The Annotated Edition
The Altar by George Herbert
George Herbert's "The Altar" is a brief devotional poem where the speaker presents his heart to God, envisioning it as a living altar.
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- George Herbert
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
A broken Altar, Lord, thy servant reares, / Made of a heart, and cemented with teares:
Editor's note
The speaker shares that he is creating an altar for God—not one of stone or wood, but one made from his own heart, stitched together with tears. The term "broken" carries significant weight here: it refers to a broken heart, a broken spirit, and the biblical concept (from Psalm 51) that God cherishes a "broken and contrite heart" more than any material offering.
Whose parts are as thy hand did frame; / No workmans tool hath touch'd the same.
Editor's note
Herbert reflects the Old Testament guidance (Exodus 20:25) that an altar dedicated to God should be constructed without the use of iron tools — human involvement would taint it. The speaker's heart-altar is molded solely by God's influence, free from any human work or contrivance. This creates the main tension of the poem: the speaker feels powerless to enhance himself; only God has the ability to make that change.
A Heart alone / Is such a stone,
Editor's note
This part represents the narrow waist of the altar shape on the page. The lines contract to only a few syllables, visually echoing the altar's form. The heart is likened to stone — hard, resistant, and unyielding — reflecting a confession of spiritual stubbornness rather than a show of pride.
As nothing but / Thy power doth cut.
Editor's note
Continuing the stone metaphor, the speaker emphasizes that only God's power can cut or shape this stony heart. This reflects a total reliance on the divine: no amount of human will, discipline, or good intentions can soften the heart — only divine action can.
Wherefore each part / Of my hard heart
Editor's note
The speaker openly admits that his heart is hard. The word "wherefore" links the reasoning: *since* only God can soften stone, *it follows that* every piece of this tough heart is gathered here in an act of praise. The hardness of the heart isn't concealed but instead presented honestly.
Meets in this frame, / To praise thy name:
Editor's note
The broken pieces of the heart are collected within the "frame" of the poem-altar. The term "frame" has a clever double meaning: it refers to both the altar's structure and the poem's structure. All the fragments unite for a single purpose — to praise God.
That if I chance to hold my peace, / These stones to praise thee may not cease.
Editor's note
This line references Luke 19:40, where Jesus states that if his followers remain silent, the stones will cry out in praise. Herbert reflects on this idea in a personal way: even if he doesn't speak or pray, the stone-like heart he has given will continue to offer praise. It captures a sense of humility combined with quiet hope.
O let thy blessed Sacrifice be mine, / And sanctifie this Altar to be thine.
Editor's note
The closing couplet serves as a heartfelt prayer. The speaker pleads for Christ's sacrifice — the ultimate offering — to be granted to him, and for God to sanctify this altar (the poem, the heart) as genuinely His. This represents a surrender: the speaker isn’t asserting the altar as a personal accomplishment but is instead inviting God to take ownership of it.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The Altar
- The altar represents the poem itself (printed in the shape of an altar), the speaker’s heart laid before God, and a nod to the biblical tradition of sacrifice. These three meanings strengthen one another: writing the poem *is* an act of worship.
- Stone / Hard Heart
- Stone symbolizes the human heart in its raw, unyielding form—unwilling to bend to God or embrace change. Herbert references the biblical concept of the "heart of stone" (Ezekiel 36:26), which only God can transform into a heart of flesh. This hardness is a challenge that only God can address.
- Tears
- Tears are what bind the altar together. They express true sorrow for sin and a deep spiritual yearning — a kind of brokenness that, according to Herbert's theology, is precisely what God desires instead of complex rituals.
- The Workmans Tool
- The missing tool signifies human effort and the journey of self-improvement. By asserting that no tool has come into contact with the altar, Herbert suggests that spiritual transformation can't be manufactured through willpower or good deeds—it must originate solely from God.
- Sacrifice
- The final mention of Christ's "blessed Sacrifice" ties the personal altar of the heart to the core event of Christian faith. The speaker hopes that his humble, flawed offering can be linked to that greater sacrifice — gaining worth through connection rather than its own value.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
Why is the poem printed in the shape of an altar?
Herbert was one of the most creative formal poets of his time, incorporating the physical layout of the text into its meaning. The poem's lines shorten in the middle and widen at the top and bottom, resembling a classical altar. This design means the poem is the altar it describes — reading it is intended to evoke the experience of standing before one. It's not merely a visual trick; the form and content are deeply intertwined.
What does Herbert mean by a "broken" altar?
He references Psalm 51:17 — "The sacrifices of God are a broken spirit: a broken and a contrite heart, O God, thou wilt not despise." In Herbert's view, God isn't interested in grand, flawless gifts. What He desires is genuine acknowledgment of our failures and needs. A broken altar, built from a broken heart, is truly the most acceptable offering one can present.
What is the significance of "no workmans tool hath touch'd the same"?
This directly references Exodus 20:25, where God tells the Israelites to create altars using uncut stone—using iron tools would defile them. Herbert connects this to the heart, suggesting that trying to mold yourself through your own effort or cunning is a form of profanity. Only God's hand can accomplish this work. It's a profound declaration of reliance.
Who is the speaker of the poem?
The speaker is Herbert himself, or at least a version of him—a believer who feels the weight of his own spiritual struggles and shortcomings. Herbert's devotional poems often come across as deeply personal, resembling diary entries directed at God more than traditional religious poetry.
What does the line about "stones to praise thee" mean?
It references Luke 19:40, where Jesus tells the Pharisees that if his disciples are silenced, the stones will cry out in praise. Herbert uses this as a personal reassurance: even if he fails — falls silent, loses faith, or dies — the stone-heart he has given will keep praising God. This expresses the idea that worship endures beyond the worshipper.
What is *The Temple* and why does this poem open it?
The Temple is Herbert's full collection of religious poetry, published in 1633 shortly after his death. The collection is designed like a church, guiding the reader through various spaces and spiritual experiences. "The Altar" begins the collection, establishing the framework for what comes next: the speaker presents his heart as the place of worship, welcoming the reader inside. It serves as a threshold poem—you move through it to access the rest of the book.
Is this poem Catholic or Protestant?
Herbert was an Anglican, belonging to the Church of England, which during his time occupied a middle ground between Roman Catholicism and Puritanism. The poem features the term "altar," a contentious choice for Puritans who linked altars to Catholic practices. However, Herbert's focus on the heart rather than ceremony, and on grace instead of works, aligns firmly with Protestant beliefs. He intentionally balanced both traditions.
What poetic devices does Herbert use?
The most noticeable feature is the shaped or patterned verse — the visual appearance of the altar. In addition to this, Herbert employs an extended metaphor (the heart as an altar throughout), biblical references (Psalm 51, Exodus 20, Luke 19), and a logical argument structure where each section builds on the previous one. The rhyme scheme consists of regular couplets, which provides the poem with a sense of careful, deliberate construction — appropriate for something described as being built stone by stone.
Citation
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MLA
Herbert, George. "The Altar." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/the-altar-george-herbert/.
APA
Herbert, G. (n.d.). The altar. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/the-altar-george-herbert/
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