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OLD by D. H. Lawrence

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A speaker relaxes by a sun-warmed windowsill on a calm afternoon, observing the world outside and drifting into thoughts of old books, nostalgic feelings, and lives that seem only half-remembered.

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D. H. Lawrence
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OLD

D. H. Lawrence

I HAVE opened the window to warm my hands on the sill Where the sunlight soaks in the stone: the afternoon Is full of dreams, my love, the boys are all still In a wistful dream of Lorna Doone. The clink of the shunting engines is sharp and fine, Like savage music striking far off, and there On the great, uplifted blue palace, lights stir and shine Where the glass is domed in the blue, soft air. There lies the world, my darling, full of wonder and wistfulness and strange Recognition and greetings of half-acquaint things, as I greet the cloud Of blue palace aloft there, among misty indefinite dreams that range At the back of my life's horizon, where the dreamings of past lives crowd. Over the nearness of Norwood Hill, through the mellow veil Of the afternoon glows to me the old romance of David and Dora, With the old, sweet, soothing tears, and laughter that shakes the sail Of the ship of the soul over seas where dreamed dreams lure the unoceaned explorer. All the bygone, hushed years Streaming back where the mist distils Into forgetfulness: soft-sailing waters where fears No longer shake, where the silk sail fills With an unfelt breeze that ebbs over the seas, where the storm Of living has passed, on and on Through the coloured iridescence that swims in the warm Wake of the tumult now spent and gone, Drifts my boat, wistfully lapsing after The mists of vanishing tears and the echo of laughter.

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

A speaker relaxes by a sun-warmed windowsill on a calm afternoon, observing the world outside and drifting into thoughts of old books, nostalgic feelings, and lives that seem only half-remembered. The current scene — schoolboys playing, the sounds of trains, a glass-domed building — keeps fading into a dreamlike past. In the end, the speaker's entire life feels like a boat gently drifting away from noise and struggle into a soft, fading distance.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. I HAVE opened the window to warm my hands on the sill / Where the sunlight soaks in the stone...

    Editor's note

    The poem begins with a simple moment — warming hands on a sunlit windowsill — that instantly places us in a lazy afternoon. The boys being "still" in a "wistful dream of Lorna Doone" (the Victorian adventure novel) suggests we are in a school setting, and the dreamy mood is already flowing from the speaker to the children nearby.

  2. The clink of the shunting engines is sharp and fine, / Like savage music striking far off...

    Editor's note

    Industrial sound — railway engines shunting in a yard — weaves into the poem, yet Lawrence softens its edge. He refers to it as "savage music," transforming mechanical noise into something wild and beautiful. The "great, uplifted blue palace" topped with its glass dome (probably the Crystal Palace in south London) reflects the light, creating a floating, dreamlike landmark on the horizon.

  3. There lies the world, my darling, full of wonder and / wistfulness and strange / Recognition...

    Editor's note

    The speaker speaks directly to someone close, using the term "my darling," and the poem expands into a reflection on how the world around us stirs up half-formed memories—those familiar feelings that remain elusive. The Crystal Palace perched on the hill symbolizes those hazy, enchanting elements just beyond our awareness, connected to "past lives" and dreams that linger in the recesses of our thoughts.

  4. Over the nearness of Norwood Hill, through the / mellow veil / Of the afternoon glows to me the old romance of David and Dora...

    Editor's note

    Norwood Hill is a real location close to where Lawrence taught in Croydon. "David and Dora" alludes to the tender, tragic young love depicted in Dickens's *David Copperfield*, evoking a specific bittersweet nostalgia in this stanza. The phrase "ship of the soul" navigating through seas of imagined dreams introduces a voyage metaphor that will guide the poem to its conclusion.

  5. All the bygone, hushed years / Streaming back where the mist distils / Into forgetfulness...

    Editor's note

    The final stanza is both the most expansive and the most musical. Time transforms into a sea, while the speaker's life turns into a small boat gently drifting in the calm wake left behind after a storm has passed. The language slows and softens — "silk sail," "unfelt breeze," "iridescence" — as the poem illustrates the very fading it describes. It concludes with "laughter," but it's just an echo, already fading away.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone feels warm, slow, and subtly melancholic — reminiscent of a late afternoon when you're not exactly sad but also not fully engaged. Lawrence avoids slipping into self-pity by grounding it in vivid, tangible details: the clink of engines, the glass dome catching the light, the name of a particular hill. The affection in "my love" and "my darling" lends the poem an intimate, confiding quality, as if the speaker is sharing thoughts with someone who gets it without needing a full explanation.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

The sun-warmed windowsill
The line between the physical present and the dreaming mind. Warming hands on stone is a tangible, physical act, yet it leads straight into daydreaming — the window is both a literal and figurative space where the real world and our inner thoughts connect.
The Crystal Palace ("blue palace")
The impressive glass-and-iron exhibition hall on Sydenham Hill stands out, easily seen from Croydon, where Lawrence taught. It appears as a shimmering, almost otherworldly landmark — something that’s here now but feels like it belongs to a different time, perfectly capturing the poem's theme of the past shining through the present.
The boat drifting in the wake
In the final stanza, the speaker's life is likened to a small vessel gliding on the tranquil water that remains after a storm. The "storm of living" has passed or is fading; what’s left is a soft, aimless drift toward forgetfulness. This imagery evokes the sensation of aging without framing it as a loss.
Mist and iridescence
Mist recurs as the very texture of memory—not ominous or harsh, but gentle, hazy, and fading. The "coloured iridescence" left after the storm hints that even after emotions have passed, they can leave behind something lovely, similar to oil floating on water.
Literary references (Lorna Doone, David and Dora)
The Victorian novels aren't merely name-drops; they represent an entire emotional universe rooted in childhood and youth—tales of romance, loss, and adventure that have shaped our inner lives. Referencing them suggests that our identities are partly woven from the narratives of others.

§06Historical context

Historical context

Lawrence wrote this poem while he was a schoolteacher in Croydon, south London, around 1908 to 1912—a time that was both formative and restless for him. In his mid-twenties and far from his Nottinghamshire roots, he was already crafting the fiction and poetry that would establish his reputation. The Crystal Palace, which could be seen from Croydon perched on its hill in Sydenham, had by then become a faded Victorian marvel, losing its luster as a symbol of progress since its grand opening in 1851. This sense of faded grandeur is a perfect fit for the poem. The mentions of Dickens and Blackmore (from *David Copperfield* and *Lorna Doone*) reflect a generation that grew up on Victorian literature, and the poem occupies a transitional space between that era and the modernist movement Lawrence was instrumental in shaping. It later appeared in his early collection *Amores* (1916).

§07FAQ

Questions readers ask

Lawrence keeps the person's identity a secret, likely on purpose. It might be a lover, a close friend, or even the reader themselves. This choice creates an intimate feel, as if the poem is a personal secret shared during a quiet moment. Some readers interpret it as the speaker conversing with himself, reflecting on his own inner thoughts.

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