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SIRION. by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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This powerful short poem captures the spirit of a defiant Jewish martyr who stands firm against a tyrannical king.

Poet
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Themes
courage, faith, identity
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SIRION.

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Whom wait ye for? Never will I obey the King's commandment, But the commandment of the ancient Law, That was by Moses given unto our fathers. And thou, O godless man, that of all others Art the most wicked, be not lifted up, Nor puffed up with uncertain hopes, uplifting Thy hand against the servants of the Lord, For thou hast not escaped the righteous judgment Of the Almighty God, who seeth all things!

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

This powerful short poem captures the spirit of a defiant Jewish martyr who stands firm against a tyrannical king. Instead of yielding, the martyr chooses to remain loyal to the ancient Law of Moses rather than obeying any earthly command. The speaker delivers a bold warning to the wicked ruler that no one can evade God's judgment, who observes all. It feels like one passionate speech — courageous, just, and utterly unafraid of death.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. Whom wait ye for? / Never will I obey the King's commandment,

    Editor's note

    The poem starts in the middle of a scene where the speaker faces pressure to obey a royal command but boldly refuses. The opening question, "Whom wait ye for?" conveys both impatience and disdain; the speaker is neither hesitating nor bargaining. This clear refusal establishes a defiant tone for everything that follows.

  2. But the commandment of the ancient Law, / That was by Moses given unto our fathers.

    Editor's note

    Here, the speaker identifies the sole authority they acknowledge: the Mosaic Law, a covenant handed down through the ages. By mentioning Moses and "our fathers," the speaker connects their defiance to a shared identity and revered tradition instead of mere personal obstinacy. This isn't a rebellion for the sake of rebellion — it reflects a commitment to something much older and greater than any king.

  3. And thou, O godless man, that of all others / Art the most wicked, be not lifted up,

    Editor's note

    The speaker now confronts the tyrant directly. The phrase "O godless man" removes any dignity and legitimacy from the king. The warning "be not lifted up" reflects biblical themes about pride coming before a downfall. The speaker isn't begging — they're delivering a judgment on the ruler's character.

  4. Nor puffed up with uncertain hopes, uplifting / Thy hand against the servants of the Lord,

    Editor's note

    The phrase "uncertain hopes" hits hard: whatever the king thinks he will achieve by persecuting the faithful rests on shaky ground. Attacking "the servants of the Lord" is portrayed as a fundamental error in judgment, not merely a moral failing. The speaker presents the martyrs as shielded by a force that the king simply cannot grasp.

  5. For thou hast not escaped the righteous judgment / Of the Almighty God, who seeth all things!

    Editor's note

    The poem ends with a thunderous sense of certainty. The tyrant has not eluded divine judgment — not "will not" but "hast not," suggesting that the verdict is already set in stone. The concluding image of God who "seeth all things" counters the king's earthly power with an omniscient, unavoidable witness. The exclamation mark strikes down like a gavel.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone is fierce and steady from start to finish. There's no hesitation, no bargaining, no sadness — just the clear resolve of someone who has chosen what matters more than their own life. It has the rhythm of biblical prophecy: assertive, heavy with meaning, and directed straight at those in power. The speaker isn’t angry in a heated, emotional sense, but in the measured, just way of someone delivering a judgment they feel is inspired by a higher authority.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

The King's commandment
Represents corrupt earthly authority — law created by human power instead of divine will. It’s what the speaker rejects, and its contrast with the "ancient Law" serves as the moral backbone of the poem.
The ancient Law / commandment of Moses
Represents sacred tradition, shared identity, and a promise that goes beyond any single ruler or political era. Following it is the speaker's way of expressing both faith and resistance.
Being "lifted up" or "puffed up"
A biblical symbol of dangerous pride. The recurring image of the tyrant filled with self-importance foreshadows the inevitable downfall that divine judgment will bring.
God who seeth all things
The all-seeing eye of divine justice acts as the final check against the king's earthly power and surveillance. Nothing escapes its gaze; no act of cruelty is left unrecorded.

§06Historical context

Historical context

Longfellow based this poem on the deuterocanonical Book of 2 Maccabees, which tells the story of the persecution of Jews by the Seleucid king Antiochus IV Epiphanes in the 2nd century BCE. Antiochus banned Jewish religious practices and forced Jews to eat pork, threatening death for those who refused to abandon the Mosaic Law. The martyrs in 2 Maccabees — notably the seven brothers and their mother — are celebrated as examples of faithfulness unto death. Writing in 19th-century America, Longfellow was inspired by the moral strength of these narratives. The poem reads like a verse translation or dramatic monologue directly taken from scripture, reflecting his enduring passion for translating and adapting ancient and medieval religious texts into accessible English verse.

§07FAQ

Questions readers ask

The speaker is a Jewish martyr from the Book of 2 Maccabees, probably one of the seven brothers who were tortured and executed for refusing to violate the Mosaic Law as ordered by Antiochus IV Epiphanes. Longfellow crafts a single, defiant speech for this unnamed character.

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