The Annotated Edition
My Dear Sir,-- by James Russell Lowell
This is the prefatory letter from Hosea Biglow, the fictional Yankee farmer-poet at the center of James Russell Lowell's *Biglow Papers*, written in a hearty New England dialect.
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§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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(an' noticin' by your kiver thet you're some dearer than wut you wuz, I enclose the deffrence)
Editor's note
Hosea starts by mentioning that the magazine's cover price has increased and happily includes the extra payment — a lighthearted detail that quickly portrays him as a straightforward, honest, frugal New England farmer. The dialect spelling ('kiver' for 'cover', 'deffrence' for 'difference') immediately indicates that we're hearing an authentic voice, not a crafted literary one.
I dunno ez I know Jest how to interdoose this las' perduction of my mews
Editor's note
'Mews' here is Hosea's twisted take on 'Muse' — the classical goddess of poetic inspiration. The humor lies in his use of a lofty literary idea while acting as if he hardly understands it. He declares this will be his last submission, and he genuinely means it, unless something truly urgent compels him to change his mind.
Sence Mr. Wilbur's disease I hevn't hed no one thet could dror out my talons.
Editor's note
'Disease' is Hosea's way of spelling 'decease' — Parson Wilbur has passed away. This forms the emotional heart of the letter. Wilbur was the educated bridge who could draw out ('dror out') Hosea's poetic talents, depicted here with the striking image of talons — sharp, powerful things that require someone skilled to coax them into the open.
He ust to kind o' wine me up an' set the penderlum agoin' an' then somehow I seemed to go on tick as it wear tell I run down
Editor's note
Hosea likens himself to a clock that Wilbur would wind up and set ticking. Once it’s wound, it continues to run until it eventually winds down. This is a wonderfully straightforward mechanical metaphor for the creative process — inspiration comes from an external source, gets absorbed internally, and gradually fades away.
but the noo minister ain't of the same brewin' nor I can't seem to git ahold of no kine of huming nater in him but sort of slide rite off as you du on the eedge of a mow.
Editor's note
The new minister doesn’t have the warmth and personal touch that Wilbur did. Hosea tries to connect with him, but it’s like trying to hold onto the sloped edge of a haystack — he just slips away. The farm imagery is spot on: it turns the abstract idea of spiritual coldness into something tangible and urgent.
Minnysteeril natur is wal enough an' a site better'n most other kines I know on, but the other sort sech as Welbor hed wuz of the Lord's makin' an' naterally more wonderfle an' sweet tastin'
Editor's note
Hosea is careful not to insult ministers in general — he finds their professional clerical nature acceptable, even admirable. However, Wilbur possessed something much rarer: a God-given warmth that Hosea describes as 'sweet tastin''. This sensory word perfectly captures how nourishing that friendship felt to him.
He wuz as outspoken as a norwester _he_ wuz, but I tole him I hoped the fall wuz from so high up thet a feller could ketch a good many times fust afore comin' bunt onto the ground
Editor's note
Wilbur had openly expressed concern that the second series of Biglow Papers didn't measure up to the first — he was as straightforward as a nor'west wind about it. Hosea's reply is both generous and humorous: even if the quality dipped, it fell from such a high point that there was still plenty of space to land before reaching the bottom. It’s a loyal friend's way of saying, "you're still amazing."
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The wound-up clock
- Hosea portrays himself as a clock that Wilbur would wind up and set in motion. This image illustrates the nature of creative inspiration as a relational process — another person initiates the mechanism, and then the poet continues on his own until the energy depletes. Without Wilbur, no one is there to wind the clock.
- The Muse ('mews')
- Hosea's jumbled take on the classical Muse is both humorous and a sincere recognition that poetry originates from a place beyond the poet's complete control. By mispronouncing it, Lowell grounds this lofty literary idea, making it feel more authentic and relatable instead of snobbish.
