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Sirion by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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This powerful short poem captures the spirit of a defiant Jewish martyr who stands firm against a tyrannical king.

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Courage
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Sirion

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Whom wait ye for? Never will I obey the King's commandment, But the commandment of the ancient Law, That was by Moses given unto our fathers. And thou, O godless man, that of all others Art the most wicked, be not lifted up, Nor puffed up with uncertain hopes, uplifting Thy hand against the servants of the Lord, For thou hast not escaped the righteous judgment Of the Almighty God, who seeth all things!

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

This powerful short poem captures the spirit of a defiant Jewish martyr who stands firm against a tyrannical king. Instead of yielding, the martyr chooses to remain loyal to the ancient Law of Moses rather than obeying any earthly command. The speaker delivers a bold warning to the wicked ruler that no one can evade God's judgment, who observes all. It feels like one passionate speech — courageous, just, and utterly unafraid of death.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. Whom wait ye for? / Never will I obey the King's commandment,

    Editor's note

    The poem starts in the middle of a scene where the speaker faces pressure to obey a royal command but boldly refuses. The opening question, "Whom wait ye for?" conveys both impatience and disdain; the speaker is neither hesitating nor bargaining. This clear refusal establishes a defiant tone for everything that follows.

  2. But the commandment of the ancient Law, / That was by Moses given unto our fathers.

    Editor's note

    Here, the speaker identifies the sole authority they acknowledge: the Mosaic Law, a covenant handed down through the ages. By mentioning Moses and "our fathers," the speaker connects their defiance to a shared identity and revered tradition instead of mere personal obstinacy. This isn't a rebellion for the sake of rebellion — it reflects a commitment to something much older and greater than any king.

  3. And thou, O godless man, that of all others / Art the most wicked, be not lifted up,

    Editor's note

    The speaker now confronts the tyrant directly. The phrase "O godless man" removes any dignity and legitimacy from the king. The warning "be not lifted up" reflects biblical themes about pride coming before a downfall. The speaker isn't begging — they're delivering a judgment on the ruler's character.

  4. Nor puffed up with uncertain hopes, uplifting / Thy hand against the servants of the Lord,

    Editor's note

    The phrase "uncertain hopes" hits hard: whatever the king thinks he will achieve by persecuting the faithful rests on shaky ground. Attacking "the servants of the Lord" is portrayed as a fundamental error in judgment, not merely a moral failing. The speaker presents the martyrs as shielded by a force that the king simply cannot grasp.

  5. For thou hast not escaped the righteous judgment / Of the Almighty God, who seeth all things!

    Editor's note

    The poem ends with a thunderous sense of certainty. The tyrant has not eluded divine judgment — not "will not" but "hast not," suggesting that the verdict is already set in stone. The concluding image of God who "seeth all things" counters the king's earthly power with an omniscient, unavoidable witness. The exclamation mark strikes down like a gavel.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone is fierce and steady from start to finish. There's no hesitation, no bargaining, no sadness — just the clear resolve of someone who has chosen what matters more than their own life. It has the rhythm of biblical prophecy: assertive, heavy with meaning, and directed straight at those in power. The speaker isn’t angry in a heated, emotional sense, but in the measured, just way of someone delivering a judgment they feel is inspired by a higher authority.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

The King's commandment
Represents corrupt earthly authority — law created by human power instead of divine will. It’s what the speaker rejects, and its contrast with the "ancient Law" serves as the moral backbone of the poem.
The ancient Law / commandment of Moses
Represents sacred tradition, shared identity, and a promise that goes beyond any single ruler or political era. Following it is the speaker's way of expressing both faith and resistance.
Being "lifted up" or "puffed up"
A biblical symbol of dangerous pride. The recurring image of the tyrant filled with self-importance foreshadows the inevitable downfall that divine judgment will bring.
God who seeth all things
The all-seeing eye of divine justice acts as the final check against the king's earthly power and surveillance. Nothing escapes its gaze; no act of cruelty is left unrecorded.

