The Annotated Edition
THE FOUR LAKES OF MADISON by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Longfellow gazes at the four lakes that surround Madison, Wisconsin, envisioning them as enchanting goddesses reflecting the city.
- Themes
- beauty, dreams, nature
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Four limpid lakes,--four Naiades / Or sylvan deities are these,
Editor's note
Longfellow starts by naming the four lakes: Mendota, Monona, Wingra, and Waubesa, and he quickly turns them into mythological beings. **Naiades** are water nymphs in Greek mythology, while **sylvan deities** represent spirits of the woods—transforming the genuine Wisconsin landscape into something ancient and divine. The lakes are more than just water; they are vibrant entities that reflect the city of Madison, which is nestled on the isthmus between them, holding up shining mirrors in their surfaces.
By day the coursers of the sun / Drink of these waters as they run
Editor's note
The **coursers of the sun** are the horses that pull the sun's chariot across the sky — a classic image from Roman mythology. Longfellow suggests that the lakes catch and reflect sunlight so brilliantly that it seems like the sun's horses pause to drink from them. At night, the stars (**constellations**) appear mirrored in the water, forming a second sky beneath the real one. The lakes act as a portal connecting the heavens above with the world below.
Fair lakes, serene and full of light, / Fair town, arrayed in robes of white,
Editor's note
The final stanza zooms out to capture the entire scene — lakes alongside the city. Both are portrayed as glowing and bathed in light, reflecting the "robes of azure" mentioned in the first stanza and linking the city to the same divine beauty found in the lakes. The term **visionary** stands out: Longfellow acknowledges that the view appears almost surreal, resembling a landscape suspended in clouds or a dream. The **golden atmosphere** in the last line casts everything in a warm, ethereal light, leaving the reader with a feeling of wonder instead of a detailed description.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The four lakes as Naiades
- Casting the lakes as Greek water nymphs transforms them from mere geographical features into vibrant, divine beings. This idea implies that the landscape possesses a spirit and intent; it actively *embraces* the city instead of just encircling it.
- Shining mirrors
- The lakes serve as mirrors, reflecting the sky during the day and the stars at night, while also showing the city its own image. Mirrors symbolize truth and clarity, suggesting that Madison is a place deserving of a clear view.
- Robes of azure / robes of white
- Both the lakes and the city are depicted as draped in robes, connecting them as equals and bestowing a regal, almost sacred dignity upon both. The transition from blue (water) to white (light, purity) guides the eye from the natural world to the human realm.
- The land of dreams
- By likening Madison to a dream landscape, Longfellow implies that the city straddles the boundary between reality and imagination — so beautiful it almost feels unreal. This is a compliment, yet it carries a subtle reminder that such beauty is delicate and temporary.
- Golden atmosphere
- Gold in Romantic poetry often represents the ideal, the eternal, or the divine. By bathing the scene in gold in the final line, Longfellow emphasizes the entire vision as something precious and transcendent, elevating it beyond the ordinary flow of time.
§06Historical context
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§07FAQ
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