The Annotated Edition
Incident by Countee Cullen
A young Black child visits Baltimore, filled with excitement and joy.
- Poet
- Countee Cullen
- Core theme
- Childhood
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Once riding in old Baltimore, / Heart-filled, head-filled with glee,
Editor's note
The speaker arrives in Baltimore as a child, full of happiness and curiosity about the world. The phrase "heart-filled, head-filled with glee" emphasizes that joy — it fills both his feelings and his thoughts. The word "old" adds a sense of history and significance to Baltimore, subtly preparing us for the contrast that lies ahead.
Now I was eight and very small, / And he was no whit bigger,
Editor's note
Cullen takes a moment to emphasize how young and equal these two children truly are. "No whit bigger" indicates that the other boy isn't even slightly larger — they're equals in every physical aspect. This makes what happens next feel even more shocking: the hatred didn't arise from any sense of power or size; it emerged from a completely irrational place.
I saw the whole of Baltimore / From May until December;
Editor's note
Eight months can feel like an eternity, particularly for a child. The speaker likely experienced parks, markets, and the changing seasons. Yet Cullen doesn't mention any of that. The stretch from May to December—almost a full year—intensifies the emptiness of what comes next.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Baltimore
- Baltimore represents America — a city rich in promise and history, yet still presents racism to a Black child unexpectedly and without remorse.
- The smile
- The speaker's smile is a genuine expression of kindness. It shows the openness the child brought to the encounter, and the other boy's rejection of it makes the cruelty feel even more intentional.
- May until December
- The nearly full year embodies all the experiences, sights, and memories that racism has erased. It stands as a reminder of joy and childhood taken away.
- The tongue and the slur
- The act of poking out a tongue along with the racial slur reveals that this hatred is both immature and deeply ingrained — the other boy has clearly picked up on adult racism and used it as a weapon.
§06Historical context
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§07FAQ
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