The Annotated Edition
Blind Bartimeus by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This poem recounts the Biblical tale of Blind Bartimaeus, a beggar waiting outside Jericho who calls out to Jesus and is healed.
- Core theme
- Faith
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Blind Bartimeus at the gates / Of Jericho in darkness waits;
Editor's note
Longfellow starts by immersing us in the scene: a blind beggar at the gates of Jericho. The term "darkness" serves a dual purpose—it captures Bartimaeus's physical blindness while alluding to a deeper spiritual void. The word "waits" creates a subtle tension; he’s passive and dependent, with nothing to offer except his desperate need. The final Greek line — *Ἰησοῦ, ἐλέησόν με!* — translates to "Jesus, have mercy on me!" and is taken directly from Mark 10:47. By incorporating the original Greek, Longfellow gives this plea a sacred, almost liturgical resonance.
The thronging multitudes increase; / Blind Bartimeus, hold thy peace!
Editor's note
The crowd swells and attempts to silence Bartimaeus — they view him as a nuisance or a barrier. Yet, he raises his voice even more. This stanza highlights the theme of standing firm against societal pressure: those around him insist he is insignificant, but he won’t accept that. The Greek line — *Θάρσει ἔγειραι, φωνεῖ δε!* — translates to "Take heart, rise up, he is calling you!" This marks a shift in the crowd's message from "be quiet" to "go to him," a transformation that Longfellow conveys with a jolt of energy.
Then saith the Christ, as silent stands / The crowd, "What wilt thou at my hands?"
Editor's note
The crowd falls silent — a sharp contrast to the noise that filled the previous stanza. Jesus poses a straightforward question: what do you want? Bartimaeus's response is just as simple: light, sight. There’s no intricate prayer, only a sincere expression of need. The Greek closing — *Ὕπαγε / Ἡ πίστις σου σέσωκέ δε!* — translates to "Go, your faith has saved you," the very words of healing from the Gospel. Longfellow allows the scripture to resonate on its own at this pivotal moment.
Ye that have eyes, yet cannot see, / In darkness and in misery,
Editor's note
The final stanza shifts perspective, speaking directly to the reader. "Ye that have eyes, yet cannot see" turns the metaphor on its head: just because someone can see physically doesn't mean they possess spiritual or moral insight. Longfellow suggests that anyone feeling lost, hopeless, or spiritually numb shares Bartimaeus's plight. He then reiterates the three Greek phrases from the earlier stanzas, distilled into a prayer or mantra — cry out, take heart, go in faith — offering them as a universal guide for anyone facing darkness.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Darkness / Blindness
- Bartimaeus's physical blindness symbolizes a deeper spiritual lostness, despair, or a failure to recognize truth. Longfellow makes this clear in the final stanza when he speaks to those who "have eyes, yet cannot see" — highlighting that inner blindness is the true focus of the poem.
- The Gates of Jericho
- The city gate serves as a boundary — a spot between the inside and outside, inclusion and exclusion. Bartimaeus occupies this space, not completely part of the city but not entirely separate from it either. It reflects his marginal social status and his place on the brink of a transformative encounter.
- The Greek Phrases
- By quoting the original Greek text of the Gospel of Mark instead of translating it, Longfellow treats these words as sacred objects, emphasizing their sound and historical significance alongside their meaning. They act like liturgical refrains, repeated in the final stanza as a prayer that invites any reader to join in.
- The Crowd
- The crowd symbolizes the social pressure that urges the desperate and marginalized to remain silent. Their efforts to silence Bartimaeus only make his determination more heroic, and their abrupt change of heart — "He calleth thee!" — illustrates how quickly public opinion can change.
- Light / Sight
- Bartimaeus asks for light and the ability to see again. In the poem's reasoning, gaining physical sight goes hand in hand with receiving faith and salvation. Light serves as the poem's main reward, symbolizing clarity, hope, and spiritual completeness.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AABBB AABBB AABBB AAABBB
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem about?
It recounts the Gospel story of Bartimaeus, a blind beggar sitting outside Jericho. When he hears that Jesus is passing by, he calls out for mercy and is healed. Longfellow uses this story to illustrate a larger message: anyone who feels spiritually lost or in despair shares Bartimaeus's experience, and the same path — persistent faith — is available to them.
What do the Greek phrases mean?
Each Greek phrase comes directly from the Gospel of Mark (10:47–52). Ἰησοῦ, ἐλέησόν με! translates to "Jesus, have mercy on me!" Θάρσει ἔγειραι, φωνεῖ δε! means "Take heart, rise up, he is calling you!" Ὕπαγε / Ἡ πίστις σου σέσωκέ δε! translates to "Go, your faith has saved you." Longfellow retains the Greek to maintain the weight and authority of the original scripture.
Why does Longfellow use Greek instead of translating everything into English?
Longfellow was a professor of languages at Harvard and understood that the Greek of the New Testament held a sacred resonance that a simple English translation would lose. The Greek phrases serve as liturgical refrains — they evoke the sound of something you'd encounter in a church service, which is precisely the effect he aimed to achieve. They also lend the poem a timeless, universal quality, suggesting that the words are part of all history, not just one poet's interpretation.
What is the message of the final stanza?
The final stanza shifts the poem's focus outward, speaking directly to the reader. Longfellow suggests that if you can see physically yet still feel lost or miserable, then you are spiritually blind, much like Bartimaeus, who was literally blind. He offers a solution: remember the three key moments of the story — cry out, take heart, go in faith — which serve as a personal prayer or reminder that healing is within reach for anyone who asks sincerely.
What is the rhyme scheme and meter?
Each stanza consists of six lines and adheres to a structured AABBCC rhyme scheme, featuring pairs of rhyming couplets. The meter is iambic tetrameter, with four beats per line, creating a steady, hymn-like rhythm. This regularity is intentional, allowing the poem to resonate like a song or a psalm, fitting for a narrative inspired by scripture.
Who was Bartimaeus in the Bible?
Bartimaeus shows up in Mark 10:46–52. He’s a blind beggar sitting along the road outside Jericho. When he learns that Jesus is passing by, he calls out for mercy, ignoring the crowd's attempts to silence him. Jesus stops, asks him what he wants, and heals him. His name means "son of Timaeus" in Aramaic. He's one of the few individuals mentioned by name in the Gospels who was healed, indicating that the early Christian community held onto his story.
Is this poem religious or can non-religious readers get something from it?
The poem is deeply connected to Christian scripture and reflects Longfellow's Protestant faith. However, its emotional heart—a desperate, marginalized individual voicing their anguish amidst a crowd's indifference and finding a response—resonates as a universal human experience, transcending specific beliefs. The final stanza's portrayal of those who "have eyes, yet cannot see" resonates with anyone who has experienced spiritual or emotional numbness, not just those who actively practice Christianity.
How does this poem compare to Longfellow's other religious poems?
Longfellow penned several poems that directly explore Christian themes, such as "The Cross of Snow" and parts of Christus: A Mystery. "Blind Bartimeus" is shorter and more hymn-like compared to his lengthy narratives, and his inclusion of original Greek text is quite rare. This poem aligns closely with his tendency to take a single biblical story and transform it into a lyrical piece that serves as a meditation or devotional practice.
Citation
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Blind Bartimeus." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/blind-bartimeus-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Blind bartimeus. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/blind-bartimeus-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Blind Bartimeus,' Longfellow transforms a New Testament healing narrative into a lyric argument about the nature of faith itself: genuine sight, the poem insists, is not optical but volitional, achieved not by miracle alone but by the …
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