The Annotated Edition
The Commonweal by Algernon Charles Swinburne
This poem celebrates the 1887 anniversary of the Magna Carta (1215), highlighting that 672 years have gone by since England — "the land whose name is freedom" — was compelled to sign that foundational charter of rights at Runnymede.
- Core theme
- Freedom
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§02Themes
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Eight hundred years and twenty-one / Have shone and sunken since the land
Editor's note
Swinburne begins with a sharp detail: counting back 821 years from 1887 brings us to 1066, the year of the Norman Conquest. This marks the moment when England was captured, its freedoms taken away. The phrase "shone and sunken" evokes the rise and fall of years like suns, lending the passage of time a natural, almost rhythmic flow. The choice of the word "brand" is intentionally harsh, conjuring images of livestock or slaves being marked by their owners.
But ere dark time had shed as rain / Or sown on sterile earth as seed
Editor's note
The second stanza takes a turn with "But" — shifting from oppression to resistance. Swinburne envisions the dark years following the Conquest as a poor growing season: time falling on barren land, yielding nothing but weeds. "An age and half an age" refers to about 150 years, the span between 1066 and 1215. Then we see the breakthrough: "She rose on Runnymede" — England, depicted as a woman, stands up in the meadow where King John was compelled to sign the Magna Carta. The agricultural imagery suggests that freedom is something to be cultivated, rather than simply handed out.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
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- The brand
- The mark burned onto a captive or slave. Here, it represents how the Norman Conquest turned England into a subject nation, taking away its self-determination.
- Tare and weed
- Useless or harmful plants that choke good crops. They signify the wasted, oppressive years between the Conquest and Magna Carta—years that brought little of value to ordinary people.
- Runnymede
- The meadow by the Thames where Magna Carta was sealed in 1215. In the poem, it symbolizes the beginning of constitutional liberty—the moment England "rose" from captivity.
- The fettered hand
- England's sovereignty is literally restrained. The hand represents the authority that should govern freely, but it is bound, making the nation's subjugation both physical and personal rather than merely abstract.
- Seed sown on sterile earth
- Time passes, but freedom and justice remain elusive. The image references the biblical parable of the sower, implying that oppression leads to a form of spiritual and civic barrenness.
§06Historical context
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§07FAQ
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What does the title 'The Commonweal' mean?
"Commonweal" is an old English term that refers to the common good — the well-being of everyone in society, not just the powerful few. Swinburne uses this word to position the poem as focusing on public liberty rather than royal glory, which is a deliberate choice in a Jubilee year.
What event does the poem actually celebrate?
It commemorates the Magna Carta, which was sealed at Runnymede in 1215. Swinburne writes in 1887, reflecting on both the Norman Conquest in 1066 and the 150 years that led to England's stand against tyranny.
Why does Swinburne say 'eight hundred years and twenty-one'?
1887 minus 821 equals 1066 — the year of the Norman Conquest, when William the Conqueror defeated King Harold and seized control of England. Swinburne is being historically accurate to ground the poem in actual events.
Who is 'she' in the line 'She rose on Runnymede'?
England is often depicted as a woman in poetry. This personification was a popular convention, and Swinburne employs it to give the nation's struggle a human touch — it's not just an abstract political event; it’s about a person standing up.
What are 'tare and weed' and why does Swinburne use them?
Tares, referenced in the Bible (Matthew 13), are weeds that grow alongside healthy grain, suffocating it. Swinburne uses this imagery to suggest that the years of Norman rule yielded no positive outcomes — they were a time of spiritual and political emptiness. This also highlights the stark contrast with the eventual "rising" at Runnymede.
Is this poem pro-monarchy or anti-monarchy?
It's complicated. Swinburne had a republican instinct, and the poem celebrates the moment when barons forced a king to curtail his own power. The true hero of the poem is England itself, not any monarchy. Written during Victoria's Jubilee, it serves as a subtle reminder that royal authority has always required oversight.
What is the poem's rhyme scheme?
Each five-line stanza uses an ABBA + A rhyme scheme: lines 1, 4, and 5 rhyme ("sun" / "brand" / "hand" is actually ABBAB — specifically land/brand/hand and sun/sun). To be more precise, it follows ABBAB, with the short fifth line serving as a powerful echo of the first. This tight structure lends the poem a compressed, monumental quality.
Why is the poem so short if the subject is so big?
Swinburne is crafting a commemorative lyric rather than a history lesson. The brevity is intentional — he aims for the weight of 821 years to resonate in just ten lines, much like a powerful inscription on a monument. Fewer words, greater impact.
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MLA
Swinburne, Algernon Charles. "The Commonweal." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/the-commonweal-algernon-charles-swinburne/.
APA
Swinburne, A. C. (n.d.). The commonweal. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/the-commonweal-algernon-charles-swinburne/
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