance, you might argue that Wallace designs the novel to show that Hal's hyper-articulacy and Gately's straightforwardness are both ways of hiding their true selves. The novel ultimately suggests that in the journey of recovery, feeling must come before language, not the other way around.
- Independent task
Write a comparative analytical essay of 500–700 words that explores how Wallace uses Hal Incandenza and Don Gately to illustrate two distinct relationships between language and emotion, as well as what this contrast suggests about the potential for redemption. Your essay should: start with a thesis statement that presents a single, debatable claim; include at least one close reading of a specific moment from Hal's sections (Chapter 1, 2, or 11) with integrated quotation; include at least one close reading of a specific moment from Gately's sections (Chapter 8, 9, or 10) with integrated quotation; examine how Wallace's stylistic choices — such as syntax, register, and point of view — highlight the differences between the two characters; and conclude with a sentence that ties back to the novel's title, explaining the meaning of 'infinite jest' in relation to your argument. Avoid summarizing the plot. Ensure that every paragraph contributes to your main claim.
- Exit ticket
Read back your thesis sentence. In one further sentence, explain what evidence from the novel would most seriously challenge your thesis — naming the chapter and the moment — and why your argument still holds despite that challenge.
Activities
Corporate Year Satire Mapping 20 min · pairs
Each pair gets a printed list of the corporate-sponsored year names from the novel (Chapters 1–11) along with a blank timeline. Students arrange the years in the order they appear in the novel and then in the chronological order suggested by Wallace. They write a sentence for three of the year names to explain what each product name critiques about American consumer culture. Finally, pairs return the annotated timeline along with their three sentences.
Erdedy Syntax Dissection 25 min · individual
Students get a printed excerpt of the Ken Erdedy waiting sequence from Chapter 2 (around 400 words, starting with 'He had gone to quite a bit of trouble'). Working on their own, they bracket each conditional clause, underline any repeated words or phrases, and circle every instance where the sentence loops back to its beginning. Then, they craft one analytical sentence — no more, no less — that identifies what the syntax achieves. Students return the annotated excerpt along with their sentence.
Gompert vs. Resident: Dialogue Rewrite 30 min · pairs
Pairs receive the printed dialogue between Kate Gompert and the medical resident from Chapter 5. They revise a ten-line portion of the exchange to ensure the resident asks genuinely helpful questions, allowing Gompert to provide thoughtful answers. Following this, they write two sentences discussing what is lost — both aesthetically and thematically — in their enhanced version. Pairs then return the rewritten dialogue along with the two explanatory sentences.
Gately's Moral Ledger 25 min · groups
Groups of three receive a printed summary of Gately's actions from Chapters 8, 9, and 10. Each group creates a two-column table: the left side lists instances where Gately acts against his own interests for the benefit of others, while the right side details the specific language Wallace uses to describe each moment. Afterward, groups come together to formulate one sentence that captures what these moments suggest about Wallace's view of recovery. They return the completed table along with their agreed-upon sentence.
Endnote 24 Close Reading Carousel 35 min · whole class
The class gets endnote 24 (the Incandenza filmography) split into six sections, one for each group. Each group annotates their section for tone, register, any moments where emotional content breaks through the catalog format, and one quotation they would include in an essay. Groups then rotate their annotated sections twice, building on each other's notes. Finally, the class creates a shared list of the five most analytically useful quotations from the endnote, providing a sentence of justification for each. Students return their annotated sections.
Thesis Tournament 20 min · whole class
Every student writes a thesis sentence for the comparative Hal/Gately essay on a slip of paper—no names, no plot summary, just one arguable claim. The slips are collected and read aloud without revealing names, and the class votes on which three claims are the most arguable (i.e., those that can be supported or challenged with evidence). The teacher demonstrates how to improve the weakest of the three claims. Students return their original slips with a revised version written underneath.
Assessment
- Lesson 1 exit ticket: checks whether students can articulate the structural function of the Hal/Erdedy juxtaposition rather than simply describing what happens in each section.
- Lesson 2 independent paragraphs: checks whether students can move from grammatical observation to thematic claim without collapsing into paraphrase, specifically in the Gompert/resident dialogue.
- Lesson 3 exit ticket: checks whether students can connect Gately's class position and register to the novel's argument about identity and redemption, rather than treating him as a simple moral foil.
- Lesson 4 independent paragraphs: checks whether students can treat a footnote as a primary text and argue about its form and register, not merely its content.
- Lesson 5 do-now: checks whether students have internalised the difference between Hal and Gately as a thematic and formal distinction, not a plot-level one — used to calibrate the level of scaffolding needed before the essay.
Summative task
Write a comparative analytical essay of 500–700 words arguing how Wallace uses Hal Incandenza and Don Gately to dramatise two different relationships between language and feeling, and what that contrast implies about the possibility of redemption in Infinite Jest. Your essay must open with a single arguable thesis; include at least one close reading from Hal's sections (Chapters 1, 2, or 11) and one from Gately's sections (Chapters 8, 9, or 10), each with embedded quotation; address how Wallace's formal choices — syntax, register, point of view — enact the difference between the two men; and close with a sentence that returns to the novel's title. Do not summarise plot.
Marking notes
Top-band responses present a clear, specific, and debatable thesis that they maintain throughout each paragraph. They incorporate quotations from named chapters to examine syntax, register, or point of view, rather than just to support a pre-existing argument. Mid-band responses recognize important differences between Hal and Gately but often lean more towards describing than analyzing, or they may lose sight of the thesis by the final paragraph. Lower-band responses tend to summarize the plot, treat quotations as obvious, or mix up the narrative threads of the two characters without establishing any connection between them.
Standards covered
- Common Core 11 12
- RL.11-12.1 — Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.
- RL.11-12.3 — Analyse the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama, including where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed.
- RL.11-12.5 — Analyse how an author's choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
- W.11-12.1 — Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
- AP Literature
- Literary Argumentation (LAN-1) — Develop a thesis that makes a defensible claim about a literary text and establish a line of reasoning to defend it.
- Textual Evidence (LAN-1.B) — Use relevant and sufficient evidence from the text to support a line of reasoning.
- Figurative Language and Structure (STR-1) — Explain the function of structure in a text, including how an author's structural choices contribute to meaning.
- Narrator and Point of View (NAR-1) — Explain the function of point of view in a narrative, including how it shapes the reader's understanding of character and theme.
- Character (CHR-1) — Explain the function of contrasting characters and how their relationship advances the text's argument.
- AQA
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts, including analysis of language, form, and structure.
- AO3 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
- AO5 — Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations.
- Edexcel
- AO1 — Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated concepts and terminology and coherent, accurate written expression.
- AO2 — Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts.
- AO4 — Explore connections across literary texts.
- AO5 — Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which literary texts are written and received.
- IB Lit
- Criterion A — Demonstrate detailed understanding of the works studied and make relevant connections between them.
- Criterion B — Analyse how the author's choices of language, structure, technique, and style shape meaning.
- Criterion C — Develop a focused and persuasive line of argument supported by well-chosen evidence.
- Criterion D — Use the conventions of the chosen text type with skill and effectiveness.
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