The Annotated Edition
The Broken Tryst by James Russell Lowell
A speaker strolls alone through a spot they once enjoyed with a lover, and the autumn landscape keeps highlighting that person's absence.
- Core theme
- Love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Walking alone where we walked together, / When June was breezy and blue,
Editor's note
The speaker goes back to a place rich with shared memories. June — warm, breezy, and blue — symbolizes the peak of the relationship, a time when everything felt effortless and vibrant. The difference between that past June and the current solitary walk is clear from the outset, and the word "alone" hits hard right at the beginning.
If a dead leaf startle behind me, / I think 'tis your garment's hem,
Editor's note
Grief can distort perception. Every rustle has the speaker turning around, half-hoping to catch a glimpse of the lost lover. The "dead leaf" serves as a quietly haunting image — what the speaker believes to be a living presence is, in fact, something dried up and falling. The second stanza ends with a longing to be swept away with the leaves and vanish beyond the grasp of memory altogether.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- June
- Captures the height of the relationship—warmth, vitality, and happiness that are now just memories.
- Falling leaves
- A double symbol: they reflect the lover's inconsistency (drifting away without loyalty) and represent loss, decay, and the broader passage of time.
- The dead leaf rustling behind the speaker
- Captures how grief alters perception — the mind continually seeks a presence that has vanished, discovering only something devoid of life in its stead.
- Gray autumnal weather
- The season reflects the speaker's inner feelings: the color, the chill, and the fading year all relate to a sense of emotional emptiness.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- alternating anapestic tetrameter and trimeter
- Rhyme
- ABAB CDCD
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem about?
A person returns to a location they once enjoyed with a lover who has since departed. The autumn backdrop—leaves falling, overcast skies—amplifies the sting of that loss, and by the end, the speaker wishes they could vanish completely instead of enduring the weight of those memories.
What does "inconstant" mean in the poem?
Inconstant refers to being fickle or unfaithful — lacking the ability to remain fixed or loyal. Lowell uses this term to liken the fallen leaves, which float wherever the wind blows, to a lover who departed the relationship with similar carelessness.
What is a "broken tryst"?
A tryst refers to a secret or private meeting between lovers. A broken tryst signifies a promise to meet that was not fulfilled. The title sets the tone for the entire poem: the speaker finds themselves in a location where they anticipated being with someone, but that person either did not arrive — or, more generally, did not remain.
Is the speaker suicidal at the end?
The final wish—to "whirl away" with the leaves to a place where "no memory could find me"—feels more like a desire for emotional relief than a straightforward wish for death. The speaker seeks an escape from grief, not outright death. However, the imagery is dark enough for readers to interpret it in both ways, and Lowell leaves room for either interpretation.
What is the rhyme scheme?
The poem uses an ABAB rhyme scheme in each stanza: together / blue / weather / you and behind me / hem / find me / them. This back-and-forth rhyme creates a soft, melodic flow that stands in stark contrast to the serious themes explored in the poem.
Why does Lowell set the poem in autumn?
Autumn is the season of change and release — leaves drift down, colors fade from the landscape, and the year approaches its conclusion. It sets the ideal scene for a poem about loss and abandonment. This stark transformation also highlights the warmth of last June, emphasizing just how much has shifted since then.
Who is the poem addressed to?
The poem speaks to the absent lover — note the phrases "as you" and "your garment's hem." The speaker directly addresses someone who isn’t there, a common lyrical technique that amplifies the sense of absence.
Citation
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MLA
Lowell, James Russell. "The Broken Tryst." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/the-broken-tryst-james-russell-lowell/.
APA
Lowell, J. R. (n.d.). The broken tryst. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/the-broken-tryst-james-russell-lowell/
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