The Annotated Edition
Patience by D. H. Lawrence
A speaker observes a chaotic scene — the wind sends birds flying, and a train rumbles in from the north — yet his focus is solely on one thing: waiting for news that the woman he loves has been freed from her struggles.
- Poet
- D. H. Lawrence
- Core theme
- Loneliness
Study actions
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
A WIND comes from the north / Blowing little flocks of birds
Editor's note
The poem begins with a vibrant display of nature's energy. Birds dart across the sky like sea spray—small, vulnerable creatures swept along by a force greater than them. Right from the start, the north becomes the focal point, as the speaker's gaze consistently drifts back to it, creating a compass metaphor that ties the poem together at the end. The imagery is striking and almost chaotic, brimming with sound and movement.
Whither I turn and set / Like a needle steadfastly,
Editor's note
The second stanza takes a sudden turn inward. All the outside noise fades away, and we find ourselves in the speaker's mind. He likens himself to a compass needle, constantly swinging back to the same fixed point regardless of the circumstances. That point is the woman’s suffering, referred to as "the lode of her agony." The term "lode" comes from mining, describing a vein of ore that attracts a magnet; in this case, it also represents the magnetic draw of her pain. He is waiting for her to find freedom—freedom from illness, a toxic relationship, or some unspecified distress—but she hasn’t achieved that yet, which keeps him from moving on as well.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The compass needle
- The central image of the poem: a compass needle always points toward magnetic north, no matter where you take it. Lawrence uses this to illustrate that the speaker's attention and loyalty are beyond choice — they're a physical necessity. He *cannot* help but orient himself toward her.
- The north wind and the train from the north
- Both come from the same direction that the speaker continues to face. The north is where she is, or where her suffering begins. The wind and train are wild, unstoppable forces—reflecting the emotional pull the speaker feels, while also serving as reminders that the world keeps moving even as he stands still.
- The lode
- A lode refers to a mineral vein in rock that has magnetic properties. Lawrence uses this term from geology to express her suffering as if it possesses a tangible magnetic force. Her pain isn't merely an emotional burden; it physically anchors him in place.
- Birds blown like spray
- The birds are small and scattered, tossed around by the wind. They mirror the speaker's own state: he's also at the mercy of a force he didn't select and can't fight against, even though he seems calm on the outside instead of scattered.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- free verse
- Rhyme
- ABCACB A ABABAB
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
Who is the 'she' the speaker is waiting for?
Lawrence doesn't mention her by name, but it's widely believed the poem refers to Frieda Weekley, the married woman he fell in love with in 1912. He patiently waited as she endured the difficult process of leaving her husband and losing custody of her children. The line "waiting ever to get / The news that she is free" clearly reflects that real-life scenario.
What does 'the lode of her agony' mean?
A lode is a vein of magnetic ore in rock — the kind that pulls a compass needle toward it. Lawrence suggests that her suffering exerts a similar magnetic pull on him. He isn’t just emotionally tied to her pain; he is attracted to it like a needle is attracted to magnetic north. He finds it impossible to look away or move on as long as she continues to suffer.
Why does the poem start with a train and birds if it's really about waiting for a woman?
Lawrence uses the external scene to create a contrast. In the first stanza, everything is in violent, noisy motion — the wind, birds, and a stampeding train. Then, in the second stanza, we see the speaker is completely still amid all that chaos, like a compass needle. This contrast amplifies his stillness, making it feel even more intense.
What is the poem's structure and does it matter?
The poem consists of two stanzas that differ in length — the first has seven lines and the second has six — and follows a loose rhyme scheme (ABABACB / ABABAB). The first stanza feels broad and expansive, while the second is more compressed and introspective. This change in structure reflects the poem's emotional journey, moving from the vastness of the world to a single, fixed point within the speaker's chest.
What does 'whither I turn and set' mean?
"Whither" in this context means "to which point" or "toward which." "Set" refers to how a compass needle aligns itself. Thus, the line conveys: "toward which I always turn and lock in place." This old-fashioned phrasing emphasizes the mechanical and involuntary nature of his attention—he doesn't consciously choose to face her direction; it just happens.
Is this poem about romantic love or something else, like grief?
It comes across as romantic love — particularly the heart-wrenching experience of caring for someone stuck in a painful situation you can't change. However, the themes of suffering, being stuck, and waiting also connect deeply with grief or any form of helpless watchfulness. Lawrence leaves the details vague enough that the emotion extends beyond the specific personal context.
How does this poem compare to Lawrence's better-known work?
Lawrence is better known for his novels like Sons and Lovers and Women in Love, but his poetry carries the same traits: vivid physical imagery, deep emotional honesty, and an unflinching approach to pain. "Patience" may be a subtler piece compared to some of his more fervent work, yet the compass needle metaphor stands out as a sharp and surprising image that exemplifies what makes his writing memorable.
Citation
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MLA
Lawrence, D. H. "Patience." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/patience-d-h-lawrence/.
APA
Lawrence, D. H. (n.d.). Patience. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/patience-d-h-lawrence/
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