The Annotated Edition
PURSUIT by H. D.
A speaker traces the path left by a fleeing figure through the forest — crushed hyacinths, broken roots, a dragged limb — assembling the chase like a detective piecing together clues.
- Poet
- H. D.
- Era
- Modernist (1916)
- Themes
- fear, identity, love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
What do I care / that the stream is trampled,
Editor's note
The speaker begins mid-thought, almost with a sense of indifference — *what do I care* — yet the effort to note every detail shows just how much they actually care. The trampled stream and the deep heel-print in the sand reveal the speaker as a tracker, interpreting the landscape like a written text. The depth of the heel-cut indicates that the person being pursued was moving quickly, their weight shifted forward.
But here / a wild-hyacinth stalk is snapped:
Editor's note
The phrase 'but here' serves as a pivot — the speaker shifts from one thought to another. The broken hyacinth acts as both a physical hint and a powerful image: it evokes the Greek myth of Hyacinthus, a handsome young man who met an untimely death. The half-ripe purple buds that are crushed underfoot add a bruised, sensual quality to the stanza.
A patch of flowering grass, / low, trailing--
Editor's note
The speaker's focus sharpens to an almost microscopic level: grass stems turn yellow-green where they were lifted, a dead leaf-spine lies split in two. This level of detail reveals an obsession. The pursued figure barely brushed against these objects, yet the speaker interprets every disturbance as if it were a word in a sentence.
You were swift, swift! / here the forest ledge slopes--
Editor's note
The exclamation mark signals the first hint of emotion breaking through the calm tracking voice. The repeated use of 'swift' suggests admiration or awe. The image of a root snapping under the other person's weight indicates they snatched it up in a moment of panic — they were running fast, likely frightened.
I can almost follow the note / where it touched this slender tree
Editor's note
This is the poem's most enigmatic moment. The speaker says they can 'almost follow' a sound — a note — that travels from tree to tree. The tracker has shifted from observing physical signs to sensing vibrations and resonance. The chase has transitioned from the tangible into something akin to music or magic.
And you climbed yet further! / you stopped by the dwarf-cornel--
Editor's note
Another exclamation, another surge of intensity. The pursued figure doubles back on their own track—a classic evasion move. The speaker interprets this with complete clarity: 'this is clear.' The tracker’s confidence remains unwavering, even as the quarry attempts to mislead them.
This is clear-- / you fell on the downward slope,
Editor's note
The pursued individual has stumbled, injured their thigh, and is now limping while gripping a larch for support. The speaker describes this injury with unsettling intimacy. It feels awkward — the tracker understands the other person's body, its weight and pain, without having witnessed it firsthand.
Did your head, bent back, / search further--
Editor's note
The poem introduces questions for the first time. The speaker envisions the pursued individual gazing up through the larch branches—either searching for a way out or seeking divine assistance. The tracker's confidence begins to blend into uncertainty, creating an emotional pivot in the poem.
Did you clutch, / stammer with short breath and gasp:
Editor's note
The speaker envisions the other person praying to wood-daemons — ancient spirits of the forest — pleading for life and a way out. The italicized prayer (*wood-daemons grant life*) is the sole voice besides the speaker's throughout the poem, and it's imagined rather than heard. This element immerses the poem in a mythic, pre-Christian setting.
For some wood-daemon / has lightened your steps.
Editor's note
The speaker admits defeat. The trail has gone cold—there’s no sign among the larch cones and underbrush. Instead of accepting a straightforward failure, the speaker believes that a wood-daemon answered their prayer, causing the disappearance. The ending leaves us wondering—does the speaker feel relieved, lost, or simply in awe? H.D. leaves that unanswered.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The heel-print
- The deep cut of the heel in the sand is the poem's first and most enduring image. A heel-print is personal—it captures the precise weight and speed of a body—and the speaker examines it with a focus that transcends mere observation. It represents the mark a person leaves on the world and reflects the speaker's desire to bridge the space between that mark and actual presence.
- The wild-hyacinth
- In Greek mythology, Hyacinthus was a striking young man adored by Apollo, who died accidentally, and his blood transformed into the hyacinth flower. H.D. had a deep connection to classical mythology, and the broken, half-ripened hyacinth stalk here resonates with the idea of beauty interrupted, evoking a pursued figure who might not make it through the chase.
- The larch
- The larch shows up twice: first, as a support for the person running away after they fall, and later as the final spot where the speaker can detect any sign of life. It represents the line between what can be tracked and the supernatural realm. Beyond the larch, the wood-daemons reign.
- Wood-daemons
- Ancient Greek forest spirits exist in a gray area between good and evil. Their appearance at the end transforms the entire poem: what initially seems like a realistic chase through the woods becomes a mythic pursuit where divine forces might step in. The daemons respond to the prayer and erase the trail, providing the person being chased with a form of sanctuary.
- The snapped root
- The root that snaps under the fleeing person's weight reveals a moment of vulnerability — they were moving so quickly that they reached for it and it gave way. This moment shows the speaker, and us, that the pursued figure isn’t invincible. It also signifies where the chase turns into a physically intense and perilous situation.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
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