The Annotated Edition
PATIENCE by D. H. Lawrence
A speaker observes a chaotic scene — the wind sends birds flying, and a train rumbles in from the north — yet his focus is solely on one thing: waiting for news that the woman he loves has been freed from her struggles.
- Poet
- D. H. Lawrence
- Themes
- loneliness, love, nature
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
A WIND comes from the north / Blowing little flocks of birds
Editor's note
The poem begins with a vibrant display of nature's energy. Birds dart across the sky like sea spray—small, vulnerable creatures swept along by a force greater than them. Right from the start, the north becomes the focal point, as the speaker's gaze consistently drifts back to it, creating a compass metaphor that ties the poem together at the end. The imagery is striking and almost chaotic, brimming with sound and movement.
Whither I turn and set / Like a needle steadfastly,
Editor's note
The second stanza takes a sudden turn inward. All the outside noise fades away, and we find ourselves in the speaker's mind. He likens himself to a compass needle, constantly swinging back to the same fixed point regardless of the circumstances. That point is the woman’s suffering, referred to as "the lode of her agony." The term "lode" comes from mining, describing a vein of ore that attracts a magnet; in this case, it also represents the magnetic draw of her pain. He is waiting for her to find freedom—freedom from illness, a toxic relationship, or some unspecified distress—but she hasn’t achieved that yet, which keeps him from moving on as well.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The compass needle
- The central image of the poem: a compass needle always points toward magnetic north, no matter where you take it. Lawrence uses this to illustrate that the speaker's attention and loyalty are beyond choice — they're a physical necessity. He *cannot* help but orient himself toward her.
- The north wind and the train from the north
- Both come from the same direction that the speaker continues to face. The north is where she is, or where her suffering begins. The wind and train are wild, unstoppable forces—reflecting the emotional pull the speaker feels, while also serving as reminders that the world keeps moving even as he stands still.
- The lode
- A lode refers to a mineral vein in rock that has magnetic properties. Lawrence uses this term from geology to express her suffering as if it possesses a tangible magnetic force. Her pain isn't merely an emotional burden; it physically anchors him in place.
- Birds blown like spray
- The birds are small and scattered, tossed around by the wind. They mirror the speaker's own state: he's also at the mercy of a force he didn't select and can't fight against, even though he seems calm on the outside instead of scattered.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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