The Annotated Edition
THE ENTRY INTO JERUSALEM by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
A young girl shares the Gospel story of Blind Bartimeus, a beggar by the road outside Jericho who calls out to Jesus and receives his sight.
- Themes
- faith, hope, identity
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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Blind Bartimeus at the gates / Of Jericho in darkness waits;
Editor's note
The daughter sets the scene directly from the Gospel of Mark (10:46–52). Bartimeus is sitting outside Jericho—a city whose gates symbolize the boundary between his old life of darkness and a new one. The word "waits" carries significant weight here: this is a man whose entire life has been defined by waiting.
The thronging multitudes increase; / Blind Bartimeus, hold thy peace!
Editor's note
The crowd attempts to quiet the beggar — a detail that Longfellow takes straight from scripture. The irony is striking: the very people nearest to a miracle are the ones trying to hinder it. Bartimeus won’t be silenced, and his determination is what catches attention. The Greek line — *Θάρσει ἔγειραι, φωνεῖ δε* ("Take heart, rise up, he is calling thee") — comes just as the crowd's demeanor changes the moment Jesus stops.
Then saith the Christ, as silent stands / The crowd, "What wilt thou at my hands?"
Editor's note
The crowd that was noisy just a moment ago falls completely silent. Jesus asks a question that seems almost obvious — of course a blind man wants to see — but the question is important. It acknowledges Bartimeus as a person with agency, not just a problem to solve. The Greek closing line, *Ἡ πίστις σου σέσωκέ δε* ("Thy faith hath made thee whole"), shifts the focus back to Bartimeus himself.
Ye that have eyes, yet cannot see, / In darkness and in misery,
Editor's note
The poem shifts from storytelling to a more sermonic tone. The three Greek phrases echo like a liturgical refrain, positioning the reader as the one being spoken to. Longfellow emphasizes that physical blindness is the simpler issue; the more challenging blindness is spiritual or moral — it's about having sight yet remaining in darkness. The daughter's song transforms into a direct invitation to faith.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Blindness
- Bartimeus's physical blindness symbolizes any condition — whether spiritual, moral, or emotional — where a person fails to see what is true or good. In the final stanza, Longfellow clearly states that the truly blind are those who have functioning eyes yet still exist "in darkness and in misery."
- The crowd
- The crowd trying to silence Bartimeus symbolizes the social pressure and conventional mindset that often stifles genuine, desperate pleas for help. They mean well, but they're close to stopping a miracle from happening.
- The Greek phrases
- Longfellow includes the original Greek from the New Testament at the end of each stanza — *"Jesus, have mercy on me,"* *"Take heart, rise up, he is calling thee,"* and *"Thy faith hath made thee whole."* These lines serve as sacred anchors, elevating the poem beyond just a retelling and making it feel more like scripture. By repeating them in the final stanza, he transforms them into a creed.
- The gates of Jericho
- Jericho's gates represent the line between exclusion and inclusion, between the world Bartimeus is trapped in and the world he is about to step into. Standing at a gate symbolizes hope — you may not be inside, but you haven't lost faith.
- The Syro-Phoenician woman and her daughter
- The framing device — a mother and daughter on a rooftop in Jerusalem — gives a voice to Gentile outsiders, who were once excluded from Jewish religious life themselves. Their rendition of this story adds depth: faith and healing are accessible to everyone, not just those within the fold.
§06Historical context
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