§06Form & structure

Form & structure

Meter
free verse

§07Historical context

Historical context

Longfellow based this poem on the deuterocanonical Book of 2 Maccabees, which tells the story of the persecution of Jews by the Seleucid king Antiochus IV Epiphanes in the 2nd century BCE. Antiochus banned Jewish religious practices and forced Jews to eat pork, threatening death for those who refused to abandon the Mosaic Law. The martyrs in 2 Maccabees — notably the seven brothers and their mother — are celebrated as examples of faithfulness unto death. Writing in 19th-century America, Longfellow was inspired by the moral strength of these narratives. The poem reads like a verse translation or dramatic monologue directly taken from scripture, reflecting his enduring passion for translating and adapting ancient and medieval religious texts into accessible English verse.

§08FAQ

Questions readers ask

Who is the speaker in this poem?

The speaker is a Jewish martyr from the Book of 2 Maccabees, probably one of the seven brothers who were tortured and executed for refusing to violate the Mosaic Law as ordered by Antiochus IV Epiphanes. Longfellow crafts a single, defiant speech for this unnamed character.

Who is "the King" the speaker is defying?

The king in question is Antiochus IV Epiphanes, the Seleucid Greek ruler who governed Judea during the 2nd century BCE and attempted to make the Jews give up their religious laws. He stands out as one of the most infamous villains in Jewish history and is characterized in 2 Maccabees as a ruthless persecutor.

What does the title "Sirion" mean?

Sirion is an old name for Mount Hermon, the prominent mountain located on the border of present-day Lebanon and Syria. It is mentioned in the Hebrew Bible (Deuteronomy 3:9) as the name the Phoenicians used for this peak. Longfellow employs it as a title that conjures images of the ancient Near Eastern world from which the story originates, even though the mountain itself isn't referenced in the poem.

Is this poem based on a real historical event?

Yes. It directly references 2 Maccabees, a text found in the Catholic and Orthodox biblical canon, which is considered deuterocanonical. The account of the seven brothers who were martyred instead of eating pork is one of the most well-known stories in that book. Historians view Antiochus's persecution as a significant historical event that occurred around 167–164 BCE.

Why does the speaker say the tyrant "hast not escaped" judgment rather than "will not escape"?

The past tense is intentional and impactful. It implies that, according to divine justice, the verdict is set — the tyrant's guilt is noted even if the punishment is still pending. This rhetorical choice removes any lingering hope from the king and firmly categorizes him as one who is condemned.

What is the poem's form — is it a sonnet, a ballad, something else?

It's a free-verse dramatic monologue without a set rhyme scheme or meter, but it carries a strong rhythmic pulse reminiscent of biblical prose poetry. Longfellow crafted it to resemble elevated speech rather than a song, which fits the serious nature of the topic.

What does "servants of the Lord" mean in this context?

It refers to the Jewish martyrs and faithful facing persecution. By calling them "servants of the Lord," the speaker emphasizes their identity in relation to God instead of any earthly nation or king. This also implies that harming them is equivalent to attacking God, which explains the certainty of the divine judgment that follows.

Why would Longfellow write a poem about an ancient Jewish martyr?

Longfellow was genuinely fascinated by religious literature from various cultures. He translated Dante, explored Native American mythology in The Song of Hiawatha, and took a thoughtful approach to Jewish history and scripture. During his lifetime, he witnessed heated American discussions about religious liberty and the balance between personal conscience and state authority, making tales of martyrdom for one’s beliefs resonate more deeply.

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MLA

Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Sirion." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/sirion-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.

APA

Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Sirion. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/sirion-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/

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In 'Sirion,' Longfellow constructs a speaker whose defiance is inseparable from divine authority: by grounding every refusal in 'the commandment of the ancient Law,' the poem argues that true courage is not self-generated but borrowed from …

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