The Annotated Edition
BY GUSTAV PFIZER by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
A wandering young man dreams of having a wife and child, only to lose them both to death.
- Themes
- loneliness, memory, mortality
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
A youth, light-hearted and content, / I wander through the world
Editor's note
The speaker describes himself as a carefree and rootless young man. The imagery of a tent that is quickly pitched and taken down, reminiscent of Bedouin life, suggests that he has no permanent home — he belongs nowhere and to no one. His tone is light and slightly boastful, creating a stark contrast with what comes next.
Yet oft I dream, that once a wife / Close in my heart was locked,
Editor's note
The word 'yet' serves as the poem's central pivot. The speaker confesses that he frequently imagines a domestic life that he never experienced — or maybe one he had and lost. A wife 'locked' in his heart and a child he rocked evoke feelings of warmth, safety, and belonging. This dream feels so real that it resembles a memory.
I wake! Away that dream,--away! / Too long did it remain!
Editor's note
The exclamation marks indicate the speaker is desperately trying to shake off the dream, much like someone slapping themselves awake. However, the need to command the dream to leave — and the acknowledgment that it lingered 'too long' — reveals that he can't just push it aside. It has crept into his waking life as well.
The end lies ever in my thought; / To a grave so cold and deep
Editor's note
Now the dream's complete story comes to light: it concludes with death. The 'beautiful mother' is laid to rest, and the child follows — 'dropt the child asleep' softly suggests the child's passing as well. The chill and depth of the grave stand in stark contrast to the warmth of cradling a child in the earlier stanza.
But now the dream is wholly o'er, / I bathe mine eyes and see;
Editor's note
The speaker washes his face—a simple, grounding act—and reaffirms his identity as a free wanderer. The phrase "light and free," repeated from the opening stanza, feels like a return to his true self. However, the reader can sense that this sense of resolution is delicate.
Two locks--and they are wondrous fair-- / Left me that vision mild;
Editor's note
The twist is that the dream left behind something real. Two locks of hair—one brown and one blond—are the only physical reminders of the wife and child. It's unclear whether these are genuine keepsakes from people who actually died or if they somehow crossed over from the dream world into reality. This ambiguity is what gives the poem its haunting quality.
And when I see that lock of gold, / Pale grows the evening-red;
Editor's note
The child's blond lock absorbs the colors of the sunset — even beauty fades in the shadow of the child's death. The last two lines hit hard: the sight of the dark lock of the mother's hair leaves the speaker wishing for his own death. The sorrow for the child is overwhelming; the sorrow for the mother feels unbearable. The poem concludes not with closure but with raw, unfiltered pain.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The tent
- The quickly pitched and furled tent reflects the speaker's life of being rootless and unattached. It suggests freedom, yet also highlights the lack of a home and permanence—a life where he believes he has nothing to lose.
- The two locks of hair
- The brown and blond locks serve as the poem's main symbols. They represent tangible evidence of love and loss, connecting the dream world with reality. In the 19th century, it was common to keep a lock of hair from a deceased loved one as a mourning practice, making this image particularly relatable for Longfellow's readers.
- The fading evening-red
- The sunset fades when the speaker gazes at the child's lock of hair, symbolizing the beauty and life that are slipping away. The natural world reflects his deep sorrow — even the sky seems to lose its vibrancy.
- The dream
- The dream is both a safe haven and a source of anguish. It offers the speaker a glimpse of a life filled with love and family, yet it inevitably concludes in death. The poem leaves readers uncertain about whether the wife and child truly existed or were just figments of imagination, turning the dream into a symbol of unfulfilled desire.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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