The Annotated Edition
SONG. by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This scene is from Longfellow's verse drama *The Spanish Student*, rather than being a separate lyric poem.
- Themes
- dreams, fear, love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Good night! Good night, beloved! / I come to watch o'er thee!
Editor's note
The opening serenade is gentle and traditional — the singer promises that just being close to his beloved is sufficient. The repeated "Good night" feels like a lullaby, creating a false sense of security that the rest of the scene will ultimately disrupt.
Thine eyes are stars of morning, / Thy lips are crimson flowers!
Editor's note
Classic Petrarchan flattery: eyes like stars, lips like flowers. Longfellow intentionally employs familiar romantic imagery to convey that this love is public and performative — the type celebrated loudly on the streets for all to hear, rather than a private emotion.
Ah! thou moon that shinest / Argent-clear above!
Editor's note
A second serenade, sung more intimately, calls upon the moon to protect the singer's beloved. The moon is asked to keep watch throughout the night—ironic, considering that the true threat to Preciosa lurks beneath the cover of that very moonlit night.
The nuns in the cloister / Sang to each other;
Editor's note
This third, fading song is both bawdy and comic—nuns yearning for a brother, a cat snatching a partridge. It intentionally disrupts the romantic mood. Bartolome grabs onto it as a joke and chases after it, conveniently clearing the street for Lara to make his move.
The gate is fast. Over the wall, Francisco, / And draw the bolt.
Editor's note
Lara's instructions are direct and to the point—a stark contrast to the poetic songs. He isn't here to serenade; he's here to intrude. The stage directions and brief commands create a sense of urgency and hint that something violent is on the way.
She sleeps at last! / (Opens the window, and listens.)
Editor's note
Dolores feels a wave of relief as Preciosa finally drifts off to sleep, but that moment is quickly shattered when she opens the window — inviting the outside world in. This creates a tense atmosphere where danger can creep in while the heroine is at her most vulnerable.
I must go hence! / Give me my cloak!
Editor's note
Preciosa's sleep-talk exposes her anxiety, even when she's not awake. She mentions illness, fever, and her struggle to dance — her body and mind are instinctively reacting to a danger she hasn't recognized yet. The fever on her cheek and the hissing lamps indicate a mind that feels under attack.
They glare upon me like an evil eye. / I cannot stay. Hark! how they mock at me!
Editor's note
The dream intensifies into paranoia: lamps turn into sinister eyes, and sounds morph into serpents. Here, Longfellow captures Preciosa's subconscious sensing real danger lurking close by. When she wakes and inquires about the time, the simple question — "How late is it, Dolores?" — snaps her back to reality.
Voice. Muera! / Another Voice. O villains! villains!
Editor's note
The scene ends abruptly with violence. "Muera" means "Die!" in Spanish — chaos erupts in the garden as Lara gets hurt. Dolores slams the window shut and calls out to the Virgin Mary. The romantic songs that began the scene have twisted into a street brawl.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The moon
- Called on in the second serenade to protect the beloved, the moon symbolizes romantic idealism and a false sense of safety. It illuminates the scene beautifully but does nothing to stop the violence happening below.
- The garden gate
- The locked gate represents a divide between the public and private, safety and danger. Lara pushes it open while Cruzado and Bartolome scale it. Each breach of the gate signals an increased threat to Preciosa.
- The lamps / evil eye
- In Preciosa's dream, ordinary lamps turn into bright, menacing eyes and hissing snakes. They reflect her deep-down sense of being observed and pursued — her sleeping mind understands what her waking mind hasn’t grasped yet.
- The serenades
- The three songs transition from heartfelt devotion to protective love under the moonlight, and then to raucous comedy. Collectively, they showcase the wide range of how men express love in public, highlighting how disconnected that display often is from the woman's real safety.
- The balcony and window
- Classic thresholds in romantic drama. Lara attempts to climb the balcony from outside, while Dolores opens the window from within. Both actions break the barrier that protects Preciosa in her room.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
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