The Annotated Edition
Baael's stone obscene: Human sacrifices were offered on the by James Russell Lowell
This passage comes from Lowell's "Ode Recited at the Harvard Commemoration" (1865), particularly the section dedicated to Abraham Lincoln that Lowell included after delivering the poem.
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altars of Baael. (_Jeremiah_ xix, 5.)
Editor's note
The epigraph ties the entire stanza to the Old Testament. Baal was a Canaanite god that required child sacrifice — Lowell connects those ancient altars directly to the battlefields of the Civil War. The Union's young men, much like the children offered to Baal, were drawn into a cause they didn’t select. This creates a tone of solemn, nearly biblical reflection even before the first line of the poem is read.
147-205. This strophe was not in the ode as delivered...
Editor's note
The editorial note reveals an important insight into the nature of great writing: Lowell recited the ode during Harvard's 1865 commemoration for its Civil War dead, and it was only *afterward*—still charged from the moment—that he penned this Lincoln passage. His editor, Scudder, refers to it as a 'climax,' and it’s tough to argue with that assessment. The strophe feels like a natural part of the ode rather than an afterthought, which is precisely what Scudder means when he states it is 'completely imbedded in the structure of the ode.'
In a letter to Richard Watson Gilder, Lowell says...
Editor's note
Lowell is standing up for himself here, doing so with a gentle but firm touch. He wants to make it clear that he appreciated Lincoln before it became trendy among his peers — the 'Brahmin caste,' referring to Boston's educated elite, who often regarded Lincoln as a coarse westerner. The letter shows that Lowell's admiration was earned through personal reflection, not merely a patriotic instinct. This honesty adds depth to his portrayal of Lincoln: it’s a man writing about someone he learned to understand more clearly over time.
It is a singular fact that the other great New England poets...
Editor's note
This closing editorial observation hits hard. Longfellow, Whittier, and Holmes — three titans of American poetry — hardly mentioned the president who shaped their time. But Lowell did, and he did it in a memorable way. The note isn't boastful; it just presents the fact, making it even more impactful. It implies that Lowell's ability to bridge class divides in his imagination distinguished him from his contemporaries.
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- Baal's altar
- The altar of Baal, known for the child sacrifices in the Old Testament, represents the battlefields of the Civil War — sites where the young lost their lives to overwhelming and age-old forces. It portrays the war not as a glorious endeavor but as a grim, ancient sacrifice.
- The Brahmin caste
- Lowell's term refers to Boston's educated upper class. It symbolizes cultural blindness — those who should have been the first to recognize Lincoln's greatness were, due to their privilege, the last to acknowledge it.
- Lincoln himself
- Lincoln in this strophe isn’t just a historical figure; he embodies a uniquely American greatness: self-made, unrefined, and more authentically reflective of the nation than any aristocrat could ever be.
- The ode's occasion
- Harvard's Commemoration ceremony symbolizes the transition from private sorrow to public remembrance — a moment when we formally acknowledge the deceased's place in history. The addition of the Lincoln passage by Lowell after the ceremony implies that the event inspired feelings that the original speech couldn't fully capture.
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