The Annotated Edition
Mystery by D. H. Lawrence
A speaker fully surrenders to a divine or cherished figure, using the metaphor of a ritual bowl filled with kisses to illustrate this complete devotion.
- Poet
- D. H. Lawrence
- Core theme
- Beauty
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Now I am all / One bowl of kisses,
Editor's note
The speaker begins with a shocking self-perception: they see themselves as merely a vessel for desire. The word *now* marks a moment of total change — their entire identity has merged into one singular offering. The "bowl" introduces the ritual, evoking temple imagery that permeates the entire poem.
I lift to you / My bowl of kisses,
Editor's note
The speaker presents this offering much like a priest lifts a chalice at an altar. The focus shifts to *you* — a cherished or divine presence — turning the poem into a direct prayer. The temple's "blue recesses" create a cool, sacred atmosphere that stands in stark contrast to the heat of the desire being described.
And to my lips' / Bright crimson rim
Editor's note
Here, the bowl and the speaker's body begin to blend together. The "crimson rim" represents both the edge of a vessel and the speaker's lips. Passion "slips" and "drips" down the body like liquid, and Lawrence describes it as a "shining hymn" — transforming physical sensation into a form of worship.
And still before / The altar I
Editor's note
The speaker stands at the altar, filled with yearning and calling out for the divine figure to come down and accept the offering. Referring to the beloved as "Most High" establishes a sincere religious tone—this is truly a prayer, not merely a decorative metaphor.
Oh drink me up / That I may be
Editor's note
The speaker longs to be completely consumed, to dissolve within the beloved like wine filling a cup. The phrase "like a mystery" holds a spiritual meaning — it's a sacred ritual, something that defies rational understanding. The speaker desires not a union of equals but a complete absorption into the beloved.
Glimmering still / In ecstasy,
Editor's note
The final stanza brings an end to the tension. The two separate wines — the speaker and the beloved — are now "commingled," blended into one. The mystery hinted at in the title is resolved: two distinct beings have merged into a single entity. The closing lines offer a calm moment, like a gentle breath after the urgency of what came before.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The bowl
- The central image of the poem symbolizes the speaker's entire being presented as a vessel of desire and devotion. It also reflects the chalice used in religious communion, linking physical intimacy to sacred ritual.
- Wine / kisses
- The two are seen as essentially the same. Wine has significant Eucharistic importance—the notion that something as simple as a drink or a kiss can transform into a means for a transcendent, even divine, experience.
- The altar / temple
- Lawrence situates the erotic encounter within a sacred space, drawing inspiration from ancient Egyptian temple worship. This isn’t ironic; he truly views physical union as a religious act, a theme that appears consistently throughout his work.
- The votaresses of Egypt
- Female temple servants performed ritual offerings to the gods. By invoking them, Lawrence connects the speaker's desire to an ancient, pre-Christian tradition where the body and the sacred coexisted harmoniously.
- Commingled wines
- The image of two wines mixing in one cup represents the full merging of two identities. It captures the poem's main desire: not just connection, but the complete erasure of the line between self and other.
§06Form & structure
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§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem actually about?
On the surface, it depicts a speaker presenting themselves to a beloved through the metaphor of a ritual bowl filled with kisses. However, Lawrence is aiming for something deeper: he suggests that erotic love and religious devotion stem from the same impulse. The speaker is not merely comparing desire to worship — they are treating them as one and the same.
Who is the "you" the speaker is addressing?
Lawrence intentionally keeps this ambiguous. The title "Most High" gives the figure a divine quality, and the temple backdrop adds to that impression. However, the poem can also be interpreted as one person talking to another they deeply care for, with an almost spiritual fervor. It's likely that Lawrence intended for both interpretations to coexist simultaneously.
Why does Lawrence bring in ancient Egypt?
Egyptian religion, according to Lawrence, connected the body and the sacred in a way that Christianity did not. The "votaresses," or female temple servants, offered physical gifts to the gods as a true expression of worship. By mentioning them, Lawrence suggests that this type of desire is not only ancient and honorable but also sacred rather than shameful.
What does "mystery" mean in the title and the last stanza?
Lawrence employs the term in its traditional religious context: a sacred rite or truth that defies complete rational explanation and can only be truly understood through experience. The "mystery" resolved at the conclusion represents the union of two distinct beings into one — a phenomenon present in both spiritual communion and physical intimacy.
Is this poem religious or erotic?
Lawrence's main argument is that the question itself is flawed. He thought the division between the sacred and the physical is a contemporary error. The poem embodies both aspects simultaneously, and the unease some readers experience is precisely what Lawrence aimed to evoke.
What is the effect of the short, clipped lines?
The tight two- and three-stress lines lend the poem a chant-like, incantatory feel—it feels more like a ritual being performed than merely a feeling being expressed. This brevity also adds a breathless quality that matches the intensity of the speaker's longing.
What does "commingled wines" mean at the end?
It means that the two individuals (or the person and the divine) have merged entirely, similar to how two wines poured into the same cup become one. This is the culmination the entire poem has been leading to: not merely intimacy, but the complete erasure of the line between self and other.
How does this poem connect to Lawrence's other work?
The same themes appear throughout his novels. In The Rainbow and Women in Love, characters pursue a transcendent physical connection. Lawrence often claimed that modern individuals were deprived of this — disconnected from their own bodies due to industrialization and strict religious beliefs. "Mystery" presents a concise, lyrical take on that argument.
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MLA
Lawrence, D. H. "Mystery." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/mystery-d-h-lawrence/.
APA
Lawrence, D. H. (n.d.). Mystery. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/mystery-d-h-lawrence/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Mystery,' D. H. Lawrence transforms religious devotion into an erotic liturgy, arguing through his speaker's sustained ritual of offering that physical union and sacred transcendence are not opposites but the same ecstatic act: the body …
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- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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