The Annotated Edition
THE WIND by Eugene Field
A wind approaches a narrator and reveals its deep love for the Rose, only to return later in winter, heartbroken, to grieve her passing.
- Poet
- Eugene Field
- Themes
- love, memory, nature
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Cometh the Wind from the garden, fragrant and full of sweet singing-- / Under my tree where I sit cometh the Wind to confession.
Editor's note
The poem begins with the Wind arriving at the narrator's tree, which is described as fragrant and singing. The word **confession** stands out — the Wind is ready to share something personal, much like a secret shared with a close friend. The old-fashioned verb form "Cometh" adds a fairy-tale, timeless feel to the whole piece from the very beginning.
"Out in the garden abides the Queen of the beautiful Roses-- / Her do I love and to-night wooed her with passionate singing;"
Editor's note
The Wind's confession: it has been wooing the Rose, calling her a queen. Singing to win her affection is a timeless romantic move, and the Wind's pride is clear. The Rose's reaction — **blushes** — is a lovely touch, as the natural reddening of a rose mirrors a woman's shy, happy response to a love confession.
"Wind, there is spice in thy breath; thy rapture hath fragrance Sabaean!"
Editor's note
The narrator only speaks once in the tale sections, replying to the Wind's excitement. **Sabaean** refers to Sheba, the ancient kingdom known for its spices and perfumes — meaning the narrator is saying the Wind actually smells sweet and exotic, carrying the scent of the Rose. This serves as physical evidence that supports the Wind's story.
"Straight from my wooing I come--my lips are bedewed with her kisses-- / My lips and my song and my heart are drunk with the rapture of loving!"
Editor's note
The Wind feels giddy, almost tipsy. The repetition of **lips, song, heart** shows just how deeply the Wind is wrapped up in this love. Using the word "drunk" hints that this joy is intense and a bit reckless, subtly hinting at the sorrow that lies ahead.
The Wind he loveth the red, red Rose, / And he wooeth his love to wed:
Editor's note
The first **Song** section takes a moment to step back from the narrative, offering a chorus-like summary of the Wind's love. The repeated phrase "red, red" mirrors Robert Burns's "A Red, Red Rose," amplifying the color's ties to passion and desire. In the last two lines of this stanza, there's a cautionary note — the Wind "recketh naught" (cares nothing) about the destruction that will come when summer fades. The joy is genuine, but it's also oblivious.
Cometh the Wind from the garden, bitter with sorrow of winter.
Editor's note
The second tale section begins with a sharp line that reflects the poem's opening but turns everything upside down. Where the Wind was once sweet and melodic, it has now become **bitter**. This structural echo amplifies the contrast—the same Wind, the same garden, yet a completely transformed world.
"Wind, is thy love-song forgot? Wherefore thy dread lamentations?"
Editor's note
The narrator wonders what happened to the Wind's joy. This question feels almost rhetorical since the reader likely knows the answer, yet it allows the Wind to share its sorrow. This moment reflects the earlier confession scene, establishing a balanced structure.
Sigheth and moaneth the Wind: "Out of the desolate garden / Come I from vigils with ghosts over the grave of the Summer!"
Editor's note
The Wind has been keeping watch over the dead season like a mourner at a graveside. **Vigils with ghosts** paints a vivid picture — the Wind is haunted by memories of its past joy. Summer takes on a human quality, as if it could be laid to rest, making the shift in seasons feel like a genuine loss.
"Thy breath that was fragrant anon with rapture of music and loving, / It grieveth all things with its sting and the frost of its wailing displeasure."
Editor's note
The narrator notes that the same breath that used to bring sweetness now brings cold and pain. This highlights the poem's central irony: the Wind itself hasn't changed, but what it brings has. The shift from the Wind's sweet perfume to icy frost symbolizes how grief takes the place of joy.
The Wind maketh ever more moan and ever it giveth this answer: / "My heart it is numb with the cold of the love that was born of the Summer--"
Editor's note
The Wind's prolonged lament. The phrase **numb with the cold** operates on two levels — the literal chill of winter and the emotional numbness that follows loss. The Wind speaks of kissing the Rose's "low, desolate tomb" and hearing a ghostly voice wailing from deep within its own heart. Grief has turned into a lasting, internal haunting.
The Wind he waileth the red, red Rose / When the Summer of love is sped--
Editor's note
The final **Song** reflects the first, changing "loveth" to **waileth** and "lifeless love" for living love. The Rose is now shrouded in snow. The closing lines represent the poem's emotional climax: the Wind brings to the grave "such things as a true heart brings" — suggesting that grief itself proves the love was genuine. Mourning is the ultimate expression of devotion.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The Wind
- The Wind is the poem's central figure and represents the **lover** — passionate, restless, and ultimately unable to resist time and loss. Wind is a natural force linked to change and transience, making it an ideal symbol for a story about love that cannot endure.
- The Rose
- The Rose symbolizes the **beloved** and embodies beauty itself — vibrant, alive, and ever-changing with the seasons. Her death arrives with winter, making the love story feel tragic from the outset, even when the Wind is at its most cheerful.
- Summer
- Summer represents the **season of love and life** — that fleeting time when beauty thrives and happiness seems within reach. When it ends, it feels like a true loss, almost like mourning, turning the seasonal change into a personal tragedy instead of just a natural occurrence.
- Winter / Frost / Snow
- Winter and its cold elements — frost, snow, the shroud — symbolize **grief, death, and the loss of sensation**. The Wind's breath shifting from fragrant to icy serves as the poem's key transformation, using temperature to reflect emotional states.
- The Ghost
- The ghost that the Wind hears in its own heart is the **memory of the Rose** — a love that has faded but won’t be quiet. This implies that grief isn’t merely sadness; it's a haunting presence, where the past continues to resonate within the person who loved.
- The Grave / Tomb
- The Rose's grave and the "grave of the Summer" turn what is usually just a metaphor into something tangible — the **end of a relationship or a season**. By grounding grief in a physical space (a spot where the Wind comes, watches over, and kisses), Field gives mourning a solid, almost ceremonial feel.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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