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BY EL COMMENDADOR ESCRIVA by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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A speaker so exhausted by life's pain that they genuinely *wish* for death — but here's the cruel twist: if they sense death approaching and experience that relief, it could spark a desire to live once more.

Poet
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Themes
death, despair, love
The PoemFull text

BY EL COMMENDADOR ESCRIVA

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Come, O Death, so silent flying That unheard thy coming be, Lest the sweet delight of dying Bring life back again to me. For thy sure approach perceiving, In my constancy and pain I new life should win again, Thinking that I am not living. So to me, unconscious lying, All unknown thy coming be, Lest the sweet delight of dying Bring life back again to me. Unto him who finds thee hateful, Death, thou art inhuman pain; But to me, who dying gain, Life is but a task ungrateful. Come, then, with my wish complying, All unheard thy coming be, Lest the sweet delight of dying Bring life back again to me. IV

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

A speaker so exhausted by life's pain that they genuinely *wish* for death — but here's the cruel twist: if they sense death approaching and experience that relief, it could spark a desire to live once more. So, they plead for death to come quietly and unexpectedly, catching them off guard before any flicker of hope can return.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. Come, O Death, so silent flying / That unheard thy coming be,

    Editor's note

    The speaker starts with a straightforward request to Death, asking it to come without making any noise or giving any warning. The description of Death as "flying" suggests a bird-like, quick presence—contrasting with the slow, grim reaper image that typically comes to mind. The call for silence creates a key paradox in the poem: the speaker *desires* death but fears that *being aware* of its approach will destroy that desire.

  2. Lest the sweet delight of dying / Bring life back again to me.

    Editor's note

    This poem's great irony is simple: the thought of dying feels so sweet, almost like relief, that just the *anticipation* of it can reignite a will to live. The speaker finds themselves trapped — the cure and the disease are one and the same. These two lines act as a refrain, coming back at the end of each stanza to emphasize this paradox.

  3. For thy sure approach perceiving, / In my constancy and pain

    Editor's note

    The speaker clarifies the rationale behind the request. "Constancy" refers to a steadfast endurance of suffering — they've endured pain for so long that even a fleeting thought of escape could reset their emotional state. Recognizing death's approach might, ironically, provide them with something to feel, and feeling anything is perilously close to being alive once more.

  4. Unto him who finds thee hateful, / Death, thou art inhuman pain;

    Editor's note

    The speaker recognizes that death scares most people — for someone who cherishes life, death feels harsh and merciless. However, the speaker turns this idea on its head: they are not like most people. For them, the real cruelty lies elsewhere. Life is the true punishment, not death. This stanza highlights a stark contrast between the speaker's perspective and the typical human dread of dying.

  5. Come, then, with my wish complying, / All unheard thy coming be,

    Editor's note

    The final stanza circles back to the opening plea, but this time it carries more significance — we grasp *why* the silence is important. "With my wish complying" portrays Death almost like a servant receiving detailed directions. The refrain wraps up the poem just as it began, creating a circular, confined sensation that reflects the speaker's emotional turmoil.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone feels tired and resigned, yet it avoids melodrama. The speaker isn't shouting or crying — they're calmly presenting a logical case to Death, much like someone making a sensible request. Beneath the formal and measured language lies a quiet desperation, and the repeated phrases lend the poem a ritualistic, incantatory quality — as if repeating the words frequently enough could truly invoke what is being sought.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

Silent / unheard death
Death's silence isn't merely a physical trait — it symbolizes the lack of hope. The speaker requires death to come *before* consciousness can acknowledge it, as consciousness is the true adversary. In this context, silence represents mercy.
The sweet delight of dying
This phrase highlights the poem's main paradox. Sweetness and delight typically evoke thoughts of pleasure and life, but in this case, they are linked to death. The speaker flips the usual values: death is seen as pleasure, while life is viewed as suffering.
New life / life back again
Life returning is seen as a threat rather than a gift. It reflects the harsh cycle of hope — how even a brief moment of relief can deceive a struggling person into wanting to carry on, only to confront the same pain once more.
The task ungrateful
Life described as an "ungrateful task" — work that gives nothing back — reflects a relationship with existence that feels entirely transactional and devoid of joy. The speaker no longer sees any meaning or reward in being alive.

§06Historical context

Historical context

This poem is Longfellow's translation of a Spanish Renaissance lyric by Juan Escrivá (El Comendador Escrivá), a 15th-century poet and courtier from Valencia. Longfellow, who taught modern languages at Harvard, was one of the most active translators of European poetry in 19th-century America. His 1845 anthology *The Poets and Poetry of Europe* introduced many lesser-known Continental voices to English-speaking audiences, including this poem. The original Spanish *cancionero* tradition—formal courtly verse focused on themes of love, suffering, and death—provides the foundation for this lyric. While the idea of welcoming death as a release from lovesick anguish is a common theme in that tradition, Escrivá's version is notable for the clarity of its central paradox. Longfellow's translation maintains the refrain structure and the poem's concise, almost syllogistic reasoning.

§07FAQ

Questions readers ask

A speaker overwhelmed by suffering — probably due to unrequited or lost love, reminiscent of Spanish courtly poetry — longs for death. However, there's a twist: they're afraid that just the *thought* of death will feel so comforting that it will spark a desire to live once more, leading them to plead for death to arrive unexpectedly.

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