The Annotated Edition
i. 239. by John Keats
This text consists of editorial footnotes from a scholarly edition of John Keats's narrative poem *The Eve of St.
- Poet
- John Keats
- Themes
- beauty, death, love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
l. 333. _unpruned_, not trimmed.
Editor's note
This note explains the word *unpruned* from line 333 of *The Eve of St. Agnes*. Keats uses it to depict something wild and untended. The editor just clarifies the literal meaning for readers who may not be familiar with this archaic term.
l. 343. _elfin-storm._ The beldame has suggested...
Editor's note
The note clarifies the term *elfin-storm* by linking it to the old woman, Angela, who has informed Porphyro that he must be the 'liege-lord of all the elves and fays.' This storm is depicted as magical, aligning with the fairy-tale mood that Keats creates throughout the poem.
l. 351. _o'er . . . moors._ A happy suggestion of a warmer clime.
Editor's note
The editor notes that Keats's depiction of the lovers escaping across the moors evokes warmth and a sense of freedom, standing in stark contrast to the cold, wintry castle they are departing. It suggests that a southern or Mediterranean liberation lies ahead for them.
l. 355. _darkling._ Cf. _King Lear_, I. iv. 237...
Editor's note
The editor traces the word *darkling* — which means 'in the dark' — back to Shakespeare's *King Lear* and also references Keats's own *Ode to a Nightingale* (line 51), where he uses the same term. This indicates that Keats is intentionally tapping into a literary tradition and even reflecting on his own work.
l. 360. _And . . . floor._ There is the very sound of the wind in this line.
Editor's note
The editor highlights the onomatopoeic quality of line 360—the sounds of the words mimic the noise of wind sweeping across a floor. This observation speaks to Keats's skill in creating rich sonic texture in his poetry.
ll. 375-8. _Angela . . . cold._ The death of these two leaves us...
Editor's note
This is the most substantial note. The deaths of Angela and the old Beadsman at the end of the poem serve as a clear structural contrast: the old, poor, and joyless pass away while the young, rich, and happy slip away into the night. The editor suggests that this ending heightens the poem's core tension between youth and age, warmth and cold, life and death.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Darkling
- Borrowed from Shakespeare and reinterpreted by Keats in *The Eve of St. Agnes* and *Ode to a Nightingale*, this word represents a condition of blindness or ignorance — navigating the world without light, both in a literal sense and emotionally.
- The elfin-storm
- The storm isn't merely weather; it's a mystical, enchanting force that feels like it belongs to elves and fairies. It shows that the lovers' escape exists beyond the ordinary world, in a place filled with dreams and legends.
- Angela and the Beadsman
- These two elderly figures, perishing in the cold, symbolize all that the lovers are trying to escape: age, poverty, joyless piety, and the inevitable approach of death. Their demise highlights the lovers' flight as a form of rebirth.
- The moors
- The moors the lovers traverse during their escape evoke a sense of wildness and freedom. However, the editor's comment that they imply 'a warmer clime' transforms them into a threshold — marking the divide between the cold, restrictive environment of the castle and a warmer, more liberated life waiting beyond.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
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