The Annotated Edition
The Demoniac by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
In this brief dramatic poem, a tormented speaker pleads with Aschmedai—a demon from Jewish folklore—for mercy.
- Core theme
- Despair
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O Aschmedai! / Thou angel of the bottomless pit, have pity!
Editor's note
The speaker begins with an urgent and heartfelt plea to Aschmedai, a demon-king from Jewish lore found in the Talmud and later Kabbalistic writings. Referring to him as the 'angel of the bottomless pit' recognizes his formidable strength, yet simultaneously appeals for mercy — a contradiction that reflects the speaker's vulnerability from the very beginning.
It was enough to hurl King Solomon, / On whom be peace! two hundred leagues away
Editor's note
The speaker references the well-known legend where Aschmedai outsmarts and defeats King Solomon, banishing him two hundred leagues from Jerusalem. The expression 'On whom be peace!' serves as a traditional Jewish honorific for a respected figure, and placing it mid-sentence adds a liturgical, almost mournful cadence to the line. The underlying message is clear: even Solomon, the wisest and most powerful of kings, faced defeat — so it’s evident that the demon has already demonstrated his strength.
Into the country, and to make him scullion / In the kitchen of the King of Maschkemen!
Editor's note
Solomon's downfall is clearly illustrated here: he goes from being the greatest king to a kitchen servant in a foreign land. A 'scullion' refers to the lowest kitchen worker, typically someone who scrubs pots. 'Maschkemen' is a place name that originates from the same folkloric tradition. The stark contrast between Solomon's former glory and his current humiliation supports the speaker's argument: you've already inflicted your worst on the best of men, so why continue to torment me?
Why dost thou hurl me here among these rocks, / And cut me with these stones?
Editor's note
The poem ends with intense physical pain. The speaker isn't using metaphor here — or at least wants us to truly sense the physical reality of being hurled against rocks. This transition from grand historical legend to this immediate, bleeding moment is the poem's most striking shift. It anchors all the mythology in one suffering body.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Aschmedai
- In Jewish folklore, Aschmedai (or Asmodeus) is known as the king of demons. He represents any overpowering, malicious force that a person can't negotiate with or evade — a symbol of senseless cruelty and authority.
- King Solomon as scullion
- Solomon's decline from the greatest king to the lowest kitchen servant represents a complete reversal of fortune. The speaker points to this as proof that no one, no matter how powerful, is immune to such destruction.
- Rocks and stones
- The rocks the speaker is thrown against are both literal and symbolic—they embody the harsh, uncaring world that the demoniac is cast into, a realm devoid of softness or refuge.
- The bottomless pit
- A classic depiction of hell or the abyss, taken from Jewish and Christian traditions. It suggests that Aschmedai's power is boundless — there's always a deeper level to descend.
§06Form & structure
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- Meter
- blank verse
§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
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Who is Aschmedai?
Aschmedai is known as the king of demons in Jewish folklore, originating from the Talmud and Kabbalistic tradition. He is most famously featured in the Talmudic tractate Gittin, where he deceives King Solomon, steals his magic ring, and assumes his throne while Solomon is banished. He is also connected to the character of Asmodeus in the Book of Tobit.
What is the story about Solomon that the poem references?
According to the Talmud, King Solomon captured Aschmedai and compelled him to assist in building the Temple in Jerusalem. However, Aschmedai managed to deceive Solomon into surrendering his magic ring, after which he cast Solomon two hundred leagues away and took on his identity as king. As a result, Solomon found himself wandering as a beggar and working as a servant until he ultimately regained his throne. Longfellow draws on this legend as the main argument for the speaker’s call for mercy.
What does 'scullion' mean?
A scullion is the lowest kitchen worker, responsible for washing pots, scrubbing floors, and handling the dirtiest tasks. This role represents the bottom tier of household staff. Longfellow uses this term to illustrate the extent of Solomon's humiliation: from the wisest king on earth to someone scrubbing dishes in an unfamiliar kitchen.
Is the speaker actually possessed by a demon?
The title 'The Demoniac' implies that the speaker is someone thought to be possessed — a marginalized individual who experiences torment and rejection. It's unclear whether Longfellow means this literally or if he uses it as a metaphor for mental anguish and social isolation. The poem takes the form of a dramatic monologue, positioning the speaker as a character distinct from Longfellow.
What is Maschkemen?
Maschkemen comes from a Talmudic legend about Solomon, referring to the foreign kingdom where he becomes a servant after being exiled by Aschmedai. Longfellow uses this name straight from the source, adding an authentic folkloric feel to the poem.
Why does the speaker say 'On whom be peace!' about Solomon?
'On whom be peace' (or 'peace be upon him') is a traditional honorific found in both Jewish and Islamic cultures, used when mentioning a revered prophet or holy figure. Longfellow incorporates it to indicate that the speaker is rooted in that religious tradition, adding a solemn, liturgical rhythm that stands in stark contrast to the raw pain expressed at the poem's conclusion.
Is this poem typical of Longfellow's work?
Not quite. Longfellow is primarily recognized for his lengthy narrative poems such as Evangeline and The Song of Hiawatha, along with his sentimental lyric pieces. This particular work is shorter, more unusual, and carries a greater dramatic intensity than his well-known pieces. It reveals a side of Longfellow that was genuinely interested in non-Christian religious traditions and open to exploring a distinctly different voice.
What is a dramatic monologue?
A dramatic monologue is a poem crafted as a speech by a single character, who isn't the poet. The reader eavesdrops on the character's words — typically directed at someone who remains silent — and uncovers the character's situation through their speech. While Robert Browning popularized this form, Longfellow also employed it. In this poem, the demoniac addresses Aschmedai directly, allowing us to understand his suffering through this one-sided dialogue.
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "The Demoniac." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/the-demoniac-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). The demoniac. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/the-demoniac-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
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