The Annotated Edition
TWO YOUNG FAUNS ARE SITTING ON A ROCK LISTENING. by Percy Bysshe Shelley
This is a scene from Shelley's verse drama *Prometheus Unbound*, where two young fauns sit on a rock, captivated by the mysterious spirit-music that flows through an enchanted forest.
- Themes
- art, beauty, freedom
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§02Themes
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The path through which that lovely twain / Have passed, by cedar, pine, and yew,
Editor's note
The first Semichorus of Spirits depicts the forest path traveled by two figures, Prometheus and Asia, who are the central lovers of the poem. The canopy formed by cedar, pine, and yew is so thick that sunlight, moonlight, wind, and rain can’t penetrate it — creating a sealed, sacred space. The only light that filters in comes from stray dewdrops that hang like pearls on pale flowers, or a single starbeam that slips through a crack in the branches before being swept away by the changing sky. The stanza concludes with the phrase "the gloom divine" — a darkness that feels more sacred than threatening.
There the voluptuous nightingales, / Are awake through all the broad noonday.
Editor's note
The second Semichorus steps in to depict the nightingales within this magical grove. These birds sing even at noon, hinting that the usual rules don’t hold here. When one bird, overwhelmed with emotion, leans against its mate, another effortlessly takes over the melody, ensuring the music continues without interruption. The closing thought — "joy is almost pain" — reflects the Romantic belief that beauty, when felt intensely, merges with suffering.
There those enchanted eddies play / Of echoes, music-tongued, which draw,
Editor's note
The first Semichorus explains how spirit-music acts like an irresistible current. By referencing "Demogorgon's mighty law" — with Demogorgon representing the enigmatic primal force at the core of *Prometheus Unbound* — all spirits are drawn along this hidden path, similar to how rivers flow to the ocean fed by melting snow. The spirits don't realize they're being compelled; they believe they are pursuing their own desires. The music evolves from a soft whisper into a powerful storm of sound that carries them toward the "fatal mountain," much like clouds drifting through the sky.
Canst thou imagine where those spirits live / Which make such delicate music in the woods?
Editor's note
The scene now focuses on the two fauns, who have been quietly listening throughout. The First Faun poses the question that has been lingering in the air: where do these spirit-musicians actually reside? The fauns are deeply familiar with these woods—they roam through caves and concealed spots—but have never laid eyes on the spirits, only heard their music. It’s a childlike question, filled with genuine curiosity rather than frustration.
'Tis hard to tell; / I have heard those more skilled in spirits say,
Editor's note
The Second Faun shares insights he’s gathered from wiser beings: the spirits inhabit the bubbles that float up from pale water-flowers resting on the beds of clear lakes. These bubbles resemble small domed pavilions, illuminated by green and golden light that filters through the water. When a bubble bursts, the spirits surge upward with the escaping air, shooting through the night sky like meteors, only to plunge back down beneath the earth. It’s a tiny cosmology — an entire realm of unseen life moving between water, air, and underground.
If such live thus, have others other lives, / Under pink blossoms or within the bells
Editor's note
The First Faun ponders the idea and wonders if other spirits might dwell within flower bells, tucked violets, the waning scent of wilting blooms, or the tiny sphere of a sunlit dewdrop. Each image feels more fragile and intricate than the one before. The question remains unanswered — Shelley doesn't provide a neat conclusion but encourages the reader to continue dreaming.
Ay, many more which we may well divine. / But should we stay to speak, noontide would come,
Editor's note
The Second Faun acknowledges that there are countless such lives, but quickly ends the conversation: if they stay too long, the irritable Silenus will discover his goats are unmilked and won't share his songs about Fate, Chance, God, Chaos, Love, and the bound Titan Prometheus — and how Prometheus will eventually be freed and bring humanity together as one brotherhood. These "wise and lovely songs" possess a beauty that even silences the nightingales. The fauns' small, inquisitive world is revealed to be embedded within the poem's vast mythological narrative.
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The enclosed forest path
- The canopied path, protected from the sun, moon, wind, and rain, creates a sacred space beyond the usual flow of time and nature — a realm where transformation and love follow their own unique rules.
- The nightingales
- The nightingales singing at noon—when they’re usually quiet—represent art and beauty that go beyond natural boundaries. Their music flows seamlessly from one bird to another, capturing the endless flow of inspiration.
- The lake bubbles
- The tiny bubble-pavilions on the lake floor are the hidden, delicate homes of spiritual life—beauty and consciousness thriving in spots too small and fleeting for our ordinary perception to notice.
- Demogorgon's law
- Demogorgon, the primal force in *Prometheus Unbound*, embodies the essential drive that pushes everything — including spirits — toward their destined ends, regardless of their awareness.
- The dewdrop
- The sunlit sphere of dew represents Shelley's smallest unit of wonder: an entire world of light and life packed into something that will disappear in minutes. This image recurs throughout his work, symbolizing beautiful impermanence.
- Silenus and his songs
- Silenus, the wise old satyr from classical mythology, embodies the tradition of cosmic storytelling—the epic tales of Fate, Love, and liberation that shape the fauns' everyday lives.
§06Historical context
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