The Annotated Edition
DEAD MAN'S MORRICE by Alfred Noyes
A mysterious fiddler at a tavern plays a tune that the speaker can’t seem to forget, and the poem expands from that haunting melody into reflections on love, death, and the anxiety of being forgotten.
- Poet
- Alfred Noyes
- Year
- 1907
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
There came a crowder to the Mermaid Inn, / One dark May night,
Editor's note
A crowder is an old term for a fiddle player. He enters the Mermaid Inn — a genuine London tavern known since Elizabethan times — on a dark May night and quiets the raucous crowd with his music. The setting feels intentionally old-fashioned, drawing us into a realm where the line between the living and the dead seems blurred. The refrain he plays — *Look for me once, lest I should look for you, and look in vain* — is presented here as a 'phantom strain,' a tune that sticks in the mind like a ghost.
In that old wood, where ghosts of lovers walk, / At fall of day,
Editor's note
The scene transitions from the inn to a twilight forest filled with the spirits of past lovers. These apparitions drift among damp leaves and dew, attempting to capture fragments of conversations they once shared. The description of leaves 'wet with dew, or tears, or rain' intentionally blurs the line between nature and emotion — it’s hard to tell if the moisture comes from the weather or from sorrow. The refrain echoes again, now sounding less like a song and more like a warning.
Have we not seen them--pale forgotten shades / That do return,
Editor's note
Noyes shifts to 'we,' inviting the reader to witness the poem alongside him. These ghosts return to the woods they cherished in life, searching for the hawthorn blossoms ('the may') and the fern-filled glades — but they find nothing of what they once knew. The landscape has moved on without them. The line 'of the may they knew, no wraiths remain' is quietly heartbreaking: even the memory of the place has faded, leaving the ghosts with nothing to hold onto.
They see those happier ghosts that waned away-- / Whither, who knows?--
Editor's note
Now there are two kinds of ghosts: the lost and lonely ones wandering through an altered landscape, and a second, happier kind who return with music and spring flowers, still accompanied by their lovers. These joyful spirits sing the refrain together—it transforms into a love song instead of a lament when two people share it. The contrast is striking: the difference between a haunting and a reunion is whether someone is waiting for you.
So, after death, if in that starless deep, / I lose your eyes,
Editor's note
This is the emotional core of the poem. The speaker makes a heartfelt promise: if death pulls them apart from their beloved, they won’t wait for any celestial meeting in the afterlife. Instead, they will return to the exact earthly locations — the elm trees, the old grass-grown lane — where their love was genuine and authentic. The refrain changes a bit here: 'Look for me *there*,' providing a specific place for their longing. It's a deeply physical kind of love, one that resists the idea of abstraction.
There, as of old, under the dreaming moon, / A phantom throng
Editor's note
The poem ends with a vision of the 'ghostly morrice' — a morris dance danced by the dead. Hands join, eyes connect, lips touch once more. The morrice (an archaic spelling of morris) is a communal folk dance, suggesting a revival of love among an entire community of reunited lovers. The final refrain omits the word 'there' and closely mirrors the opening lines, but now it carries the weight of everything the poem has developed: it transforms from merely a fiddler's tune into the speaker's own timeless longing.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The fiddler's tune / refrain
- The repeated line — *Look for me once, lest I should look for you, and look in vain* — serves as the emotional backbone of the poem. It begins as a melody from a stranger and transforms into the speaker's personal promise. Here, music symbolizes the enduring nature of emotion through time and even beyond death: a tune that 'haunts' perfectly captures something that lingers.
- The may (hawthorn blossom)
- May blossom represents spring, renewal, and young love in English tradition. In the poem, the ghosts look for 'the may they knew' but find nothing — the flowers are absent, along with the world that once held their love. When the happier ghosts come back *with* the may, it shows that their love has endured.
- The wood at fall of day
- The twilight wood serves as the poem's liminal space—caught between day and night, and between the living and the dead. It's a place where ghosts feel most comfortable, and where love, memory, and loss intertwine. Noyes uses this setting to imply that the line between life and death is more fragile than we realize, particularly when strong emotions are at play.
- The ghostly morrice (morris dance)
- The morris dance is a lively communal folk tradition from England, rich in energy and intricate patterns. As a 'dead man's morrice,' it evolves into a dance of reunion — where the dead return to the rhythms of life and love. This adds a sense of joyful, albeit ghostly, continuity to the poem's ending instead of a feeling of final loss.
- The elms and the old lane
- These specific places—the whispering elms and the grass-covered lane—represent the uniqueness of true love. The speaker rejects a vague idea of a heavenly afterlife and insists on coming back to *these* trees and *this* path. The detail matters: love isn’t an abstract concept, and grief isn’t either.
- The starless deep
- Death is portrayed not as heaven or hell but as a 'starless deep' — a place devoid of light, direction, or any recognizable features. It represents the final state of being lost. The speaker's fear isn't death itself, but rather the thought of losing sight of their beloved's eyes in that darkness. This is why they choose to return to the bright, familiar world instead.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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