The Annotated Edition
By Clement Marot by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This poem delivers a biting and humorous critique of a corrupt friar named Lubin, who excels at all the wrong pursuits—like theft, seduction, and hypocrisy—while being utterly inept at anything virtuous.
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
To gallop off to town post-haste, / So oft, the times I cannot tell;
Editor's note
The poem begins by energetically listing Friar Lubin's vices. He zips into town repeatedly, engages in disgraceful behavior without a hint of remorse, and the speaker portrays this as his true talent. The punchline — "Friar Lubin will do it well" — establishes the ironic framework that the entire poem relies on: celebrating misdeeds, followed by an inability to act correctly.
To mingle, with a knowing smile, / The goods of others with his own,
Editor's note
Stanza two centers on theft and fraud. Lubin slyly incorporates other people's property into his own, leaving his victims empty-handed — "without cross or pile" signifies not having a single coin. The stanza intensifies the satire: it's not merely that Lubin steals, but that he's *skilled* at it. The refrain "Friar Lubin cannot do it" now implies returning what he's taken, emphasizing the extent and permanence of his corruption.
With flattering words and gentle tone, / To woo and win some guileless maid,
Editor's note
The final stanza introduces sexual predation to Lubin's list of traits. He uses charm to entice innocent women, making outside assistance irrelevant—he's a con artist all on his own. Then the poem hits its most cutting irony: Lubin loudly advocates for sobriety but won't even drink water himself. The final image of a dog drinking water while Lubin turns it down brings him down to a level beneath that of the animal. The refrain strikes again, delivering a harsh judgment.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Friar Lubin
- Lubin isn't merely a bad clergyman; he's a symbol of the hypocrisy found within religious institutions. By portraying him as a friar—someone who has vowed to live in poverty, chastity, and obedience—the poem amplifies every vice he embodies. He highlights the disparity between the Church's teachings and the actions of some of its followers.
- Water
- Water symbolizes sobriety, purity, and self-denial—qualities that a friar is meant to embody. Lubin's refusal to drink it, despite preaching sobriety to others, serves as the poem's most striking depiction of hypocrisy. Even a dog, lacking any moral code, will drink water; Lubin refuses.
- Cross or pile
- A coin flip phrase that refers to heads or tails — essentially, not a single penny. It’s a vivid, relatable image that anchors the satire in the day-to-day world of finance. Lubin doesn’t just take abstractly; he wipes people out entirely.
- The refrain ("Friar Lubin cannot do it")
- The repeated line serves as both punchline and verdict. Each time it comes up, it shuts down any chance of redemption for Lubin. This repetition echoes the way a legal charge is read out loud or how a congregation might respond in unison, adding an ironic twist considering the religious context.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic tetrameter
- Rhyme
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§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
Who actually wrote this poem — Longfellow or Marot?
Both, in a way. Clément Marot, a French poet from the 16th century, penned the original work. Longfellow translated it into English in the 19th century. The title "By Clement Marot" reflects Longfellow's acknowledgment of the source. The concepts and structure belong to Marot; the English phrasing comes from Longfellow.
What is the poem's main message?
The poem portrays Friar Lubin as a hypocrite — adept at every vice yet unable to embrace any virtue. On a larger scale, it's a satirical critique of corrupt clergy who preach one thing but practice another. The core message is that hypocrisy in a religious leader is particularly egregious because they exploit a moral authority that they genuinely lack.
What does 'without cross or pile' mean?
It's an old saying that refers to the two sides of a coin — heads (cross) and tails (pile). When someone says a person is left "without cross or pile," it means they've been left with nothing at all, not a single coin. It's a striking way to express that Lubin wipes people out entirely.
Why is the poem structured with a repeated refrain?
The refrain "Friar Lubin cannot do it" / "Friar Lubin will do it well" establishes a catchy call-and-response rhythm reminiscent of a song or a joke with a solid punchline. Each stanza adds to a growing list of Lubin's talents for mischief, while the refrain delivers the ironic twist. This repetition enhances the satire, and by the third stanza, the conclusion feels definitive.
Is Friar Lubin a real person?
No. "Friar Lubin" is a fictional character created by Marot to represent a type—a mix of corrupt clergy instead of a particular person. The name "Lubin" in French culture is linked to someone simple or foolish, which adds to the mockery: this character isn't a clever villain, just a greedy, self-indulgent hypocrite.
What literary device drives most of the poem's humor?
Irony drives the piece. The poem lauds Lubin's vices as if they are talents, while highlighting his failure to be virtuous as a shortcoming. By portraying wickedness as a form of skill and goodness as something he simply can't achieve, the poem renders his corruption absurd rather than merely evil.
Why does the poem end with the image of a dog drinking water?
It's the poem's sharpest insult. A dog lacks a moral code, no vows, and no pretensions to virtue — yet even a dog will drink water (a symbol of sobriety and purity). Lubin, who has taken religious vows and preaches sobriety, refuses to. This comparison positions him morally beneath an animal, which is as low as satire can get.
What is the historical context for attacking clergy like this?
Marot penned his work during the early Reformation, a time when criticizing the Catholic Church's corruption was both common and perilous. Mocking corrupt friars was a popular literary tactic—Chaucer had done it two centuries prior, and Erasmus was actively doing the same around the same time as Marot. With Protestant sympathies himself, Marot faced exile twice due to his religious beliefs, making this type of poem a significant personal risk.
Citation
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "By Clement Marot." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/by-clement-marot-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). By clement marot. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/by-clement-marot-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn his translation of Clément Marot's satirical portrait, Longfellow employs a relentless refrain and an escalating catalogue of corruption to argue that institutional religious hypocrisy is not merely an individual failing but a structural …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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