The Annotated Edition
A FABLE by James Russell Lowell
Two friends sneak away on a Sunday to go hunting and end up shooting a goose that belongs to a local deacon.
- Themes
- doubt, growing-up, identity
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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Two fellers, Isrel named and Joe, / One Sundy mornin' 'greed to go
Editor's note
Lowell immerses us in a rural New England setting through thick dialect spelling. The two men are plotting their Sunday hunting trip right in the middle of church service, making sure their timing keeps the community from catching them breaking the Sabbath. The comic tone is established right away—these aren’t villains, just regular guys attempting to avoid social judgment.
Joe didn't want to go a mite; / He felt ez though 'twarn't skeercely right,
Editor's note
Joe has a conscience. He understands that hunting on Sundays is wrong and attempts to voice his concerns. However, Isrel uses mockery as his weapon—he sarcastically refers to Joe as 'Deacon' and continually pokes fun at him until Joe becomes more scared of being ridiculed than of acting unethically. This is the driving force of the poem: social embarrassment takes precedence over true ethical convictions.
Past noontime they went trampin' round / An' nary thing to pop at found,
Editor's note
The hunting trip isn't going well—they don't spot anything to shoot all morning. The fact that they've sacrificed their Sabbath for *nothing* is quite ironic. Just as they settle down to take a break, a goose suddenly appears on a nearby pond, like a temptation set before them.
Isrel he ups and grabs his gun; / Sez he, 'By ginger, here's some fun!'
Editor's note
Joe quickly spots the goose and knows it belongs to Deacon Peleg—a well-respected figure in the community, and a deacon to boot, which brings back the earlier mockery. Isrel isn't bothered; he's already seen the gun and takes his shot. The *Bang!* and the goose's death come across with a stark, almost comical simplicity.
Sez Joe, 'I wouldn't ha' been hired / At that poor critter to ha' fired,
Editor's note
Joe quickly separates himself from the act—he insists he wouldn't have done it for money—but then shifts right to organizing the roast. His moral objection disappears as soon as the action is complete and there's something to gain. This hypocrisy is subtle yet sharp.
'I won't agree to no such bender,' / Sez Isrel; 'keep it tell it's tender;
Editor's note
Now the two argue about *when* to eat the goose. Isrel wants to age it, while Joe finds the smell revolting. Their bickering over the spoils of a stolen, Sabbath-breaking kill is hilariously ironic—they’ve both done something wrong, but they can’t even agree on how to enjoy it.
So they disputed to an' fro / Till cunnin' Isrel sez to Joe,
Editor's note
Isrel suggests putting the goose away for a day or two and then deciding with a coin flip. The word 'cunnin'' (cunning) is a subtle hint — Isrel is aware of his strategy. Joe goes along with it, and the goose gets tucked away. It seems like a fair compromise, but really, it's just postponing the issue and complicating things further.
Now 'twuz the hottest kind o' weather, / An' when at last they come together,
Editor's note
The punchline: the goose has completely rotted in the summer heat. The coin toss is pointless now because no sane person would eat it — except for Isrel, who 'kind o' liked the smell of it and eats it anyway. Joe ends up with nothing. The moral comes through without a single preachy word: their Sabbath-breaking, theft, cowardice, and squabbling led to exactly nothing good — except for one man with very low standards.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The goose
- The goose represents the classic 'forbidden fruit' — owned by a deacon (of all people), it appears just when temptation is strongest, and ultimately becomes rotted and useless. It symbolizes any ill-gotten gain that seems attractive at first but ultimately leads to nothing.
- The Sabbath / Sunday morning
- Sunday isn't merely another day of the week here; it's the backbone of our community's moral expectations. Skipping out during church service is seen as the first act of cowardice that triggers everything else.
- The coin toss
- Leaving a moral question to chance is a way of avoiding moral responsibility. The coin toss illustrates how people hide behind 'fairness' to dodge accountability — and in this case, it makes no difference, as the goose spoils before the toss even matters.
- The smell
- The scent in the poem closely follows the theme of moral decay. Joe's repulsion towards the decaying goose reflects his earlier, though quickly buried, disgust for breaking the Sabbath and stealing. Isrel's acceptance of the smell reveals his deeper moral indifference.
§06Historical context
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