The Annotated Edition
Who now shall sneer? In a letter to Mr. J.B. Thayer, who had by James Russell Lowell
This poem fragment — actually a strophe from Lowell's broader elegy on the Civil War — responds to British critics who labeled the Union Army as a ragtag group of working-class nobodies.
- Core theme
- Anger
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§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Who now shall sneer?
Editor's note
The opening question directly confronts British commentators who ridiculed the working-class roots of the Union Army. Lowell isn't uncertain; he believes the question is self-explanatory. The dead have put every critic to rest.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Tailors' apprentices and butcher boys
- The phrase, taken straight from the English press, becomes a point of pride for Lowell. What was intended as a jab at the Union Army's humble beginnings is recast as evidence of democratic bravery — everyday working men who made the choice to fight and sacrifice their lives.
- The sneer
- Highlights the aristocratic European disdain for American democracy and its citizen-soldiers. By placing this at the heart of the poem, Lowell cleverly uses the critics' own arguments against them.
- Willie's death
- Though the strophe doesn't mention it by name, the nephew's death serves as the emotional core of the entire passage, rooted in the biographical context. The broader discussion of class and valor is anchored in this particular personal loss.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is a strophe?
A strophe is a section or movement within a longer ode — similar to a chapter in a poem. Lowell's Commemoration Ode contains several of these movements, each with a different mood or argument.
Who is Willie, and why does Lowell mention him?
Willie was William Lowell Putnam, Lowell's nephew, who tragically lost his life at the Battle of Ball's Bluff in October 1861. In his letter to Thayer, Lowell refers to him to convey the intensity of his emotions in the strophe — he wasn't expressing abstract patriotism but rather pouring out his feelings from a place of immediate sorrow.
Why were the British sneering at the Union Army?
A notable segment of the British establishment showed sympathy for the Confederacy, driven in part by economic factors—Southern cotton supplied British textile mills—and in part by class snobbery. The notion that an army composed of tradesmen and laborers could engage in a serious war seemed absurd to some British commentators.
What does Lowell mean when he says the strophe 'leads naturally' to the next?
He's addressing his critic regarding the structure of the ode. The anger expressed in this strophe isn't the end of the story—the following strophe provides justification by illustrating what those working-class soldiers accomplished and the significance of their sacrifice. The sneer paves the way for the response.
Is Lowell being jingoistic here?
He's aware of the risk—that's exactly what he admits to Thayer when he refers to it as 'a certain narrowness.' But his anger comes from a real place: seeing men he knew die and then reading foreign newspapers that dismiss those men as social inferiors. That's a specific, human grievance, not just flag-waving.
What is the *Commemoration Ode* as a whole about?
It's a formal elegy honoring Harvard men who lost their lives in the Civil War, presented at a ceremony in 1865. It navigates through feelings of grief, anger, and democratic idealism, ultimately arriving at a hard-won sense of hope. One of its most celebrated passages pays tribute to Lincoln. This strophe represents one of the more combative moments in the piece.
Why does Lowell quote the English paper's exact words — 'tailors' apprentices and butcher boys'?
Repeating the insult verbatim has a greater impact than paraphrasing it. It compels the reader to confront the exact words used against the deceased, making the challenge 'Who now shall sneer?' resonate more deeply.
What kind of poem is this — is it a sonnet, a ballad, something else?
It's a Pindaric ode, inspired by the grand ceremonial odes of ancient Greece. This form was seen as fitting for significant public events — such as war, loss, and civic memorials. It has a more flexible structure than a sonnet, featuring varying line lengths and sizes of strophes.
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MLA
Lowell, James Russell. "Who now shall sneer? In a letter to Mr. J.B. Thayer, who had." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/who-now-shall-sneer-in-a-letter-to-mr-j-b-thayer-who-had-james-russell-lowell/.
APA
Lowell, J. R. (n.d.). Who now shall sneer? in a letter to mr. j.b. thayer, who had. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/who-now-shall-sneer-in-a-letter-to-mr-j-b-thayer-who-had-james-russell-lowell/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn James Russell Lowell's epistolary-poem hybrid 'Who now shall sneer?', the speaker weaponizes grief—specifically the raw, unprocessed fury born from his nephew Willie's death—to transform a narrow, class-inflected contempt into a …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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