- The edge of a mow (haystack)
- The sloped, slippery side of a haystack symbolizes the new minister's coldness — there's nothing to hold onto, no friction, no real connection. It's a vivid image from farm life that captures a deeper spiritual and emotional issue, showcasing exactly what Lowell's dialect poetry excels at.
- The nor'wester wind
- Wilbur's straightforward honesty is likened to a nor'west wind — cold, direct, and impossible to overlook. This comparison serves as a compliment disguised as a weather forecast, revealing that Hosea cherished unvarnished truth in his friend more than just about anything else.
- Talons
- Hosea notes that Wilbur could 'dror out his talons' — which means to unleash his sharp poetic talents. This phrase hints that Hosea's true voice is fierce and captivating, rather than soft, and it requires a skilled touch to reveal it without harm.
§06Form & structure
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§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the Biglow Papers and where does this letter fit in?
The Biglow Papers is a two-part satirical piece by Lowell featuring a fictional New England farmer named Hosea Biglow, who expresses his thoughts on American politics through dialect poetry. This letter serves as a preface from Hosea to the editor, in which he shares his reasons for submitting what he believes will be his last contribution.
Why is everything spelled so strangely?
Lowell is transcribing New England's rural dialect phonetically—reflecting how Hosea would actually pronounce the words. For instance, 'kiver' stands for 'cover', 'deffrence' for 'difference', and 'disease' for 'decease'. This approach is a conscious literary choice to present Hosea as a genuine person rather than an elegant poet, lending his opinions a sense of grassroots authenticity.
Who is Parson Wilbur and why does his death matter?
Within the fiction of the Biglow Papers, Parson Wilbur is the educated minister who edits and introduces Hosea's poems. He connects Hosea's raw dialect voice with the reading public. His death ends the creative partnership that made the project successful, which is why Hosea feels unable to continue without him.
What does Hosea mean when he says Wilbur could 'dror out his talons'?
He means Wilbur could tap into his sharpest, most potent poetic talents. 'Talons' evokes something fierce and gripping — it's not about gentle inspiration but about having a real fighting spirit. Wilbur had a knack for provoking and inspiring Hosea in a way that the new minister just can't match.
Is this a poem or a letter? Why is it written in prose?
It's a prose letter that acts as a preface to a poem. Lowell frequently included framing letters and editorial notes in the Biglow Papers to introduce the verse pieces. This letter is a literary performance in its own right — Hosea's voice is just as skillfully crafted here as it is in the poems.
What does the clock metaphor mean?
Hosea describes how Wilbur would 'wine him up' (wind him up) like a clock and get the pendulum swinging. After that, Hosea would keep going on his own until he eventually slowed down. This captures how their friendship sparked his creativity — Wilbur supplied the initial push, and Hosea kept it going. Without Wilbur, the clock just stops.
Why does Hosea say the new minister is like the edge of a haystack?
He’s saying there’s nothing to hold onto. The sloped edge of a haystack, or 'mow,' is smooth and angled — it’s hard to find your footing. The new minister has a polished clerical demeanor but lacks genuine warmth, so Hosea can’t connect with him like he did with Wilbur.
What was Wilbur's worry about the second series, and how does Hosea respond?
Wilbur candidly told Hosea that he felt the second series of the Biglow Papers didn't match the quality of the first. Hosea's reply is both loyal and humorous: he points out that even if the quality did dip, it dropped from such a high point that there was still ample space before it hit rock bottom. He’s standing up for his friend’s work while also admitting that the criticism could have some merit.
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MLA
Lowell, James Russell. "My Dear Sir,--." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/my-dear-sir-james-russell-lowell/.
APA
Lowell, J. R. (n.d.). My dear sir,--. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/my-dear-sir-james-russell-lowell/
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1 ptIn James Russell Lowell's epistolary monologue 'MY DEAR SIR,--,' the narrator's rambling, phonetically spelled vernacular serves as a carefully engineered argument about the irreplaceable nature of authentic human connection: Hosea Biglow's …
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