The Annotated Edition
HIAWATHA'S LAMENTATION by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
When Hiawatha's dear friend Chibiabos disregards warnings and is pulled under a frozen lake by malevolent spirits, Hiawatha is devastated by sorrow.
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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In those days the Evil Spirits, / All the Manitos of mischief,
Editor's note
Longfellow kicks things off by introducing the supernatural foes — the Manitos, mischievous spirits from Ojibwe folklore — who are envious of the connection between Hiawatha and Chibiabos. This jealousy fuels the entire narrative that unfolds. The rhythmic, chant-like quality (trochaic tetrameter, inspired by the Finnish *Kalevala*) gives the opening a drum-like feel, reminiscent of stories shared around a fire.
Hiawatha, wise and wary, / Often said to Chibiabos,
Editor's note
Hiawatha keeps cautioning his younger friend against going out alone. Chibiabos dismisses these warnings with a bright smile, saying, "Harm and evil come not near me!" This creates classic dramatic irony: the reader senses the looming danger while Chibiabos is carefree. His youthful recklessness sharply contrasts with Hiawatha's wisdom.
Once when Peboan, the Winter, / Roofed with ice the Big-Sea-Water,
Editor's note
Winter takes on a character in Ojibwe lore known as Peboan, transforming the landscape into a nearly alive snare. The lake, blanketed in ice, the whispering snowflakes, and the hushed ground — each element hints that nature is in on the impending event. Chibiabos ventures out to hunt by himself, dismissing all cautions, and the perilous ice gives way underfoot.
But beneath, the Evil Spirits / Lay in ambush, waiting for him,
Editor's note
The spirits don't just allow the ice to take its toll — they pull Chibiabos down and bury him in the sand. Unktahee, the Dakota water god, is identified as the force that drowns him in Lake Superior (Gitche Gumee). His death is brutal and intentional, which makes the ensuing grief feel fitting.
From the headlands Hiawatha / Sent forth such a wail of anguish,
Editor's note
Hiawatha's cry of grief is so intense that bison halt, wolves join in howling, and thunder reverberates in response. This moment marks the emotional height of the poem. Nature doesn't merely observe the sorrow; it takes part in it. Hiawatha then returns to his wigwam, paints his face black—a traditional mourning practice—and sits in mourning for seven weeks.
"He is dead, the sweet musician! / He the sweetest of all singers!
Editor's note
Hiawatha's lament identifies Chibiabos as a musician and singer, highlighting this as his defining trait in the larger *Song of Hiawatha*. The repetition of the lines — "He is dead, the sweet musician" — functions like a refrain in oral poetry, emphasizing the depth of the loss. Chibiabos moving "a little nearer to the Master of all music" suggests that death might be seen as a promotion, yet this notion feels empty in the face of profound grief.
And the melancholy fir-trees / Waved their dark green fans above him,
Editor's note
The fir trees, the little stream, the bluebird, the robin, and the whippoorwill all join in the lament. Each bird calls out Chibiabos's name. This is a clear example of pathetic fallacy—nature itself is mourning. Longfellow uses the Ojibwe names for the birds (Owaissa, Opechee, Wawonaissa) to ground the poem in its cultural origins.
Then the Medicine-men, the Medas, / The magicians, the Wabenos,
Editor's note
The community reacts to Hiawatha's sorrow through ritual. Medicine men, magicians, and prophets come together in a solemn procession, each holding pouches filled with healing roots. They construct a Sacred Lodge and start their ceremony. Hiawatha's response—removing his headdress, washing away the mourning paint, and silently following them—reveals the first sign of his readiness to heal.
There a magic drink they gave him, / Made of Nahma-wusk, the spearmint,
Editor's note
The healing ritual is depicted with vivid, concrete details: spearmint, yarrow, drums, rattles, and chanting. The songs of the medicine men are bold and commanding — "I myself, myself! behold me!" — reflecting the genuine style of Midewiwin (Grand Medicine Society) ceremonial speech. The chorus responses ("Hi-au-ha!" and "Way-ha-way!") create a call-and-response dynamic that truly captures the essence of a ceremonial atmosphere.
Then they shook their medicine-pouches / O'er the head of Hiawatha,
Editor's note
The ritual works. Hiawatha's grief lifts, much like clouds parting in the sky or ice thawing on a river — Longfellow employs both similes in rapid succession. The healing happens all at once, which might seem a bit too tidy, but it aligns with the poem's mythological style: in this realm, strong magic leads to genuine outcomes.
Then they summoned Chibiabos / From his grave beneath the waters,
Editor's note
The medicine-men call Chibiabos back from the dead, and he hears their summons and rises. However, he can't fully return to the living world — he can only reach the entrance of the wigwam. Through a crack, they hand him a glowing coal, and he becomes the ruler of the Land of Spirits, tasked with keeping the campfires lit for the dead as they journey to the afterlife. It feels like a consolation prize, yet it’s also a sacred responsibility.
From the village of his childhood, / From the homes of those who knew him,
Editor's note
Chibiabos's final departure is portrayed with remarkable subtlety — he moves like smoke, leaving no trace behind: branches remain still, grass stays upright, and dead leaves make no noise under his feet. He has become a complete ghost. His four-day journey through the land of the dead, passing by weary spirits grumbling about the heavy grave-goods sent by the living, feels both mythical and strangely down-to-earth.
Forth then issued Hiawatha, / Wandered eastward, wandered westward,
Editor's note
The poem concludes with Hiawatha turning his sorrow into a force for change. He journeys across the land, sharing knowledge about medicinal plants and healing practices. Instead of breaking Hiawatha, the loss of Chibiabos sparks the birth of medicine itself. Grief gains significance through acts of service — a subtle yet impactful ending.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The treacherous ice
- The frozen surface of Gitche Gumee appears solid, yet it gives way — symbolizing the false security of youth and overconfidence. Chibiabos's disregard for warnings is made evident in the ice that cannot support him.
- The mourning paint (black face)
- Hiawatha painting his face black and covering his head with his robe reflects real Ojibwe mourning rituals. In the poem, this act represents a complete withdrawal from the world — a grief so profound that it alters how you are perceived by others.
- The burning coal / fire-brand
- The coal handed to Chibiabos at the entrance of the wigwam symbolizes his new role as the keeper of campfires for the dead. Fire represents the connection between the living and the dead, as well as the comfort that the living seek to offer to those who have departed.
- The birds (bluebird, robin, whippoorwill)
- Each bird expresses its grief for Chibiabos in its unique voice and at its own time. They act as nature's chorus, affirming that this loss is genuine and resonates beyond the realm of humans. Additionally, they link the deceased to the continuous rhythms of the natural world.
- The Sacred Lodge and healing ritual
- The medicine-men's ceremony is the community's way of addressing individual grief. In this poem, no one heals in isolation — it requires shared rituals, collective wisdom, and human solidarity to bring Hiawatha back from his despair.
- The journey of the dead
- Chibiabos's four-day journey to the Islands of the Blessed, where he encounters spirits weighed down by war-clubs and kettles, represents a genuine Ojibwe belief regarding the afterlife. The spirits’ lament — "why do the living place such heavy burdens on us?" — softly challenges the living to reflect on their connection to death and the act of letting go.
§06Historical context
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